The Swara Narratives--'Solaris Rising'--Part 2 UPDT PG 12 04/11/16

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Darlin🤗

Landed in late😆 yet to read .. was stuck with PS ..😆.😉 Cdnt resist ,swasan were too😉

Dinner time .. will rush back and you can defo use the siggies Viji 😉..my pleasure🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m
Darlin🤗

Landed in late😆 yet to read .. was stuck with PS ..😆.😉 Cdnt resist ,swasan were too😉
Dinner time .. will rush back and you can defo use the siggies Viji 😉..my pleasure🤗

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Lucky

Those works were beautiful Lucky. 🤗😳 So dreamy and intense. I will load them on tomorrow morning, to the end of Part 1 of "Solaris". That pose and the way they are gazing at each other, I really would love to use that to symbolise the climax scene of Part 1. I am so fortunate that you chose to make these today. ☺️

Need to also load those lovely artworks by Nynu, to the end of the Chapter in "Sanskaar's Monologues". Will do both tomorrow morning.

Loads of Love

Viji

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I loved it

I loved swaras idea of stopping sanskar from drinking that was the only way to stop sanskar from drinking no other way would have worked it was wonderful how do you get such amazing ideas ???👏 👏 it was wonderful the flashback to swaras realisation then finally swara realising what she needs to do and the last part was so intense

This action of swara will definitely stop sanskar from drinking because sanskar will never let swara drink his love is like this he can hurt himself but not swara

Again 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 it is such a wonderful story

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

Thanks Mystic 🤗

Glad to know you loved it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sanya17
I loved it
I loved swaras idea of stopping sanskar from drinking that was the only way to stop sanskar from drinking no other way would have worked it was wonderful how do you get such amazing ideas ???👏 👏 it was wonderful the flashback to swaras realisation then finally swara realising what she needs to do and the last part was so intense
This action of swara will definitely stop sanskar from drinking because sanskar will never let swara drink his love is like this he can hurt himself but not swara

Again 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 it is such a wonderful story

My Dearest Sanya 🤗🤗

Just so touched to know that you loved this chapter. And I was thrilled that you liked the intensity of the scenes as well as Swara's idea to make Sanskaar stop drinking. 😳

The idea just came to me, that this was the only real way Swara could force Sanskaar to stop---by threatening that she herself would start drinking if he didn't stop. Sanskaar would never be able to bear that, because try as he might to hate Swara, he really can't see her in pain.

I am feeling truly blessed by the warmth of your feedback.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aahana133
Awsm one...
Tnx for pm..

Thanks Aahana 🤗

Glad to know you loved it.

Cheers

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Hey Viji,
The beginning was absolutely marvellous, the name of the chapter the other side of midnight is so beautiful itself and then Swara watching the coming twilight, the rways of light fading into darkness was somewhat a symbol of her life and those tiny stars the way to stop her life from facing into it completely..

The memories of the night when they become one in true senses was so passionate,not only the terrace every part of their room has a memory attached to it the beauty of your words enhances the charm even more.. And then the next memory of the naughty Sanskar and Swara calling her Nauni was just so cute and powerful at the same time, the fact that they always run away to terrace forming it a kind if their own personal paradise was so loving, the chemistry is so blazing in intensity, they so fit into each other like the missing pieces of a puzzle made for each other, this memory literally sent sparks flying all around..

And then Swara trying to stop herself from crying and not to dissolve herself in remorse and guilt was very brave, at point like this people often tend to break down completely losing themselves, you know you make me learn so many thing in my person life my your stories, this side of Swara is so powerful to never give up it inspire me that it will do nothing to go into self pity, it will be good when we will go though it and emerge stronger than ever..

Sanskar is very right on his part, she always have tended to place all others before him, as has always found him standing with her but this time she has casted and tossed his heart and feelings so badly, no one can imagine the hurt he must have gone through when he asked only one thing from her to have faith in him and Swara literally drove stake right through his trust ripping his heart and soul apart wounding him so deep that it would really take all her efforts to bring him back..

This Sanskar is just so cold, terrify the hell out of anyone but punishing Swara is like punishing himself that's why he could never take Swara being away from him, he want s to punish her but still keep her in front of his eyes he loves her so damn much,his love defies all boundaries..but atleast Swara was able to realize that in stance of doing the greater good she has left Sanskar behind in the depth of bitterness and to avenge himself he has lost his light and became so cold, the anguish of Swara to see that she was the cause of Sanskar condition and she was ready to take a his venomous taunt even it provide him little bit relief was really painful.. What they have come to due to her one decision..

The turmoil Sanskar was in is so heart breaking wanting to punish her and yet losing in the longing he has for her, his tears to see her go, his anger from not being able to stop his heart from loving her with such an intensity, the war between her heart and mind, him being not strong away to stay away from her, he loves her so much, my heart was breaking to see him like this, the anguish portrayed is absolutely beautiful..the pain and agony of his depicted through his every gesture is described wonderfully..

Will unres for rest of the part as soon as will be able to read it..

Love,
Piya

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Those works were beautiful Lucky. 🤗😳 So dreamy and intense. I will load them on tomorrow morning, to the end of Part 1 of "Solaris". That pose and the way they are gazing at each other, I really would love to use that to symbolise the climax scene of Part 1. I am so fortunate that you chose to make these today. ☺️

Need to also load those lovely artworks by Nynu, to the end of the Chapter in "Sanskaar's Monologues". Will do both tomorrow morning.

Loads of Love

Viji

Wow..👏👍🏼. I so want to see this Swara and her remorse .. not much expectations but atleast for once ,accepting she was wrong ,atlesat a part of it which I have no hopes on show.

I absolutely loved it Viji.😳.The start of it .. The other side of midnight - reminds me Sidney Sheldon a huge fan of his😳I love the way he weaves his plot ..and title brought back my college days 😛.. How meaningful is that .. There's an other side to midnight. Given Swara is witness of darkness sunny is inflicting on himself and reason for that darkness, she is only one who can lead him back to light and her way of doing it .. Sherni style😆..Getting drunk ..I so so loved Laksh's reaction when swara asked for whiskey🤣 A good note to start.

I loved those memories ...esp the long one😳😉.. and nauni 😆..😆..For a minute VK crossed my mind .. I was like nahi nahi ..ye Sanskaar hain 🤣.I had to remind that quite a few times.

And that one paragraph of Sanskaar's pain 👏.. That's the highlight for me..teared mt heart out for sunny ...you have got this unique flare of capturing and expressing the emotions of characters and those little nuances .. brilliant and in love with it⭐️👏

and that scene between Swara and Sanskaar ..👏👏⭐️I can feel the heat between them and his need to inflict punishment on her ..but its more like a torture on himself .. He hurts her and he bleeds ..😭😭 ..My poor baby..by next part all is going to be well na

I loved it .loads ❤️.😛. Swara's journey's towards Sunny ..her Solaris😉..Should I mention I am alredy excited for next part 😉😳😛

Lucky