SwaSan OS: 'Stay by my side and it all that matters [A/N on pg 5] - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: showrav24

Hi Nita dear
what can I say as usual beautiful os dear.
How badly wish something like happen in the show.
loved sanskar stand for swara & her realisation how deeply she broke him & her silence support.
greedy me update more & more.
Take care dear
Bye
love u.



Thanks Showrav..Really happy to know you liked this one as well .. I so badly wanted it happen and we got Swara who forget him the next second😡😡😡.. I am running out of patience with Swara showrav, i am trying so hard to make an way to give them some sort of reunion or hope in my OS but believe me Swara is testing my pateince so very much😆..Even i was surprised by myself when i posted this Os as i ended it in a very positive note which i was not planning to do..Then tried to write another OS but it didnt work out because i didnt like the way it turned out to be..So while this track made me creative , it sure destroyed swara in the show.. I am glad to know you liked the OS showrav..Write more well i am struggling now to write anything .. Let see..If i did write you know i will send you the PM but me not thinking of writing anything as of now


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Nita


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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Nita my doll...
Im the only one reaching stops soo late...finally commenting...i feeling a little alienated...anyways...

Coming to OS..it was quite hopefull..one thing which we are not after watching serial n witnessing stupid decisions n reasons of every character...this was indeed great...sanky how hard he tried could not stop himself from helping her...n swara ..im glad she understoodher mistake that it wont be easy to compensate for the lost time...but atleast she understood sanky thats important...n not simply went from his room to help ragini..i was soo worried that she left...but she was in room...thank God...last part was amazing...swaragini convo was just plain truth.even if lucky is found..still destination up to sanky will be far...she had to work hard..n sanky will forgive...im quite hopefull..

Thank u for this...

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Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

I loved it, and for someone who is currently still quite upset with Swara, that is saying a lot. Sanskaar staying by her side, is nothing new or unexpected. He would do that, in some way or the other, visibly or silently.Hi Nyna dearest. Sorry for such a delay in replying back😭. Well i crossed upset now i am in the territory of hate😆... Well Sanskar being Sanskar is expected including him being so forgiving towards her but how i wish he didnt do it 😆

The way he did he here was typical him, wanted to soothe her hurt but knew that he had no right to do so, after all she had taken away that right. But there was no way he would be standing quiet nor could he allow her to be there while he took a stand. Yeah i cant accept him doing nothing when Swara was insulted.. It not in his nature to stand and do nothing when the love of his life is hurt..

Swara in your story gives me hope, that finally she realised her act cannot be solved with Laksh being found. Her introspection, her conclusion and most importantly her act of being silent is a step towards understanding. A very small step and keeping quiet, not blaming him is a small thing, but at least she realised, which is what Sanskaar appreciates. As he feels, maybe there is hope.Well in our story we always have hope Nyna ,sadly that not what we get in the show... Yeah i hoped that once we see her recognizing it she will slowly mend her relationship with Sanskar ..

Ragini, very small role, but appears to be genuinely concerned for Swara despite her primary focus being Laksh.Well we can make them genuine unlike the show😆

Finally, I am not so opposed to Sujata, (not watching the serial but as per your OS), I completely cannot blame her for choosing her unlucky daughter over her errant daughter in law. I am not supporting Uttara's in laws but only referring to her being upset at what she feels is Sanskaar choosing to stand by Swara. I would like to think that it is also prompted by her frustration, after all she is watching her son descend to darkness because Swara walked out so would be angry that Sanskaar taking her side caused her daughter's engagement to be broken. I hope you get what I am trying to say.I get what you are saying.. I really do..And i dont blame Sujatha for standing by his daughter, i just blame her for choosing an family like Chirag 😉... See it her daughter life no one should make such an mistake

But nice OS.Thanks dearest😳 and this might shock you but i am trying to write an sequel to it ..😆.. So be prepared for more torture from me.. But do let me know if you are okay with it or not in the post i just posted in the main forum 😕..As i am bit worried about it

love,
Nyna


Love

Nita

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys.. I know I have yet to reply back to some lovely comments and I am so sorry about that.. Will try to catch up with them ASAP.. Meanwhile I need you opinion about something.. Those who read this OS.. If you don't mind check the link I post below and let me know if you want an sequel to this OS..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys i am sorry for not yet replying back to some Lovely comments.. Really sorry ..Will try to get back to them asap..

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Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Swara and sanskar loves each other.But circumstances always create problems in their life.The sepration from his love was unbearable...and swara's condition was same.
When someone insult his swara he will never tolerate it.
It was a Beautiful os.There was a new ray of hope

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