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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Plz continue. I am waiting.

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thanks for replying
next part updated
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Oh yes please...please do continue!!

thanks ya for liking it
i have updated the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
👍🏼 done
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Magar1992

pls continue
n update soon

👍🏼updated the first part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Aftr a lng time sush..
Pl go ahead.eagerly waiting..

u do remember me😃yeyieee
i thought nobody would remember me ...i have updated the first part do read and let me know howz the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plz continue soon.. It was awesome 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Do continue. As for now I loved the prologue..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Ohoo!suspense suspense.
Love it

thank god u loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2a



Lakshya :sanskar they will be here any minute

In his room in front of the big projector screen was sanskar sitting on the sofa watching lakshya giving him the msg of the couples arrival. His face was devoid of any expression and it seemed he was not blinking to avoid any detail.he didn't want to miss anything .

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A woman clutching the hands of a man tightly and screaming in pain...there is blood everywhere

Plzz ...i cant bear ...plz

And she screams again

Swaraaa!!!!

Nidhi places her hand on her husband shoulder who had come out of his zombie like state inside the lift calling out swaras name

Arjun:I m sorry .u know na that...

Nidhi:I know it will be difficult to talk to him but it will be lot easier trust me.i m thankful that sanskar or ragini are not there because it would have been very difficult to face them n tell them the truth

Arjun:u r right but we have to be in control of our emotion.we have to tell them everything n i know it will difficult thing to understand or believe

I m just imagining the possible outcome of our todays meeting n I m still clueless

nidhi:maa had called when u were talking to the receptionist

arjun:any ...

nidhi:no no its still the same ...she just called to check on us and wanted to know when we will return...its good she visited this time or it would have been difficult


The lift stops n slowly they come out of it to approach lakhya mheshwaris hotel room

They tightly hold hands for one last time before ringing the bell

Kolkata:

Ragini:aur kitna waqt lagega unko ane mein

Sanskar :ragini agar tum sab dekhna chahti ho toh patience rakho

Ragini:sanskar par kya aisa karna thik rahega un logo ko yeh bi nahi pata ki aap ne lakshya ke kamre mein camera lagaya hai aur hum unhe yaha Kolkata se baite baithe dekh rahe hai.agar unhe pata chal gaya toh kahin who wahan se chale na jayen aur...

Sanskar:aur kuch nahi ragini aaj kuch galat nahi hoga agar meine aisa nahi kiya hota toh kya tum iss chinta mein reh pati ki waha kya ho raha hoga so plz ab shant ho kar wait karo

He has to pay attention on whats happening today...he might be on angry mode since the day swara left him blaming him for luckys disappearance but to punish her was his right not someone else not even god..n he cant stand the feeling of losing her forever

Edited by sushups - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice..
Bt short updt.*angry face*
mere kuch palle nh para.adha adhura laga.

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