come back swasan ss part 2a pg 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys I had encountered some youtube video when I was doing some time pass...I was shocked n I kind of got n idea for a new ss for swasan

Lakhya was waiting in his hotel room .he was nervous for various reasons, he so much wanted ragini in this trip but they had wanted to meet him alone especially without sanskar and ragini.

2months back when he came back to maheshwari house he had not realized how bad the situations were due to his disappearance...his sister was getting married ,ragini left the house ..along with swara...and swara and sanskar relationship was practically no more all because of him. They hated each other and he couldn't stand it.

Once all the happiness of him coming back died down sanskar and swara started there own word fight which was painful to watch . all he could see was anger but there was something different in swaras eyes more of hurt which she concealed quickly .

Sanskar:meri sabse badi galti kya hai pata hai swara ki maine tumse pyaar kiya aur tumhe apne samne dekne se mujhe har baar apni galti yaad ati hai

Swara froze : thik hai sanskar ainda mein tumhe yeh taqleef nahi dungi...main tumhare liye itna toh kari hi sakti hun sanskar

And saying that she wiped her tears n rushed out of home ...ragini too followed her n later he got to know that she went to a friends place in Mumbai to organize two wedding ...that was the last time he had seen swara.

She didn't come back Kolkata n its been 4 weeks since she had talked to ragini...nobody knew where she was ...she was missing


should i continue?????

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Posted: 8 years ago
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continue
but where she went is she kidnaped by anyone
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Plz continue. I am waiting.
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Oh yes please...please do continue!!
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pls continue
n update soon
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Aftr a lng time sush..
Pl go ahead.eagerly waiting..
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part 1

Lakhya was waiting in his hotel room .he was nervous for various reasons, he so much wanted ragini in this trip but they had wanted to meet him alone especially without sanskar and ragini.

2months back when he came back to maheshwari house he had not realized how bad the situations where due to his disappearance...his sister was getting married ,ragini left the house ..along with swara...and swara and sanskar relationship was practically no more all because of him. They hated each other and he couldn't stand it.

Once all the happiness of him coming back died down sanskar and swara started there own word fight which was painful to watch . all he could see was anger but there was something different in swaras eyes more of hurt which she concealed quickly .

Sanskar:meri sabse badi galti kya hai pata hai swara ki maine tumse pyaar kiya aur tumhe apne samne dekne se mujhe har baar apni galti yaad ati hai

Swara froze : thik hai sanskar ainda mein tumhe yeh taqleef nahi dungi...main tumhare liye itna toh kari hi sakti hun sanskar

And saying that she wiped her tears n rushed out of home ...ragini too followed her n later he got to know that she went to a friends place in Mumbai to organize two wedding ...that was the last time he had seen swara.

She didn't come back Kolkata n its been 34weeks since she had talked to ragini...nobody knew where she was ...she was missing

The last call from swara was shockingly to sanskar.it was karachauth and everyone was having dinner pretty late, ma had given her kasam to sanskar to join everyone for dinner.thats when everyone noticed sanskar phone was buzzing after about 20 calls sanskar finally picked up the call ...but it didn't go down well ...as without listening to y she had called sanskar screamed at her and disconnected it that's when ragini panicked. He had noticed when sanskar said swara when he received the call ,raginis face had turned pale but he couldn't understand y .but seeing her panic was not what he was expecting

Ragini: sanskar ..swara ne aapko phone kiya tha ?kya kaha usne ?apne phone kyun kaat diya ?

No one could understand y was ragini behaving this way

Sanskar:tumhe jaan na hai toh apni behen se khud phone kar ke puchlo ragini .mein uska PA nahi hun

Saying this sanskar started to leave the dinning area

Ragini in tears:main nahi kar sakti kyunki swara 1 hafte se lapata hai...uska phone ek hafte se band hai aur aaj usne aapko call kiya sanskar

Sanskar was shocked to know that swara was missing:kya bakwaas kar rahi ho .swara baadi mein hai

Ragini:nahi sanskar swara pichle 1mahine se swara kolkatta mein nahi hai woh Mumbai gayi thi wedding plan karne...who mujhe har do din mein ek baar call karti thi par pichle 1 hafte se uska phone hi nahi lag raha meine uske dost ko bhi call karne ki koshish ki thi par who bhi band aa rha hai

Ragini called swara on her cell n it was switched off again

Sujata:chori jey ke keh rahi hai tu?

Ap:ragini tumne hume kuch bataya kyun nahi..aur kya iss baat ke bare mein shekhar ji ko pata hai

Ragini:maa baaba sab jante hain .har roze issi aas mein rehte hai ki swara ki awaz sunne ko milegi

Sanskar looks with anger and painful expression to ragini: toh yeh baat tum ab bata rahi ho hume...agar tumne pehle hi bataya hota toh hum investigation jaldi shuru kar sakte the

Ragini:par aapko toh meri behen se koi lena dena nahi tha naa phir itni phikar kyun...aapko toh apne ghusse mein yeh bhi sud nahi ki meri behen Kolkata mein hi nahi hai.ap please mujhe yeh batiye ki usne aapse kya kaha

Sanskar:ragini plz tum...

Ragini:plz sanskar aap mujhe batayiye meri behen ne aapse kya kaha

Sanskar:usne kuch nahi kaha ...uske kehne se pehle hi maine phone kaat diya

Ragini breaks down .noone could console her

The only chance for her to know where her sister was lost again

She kept on trying swaras phone hoping for a miracle to happen but all she got was a voice saying the phone is switched off.in her frustration she threw the phone

Lakshya : ragini plz shant ho jao swara ko kuch nahi hoga

Ragini: kuch nahi hoga ...kuch nahi hoga.lakshya aap jante bhi hai apke jane ke baad swara pa r kya beeti hai .humari behen humse kuch kehti nahi thi par humne iss sab ka assar uski seht par hote hue dekha hai ...aapko pata hai jis din who Mumbai gayi uski mansik halat thik nahi thi ..hum toh use akele jane nahi dena chahte the par baba ne hume rok diya yeh keh kar ki uska mahaul badlega toh shyad who thik ho jayegi ...hume baba ki baat nahi sunni chayiye thi.jab hum apke jaane ke gam mein tut chuke the tab swara ne hume joda hume sambhala par humne kya kiya humne toh humari behen hone ka koi faraz nahi adaa kiya

Humse yeh kya ho gaya

Lakshya comes out of his thoughts when his rooms phone rings

Receptionist :Sir some Mr and Mrs arjun bedi are here to meet should I send them up to your room or would u like to meet them in our restaurant

Lakshya:no no plz send them to my room

he looked towards the vase with freshly changed flowers which had a camera hidden

Lakshya :sanskar they will be here any minute

Edited by sushups - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is very short story will end in next part or next two part
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Awesome and interesting continue soon,...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinnni1992

continue

but where she went is she kidnaped by anyone

updated in page 2
nope she is not kidnapped ,u will get to know in part2

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