~JAB WE MET...AGAIN! - A SWASAN SS~ *EPILOGUE:PG-12*

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Purvi97
I can't see swara like this...😭

Aww sorry for that, but let's see next chapter will be a lil more happy... or err shall I say passionate?!😉

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Eeekksss!! Loved the chapter!!
Intensity, passion, love, romance, anger, angst all in one!! Perfect chapter Niki. It was fabulous!
The Haldi thing, was something I'd dreamed of and never got:(( and your chapter had those feels!!❤️ Then the kiss, the desperate passionate kiss, I loved it!☺️
Too good darling! Continue sooner-ish!
Love,
Sakshi..

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canvasrocks786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

its fab yaar. I am really happy to read such simple yet intense and cute scene after long time. really it was mindblowing👏

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Bookmarked. . Will reply for each chapter

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

It was awesome di...

Loved it well I always wanted a real haldi celebration for them...we all know what we got there

Tani

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Hi Niki,

I too had stopped watching and writing.. But recently i decided to continue and complete my SS. I was doing it at an update a month pace. Now I got a breather from my project and SR leap has brpught me back to worshiping SwaSan.

Chapter 1

What an opening! The pain of two kinds exhibited by the SR sisters. One is disgusted at her immature lover while the other is paying the price for not trusting her faithful lover.

One can definitely expect Lakshya to give such reason for his absense. I loved how Sanskaar presented the whole truth and his chosen punishment for Swara. Yes, he had chosen worst of the worst punishments for Swara but he will also have to go through it with her.

I could completely imagine Sanskaar declaring the punishment with the background music and camera going around Sanskaar with flashes of Swara's deer in the headlights look.

Looks promising. Off I go to the next chapter.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Hi Niki,

Chapter 2

Ab rulaogi kya?

I was right about Sanskaar bearing more pain than Swara about the punishment.

I particularly loved that he still refers her as His Swara. He is angry with her but can never hate his Swara. And while he is tormented in memories and distance, he absolutely can't see her enjoying the functions.

Sanky ke harkaton ka kya batao.. He is so cute and his attempts to meet Swara brimg a smile on my face.

Nice tormenting update, Niks!

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Hi Niki,

Chapter 3

Mastiwala update tha. . Aankh micholi khel aacha hai. .

After reading about their misery, now i am really looking forward to the update when Sanskaar would say, enough is enough and get back with Swara.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Hi Niki

Chapter 4

Gosh! ! I am reading this in office and smiling like an idiot. . Yeh kya tha. . I am dreaming already.

Sanskaar is normally very controlled. Him losing that control is a measure of his temper and jealousy. While I am not a big fan of MU tracks, i loved this chapter . And which SwaSan fan wouldnt likt it? 😆

Cheers

Sharon