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Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Hi Ani,.
Welcome to Forum.This is an amazingly scripted one shot. I am personally not in favor of any one character currently as I feel they have erred some or the other time. Being a SwaSan fan, this one was a bit emotional read.I like your representation of Swara's perspective. She finally decided to leave him till she can forgive herself. I do feel bad for Sanskaar here towards the end.All in all, brilliant writing, especially since this is your first attempt. Keep writing.CheersSharon
Hey Sharon,
Thank you so much dear.
Really glad to know you liked this one.
I am little biased towards Sanskar but I agree on the fact that they both have made mistakes and neither of them is thinking about the damage they caused to their relation.
Thanks again, for using such lovely words for my firsr os here.
- Ani
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