SwaSan OS: I Am Not Perfect (Updated )(19/10/16 ) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: NitaReid



I was lying i do worry about it a lot😭😭.. Will try to get back soon😊😊


Hey darlo! Stop worrying! 😳 Take ur time Nita dearest. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Hey darlo! Stop worrying! 😳 Take ur time Nita dearest. 🤗


I know.. It just that i have three of my works to be replied back .And i love reading all those lovely comments but i am so behind in all of them 😭.. Plus my unres list is growing everyday and i barely scratched the surface on my new OS and BTM update... And i made huge plans for weekend but tomorrow i am busy..So to know i wont get anything done this weekend and it is worrisome but dont worry i am actually cool or trying to be cool 😆...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome OS
Beautifuly written ... loved it


thnks for pm


Thanks Anu dearest 🤗..Really happy to know you liked the OS..


Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: showrav24

nice update Nita dear. How r u dear?
loved swasan moments their convo I wish like this swara choose sanskar once in the show.
waiting for u next creation & update.
Bye.



I am good Showrav...Just very behind my schedule i planned for this weekend... Thanks ..I am really happy to know you liked the OS😃.. Well i wished for it too that why i wrote it..I still cant believe she didnt choose him in the show 😆... Glad to know you liked SwaSan moments in the OS..My next creation ..Yeah sure maybe by next year..Sorry i feel like i am gonna be way behind in my update of BTM or the new OS.. That how i feel today ..Maybe i will get it done soon i suppose 😆 ..


With Love

Nita


P.S- My network is horrible..So i accidentally posted it in my another OS too😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NitaReid



I know.. It just that i have three of my works to be replied back .And i love reading all those lovely comments but i am so behind in all of them😭.. Plus my unres list is growing everyday and i barely scratched the surface on my new OS and BTM update... And i made huge plans for weekend but tomorrow i am busy..So to know i wont get anything done this weekend and it is worrisome but dont worry i am actually cool or trying to be cool😆...


Yes...cool down dear and don't try to take much pressure. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear nita...
Firstly I owe you an apology for the late reply...have been a silent reader of all your work over the last few week's says months...but what can I do when I read the prologue of this lovely os is just made me want to comment..


Word such as awesome rocking and beautifully written are not enough for this wonderful piece that you have written...let me just say this journey was magic in the sense that it has perfectly explored the insecurity that they have in there relationship...I loved the way that you explored the individualinks personalities of swara and sanskaar and I loved they way that they both had a heart to heart about what they really felt...

It was nice to see that swara finally came to her husband and for once did what she thought was right for her relationship over everything else. ..

The bond reflected between ram and swara was sweet and it always portrayed what I felt when I watched him on the show...like sanskaar he is guy that speaks through his eyes rather then words...loved that he was protective of his son and that on return sanskaar also shared that feeling. ...

Again you have shown that sanskaar is a man of many shades but one emotion that he hold close to him.is that he doesn't force his loved once to chose between him and his family...He values what they feel as the most important part of there connection...loved the bond shown between the two that they knew some thing is wrong and that they had to fix it. ..The conversation of there own dreams was a nice read...

The end once again ended with a cliff hanger and somehow I really wanted to see what would have happened after uttra wedding...

The best message of the os was that I'd love is true then any hurdle can be dealt with and any mistakes understanding can be cleared as trust is the most strongest emotions that one needs to keep the relationship alive...Thanks for sharing this message in this lovely piece. ..

Sorry I do not comment enough on your work but let me say I appreciate every pm I receive...


Hope to read more of your work soon...

Take care...

Razia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
@razia - Your comment did make me super happy and elated.. Thanks dear.. I still have lot of lovely comments from this OS to get back too.. Will reply back to your lovely comment ASAP.. Just letting you know.. You made my Sunday with your comment

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: StarySKY


Nita .. 🤗Khushi dearest..🤗

I am in a good mood today .. well I am having my day off today ( I was sleeping all day long ) , so I can work on my Un-Res .. 😃...Well i am good too.. But my unres list well let not talk about it 😆... I am just happy i get to reply back to some lovely comments now😳

This OS turend out so beautifully ..
You did present the SwaSan we know .. Thanks dearest..I was trying real hard to hold on to the SwaSan i loved .. And i had to write this one to keep them alive atleast in our minds..


The conversation they had in your story is the one they needed before they start their " We have no realtion .. " thing 🤢 ( I was hell angry on them that time 😡) .. I get Sanskar started that dialogue but well i never expected swara to give it back🤢... This is not the swasan i fell in love with, but i am gonna keep holding on the mirage in my minds of them as long as i can ..As i said their realtion was indeed on breaks and they really needed an conversation like that..In show we wont get that i know😡 😡 😡


But still I would be happy if It was about teaching Swara a lesson , I want her to suffer 😈( I think I am going a little overboard 😆, I am hell angry on her especially after yesterday episode 😡 .. I think I should demand an OS from someone not quit sure from who )Feeling are very mutual Khushi dear.. I was about to write the convo part and i struggled a lot as i watched the episode a little earlier😆 😆..But thankfully i had it all planned before so it worked in my favor.. Well I was thinking about an OS an sequel to Am i an good brother , the title is Am i an good wife😉.. Unfortunately it still in works..No clue when it will materialize😆

The OS ..
I really loved it ..
So swara didn't choose the family over Sanskar ..
The thing that they are not perfect and accepting the other person with his/her faults ..
Actually I can't find words to describe how I feel ..
So let me just say ..
It turned out more beautiful than I imagined it to be ..
I really love it .. 😳Thanks Khushi dear..I am happy you liked it 😃... Well i never want her to choose anyone other than Sanskar.. They are not perfect but they used to accept each other with faults..Sadly that not the case in the show though.. I exceeded your expectations then i am good😃..

Thank you Nita ..Thank you for such a lovely comment Khushi dear

Love
Khushi


Lots of love

Nita

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NitaReid



I am good Showrav...Just very behind my schedule i planned for this weekend... Thanks ..I am really happy to know you liked the OS😃.. Well i wished for it too that why i wrote it..I still cant believe she didnt choose him in the show😆... Glad to know you liked SwaSan moments in the OS..My next creation ..Yeah sure maybe by next year..Sorry i feel like i am gonna be way behind in my update of BTM or the new OS.. That how i feel today ..Maybe i will get it done soon i suppose😆..


With Love

Nita


P.S- My network is horrible..So i accidentally posted it in my another OS too😆


Not hurry dear first u complete on going & pls don't stress ur self much everything going to be ok & smooth.
Bye
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Nita,
It's so beautiful dear.. Just perfect.. 👏👏
Read many OSs regarding this track. But this is the only one which portrayed what I feel.. 😊
Especially my eyes stopped in these lines,
"He never expected anything from her, well that what he promised himself when he first decided to help her, then he wanted her friendship, then he wanted her love, and now he wanted her to choose him over her family.."
Just love the way you pin point each ones mistakes.. And your justification is the perfect answer to those who blabber 'Swara doesn't love Sanskar'.. 👏
Then the perfect happy ending, rather it's a new beginning for them.. ❤️❤️
In this whole drama of "Destiny games", Swara is the one who suffered most.. As you said, somewhere behind those responsibilities as a daughter, bahu and wife ,she lost her real identity.. And I would love to see the real serial bring back that carefree girl.. 😉
So thanks dear for this lovely OS.. Thoroughly enjoyed it. 🤗

Eranga

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