SwaSan OS: 'Stay by my side and it all that matters [A/N on pg 5]

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 8 years ago

readjng this os of yours gave me hope that everything in this series will b better once again...the anguish that Sanskaar has to go through n everybody blaming him for Uttara's broken engagement...poor guy...Sujata is seriously very annoying now...but nevertheless loved your OS dear...they say silent support n comfort isnd best...

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 8 years ago

Why everybody loves to blame Sanskaar for every damn thing? Why don't anyone understand him? I'm just trying to figure out how much this guy is suffering from every aspect!

Bt atleast Swara did understand him alittle! Hope is still there!

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Nita,

I loved it, and for someone who is currently still quite upset with Swara, that is saying a lot. Sanskaar staying by her side, is nothing new or unexpected. He would do that, in some way or the other, visibly or silently.

The way he did he here was typical him, wanted to soothe her hurt but knew that he had no right to do so, after all she had taken away that right. But there was no way he would be standing quiet nor could he allow her to be there while he took a stand.

Swara in your story gives me hope, that finally she realised her act cannot be solved with Laksh being found. Her introspection, her conclusion and most importantly her act of being silent is a step towards understanding. A very small step and keeping quiet, not blaming him is a small thing, but at least she realised, which is what Sanskaar appreciates. As he feels, maybe there is hope.

Ragini, very small role, but appears to be genuinely concerned for Swara despite her primary focus being Laksh.

Finally, I am not so opposed to Sujata, (not watching the serial but as per your OS), I completely cannot blame her for choosing her unlucky daughter over her errant daughter in law. I am not supporting Uttara's in laws but only referring to her being upset at what she feels is Sanskaar choosing to stand by Swara. I would like to think that it is also prompted by her frustration, after all she is watching her son descend to darkness because Swara walked out so would be angry that Sanskaar taking her side caused her daughter's engagement to be broken. I hope you get what I am trying to say.

But nice OS.

love,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nita my dear 🤗🤗

I loved it a lot. 🤗 Sanskaar can never see Swara hurt or in pain, the way he shielded her and gave a fitting reply to Gayatri was awesome. And he went against Sujju for Swara's sake as well. He always does put Swara first, take her side no matter what the state of their relationship may be.

I loved that symmetry you created . ...Swara overhearing Sujju's angry talk with Sanskaar; and hen Sanskaar inadvertently overhearing Swara's talk with Ragini. The fact that Swara had chosen to spend some time with him, stay by his side and not immediately rush off to Ragini on a 'find lakshya' mission, really touched him. It was two souls wordlessly giving comfort to each other.

Lovely touch. I shall unres on your other OS's over the course of the coming weekend. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

Guys waking up in the morning and finding such lovely comment and likes did make me one really happy person.. I will try to reply back to them asap..Just letting you know i really really cherish those comments..

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Nita

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nita🤗

I just loved this OS .. Perfect fit for the current scenario . I would love to see this happen. Swara chose to stay with Sanskaar over her behna .😛.😃 How good it feels and her realization that Once Laksh comes back , Its not going to very easy between her and Sanskaar.. I would to love see the same in show.

Sanskaar's reaction is juts like his character but I really doubt that happening in show . So over all .. not juts Sanskaar but I am also left with hope .. Thanks for that .

Love

Lucky

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anika2

@anika2

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Posted: 8 years ago

it's awesome dear.. loved it. hope something like that happen in show too.

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Gayathri

@Gayathri93

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Posted: 8 years ago

hai nita

i loved it..The feelings of swara and sanskar is beautifully portrayed here. sanskar eventhough angry with swara cant see her getting humilated.atlast swara understand her mistakes.i loved it when she decide to stand for sanskar once not for her behena .

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Its so soothing os..
Jst wow!
As alwys sanskar gv a damn 2socity.swara z his wrld so he stnd 4her..
M happy tht atleast in ur stry swara thnk abt sanskar nt ragini,she stayd wid him tho its 4smtime.
Atleast she realize laksh's cmbk cnt mend thr relatnshp.outside sanskar z frustratd,angry bt 4m inside he z broken,hurt by her..&her silent small suport atleast gv him sm hope...
Lvly os nita..i jst wish,jst wish tht swara realize her mistake.
Write more dear..

Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 8 years ago

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