~JAB WE MET...AGAIN! - A SWASAN SS~ *EPILOGUE:PG-12* - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read all three chapters just now.. And I loved it a lot.. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: elsanna

Nikks di...is it okay to call u😳 it's awesome chapter so jealousy is on the peak hope so sans forgive her soon... update sooner

Tani


Hi Tani!

U can ofcoz call me di! 😃

Im glad u liked the chapter, thnk u for the feedback dear.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Read all three chapters just now.. And I loved it a lot.. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.


Thnks for the feedback dear. 😳 Will update in 2 days. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Wowww great update nikki...u r making me curious now update it fast...we got jealous sanskaar...do u have any plans to give us jealous swara in dis...or for dis u will write another ts...😉
M more okay with another one...#dil mange more...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
It's really beautiful..
Perfectly portrayed Sanskar and Swara's emotions.. And you added some beautiful scenes which gives me goosebumps.. Especially how Sanskar keep following Swara despite how much he angry.. Even to take a glimpse of her.. Disguise as old women, fooled everyone and find an opportunity to spend some time with her. 🤗
And the words you using to show the situation of their broken hearts was amazing.. Feels the intensity to the maximum..
Eagerly waiting to read more.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
I can't see swara like this...😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: anjum_s

Wowww great update nikki...u r making me curious now update it fast...we got jealous sanskaar...do u have any plans to give us jealous swara in dis...or for dis u will write another ts...😉

M more okay with another one...#dil mange more...😛


Thank u dearie! 😃
N hehe greedy much?!😉😆😆 I know Jealousy track is my fav too! So u might just like the next chapter a lil more! fingers crossed!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 👍🏼


Thank u Sneha! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Jealous sanskar..
Lloved it


Thank u! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Eranga

It's really beautiful..
Perfectly portrayed Sanskar and Swara's emotions.. And you added some beautiful scenes which gives me goosebumps.. Especially how Sanskar keep following Swara despite how much he angry.. Even to take a glimpse of her.. Disguise as old women, fooled everyone and find an opportunity to spend some time with her. 🤗
And the words you using to show the situation of their broken hearts was amazing.. Feels the intensity to the maximum..
Eagerly waiting to read more.. ❤️


Thank u so much for the detailed feedback dear. 😃 Much treasured! 😳

Hopefully u will like the next chapter too. 😳

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