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rafafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Just too good! 👏 I am amazed once again at your spellbinding imagination 👏.

Can't wait to read more on this, after you finish DBC. Sanskaar Maheshwari as a Tennis player...now that is a dream come true. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: rafafan
Just too good! 👏 I am amazed once again at your spellbinding imagination 👏.
Can't wait to read more on this, after you finish DBC. Sanskaar Maheshwari as a Tennis player...now that is a dream come true. 😊

Hey there rafafan 🤗🤗

So happy that you liked the theme, the synopsis and prologue. I will be back with the chapters after I complete Destined by Choice.

Sunny boy as an ace tennis champ, certainly is a dream come true. 😆😆

Cheers

Viji

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Hey Viji dear 🤗

Am currently back to *headless fly* mode (my coined combination of headless chicken and blue arsed fly 😆) thanks to work and some other stuff so am very late to this party. I am still behind with even PMs so falling further behind reading actual stories but noticed this one in my list 😊.

I am afraid this is one party I will be a very boring and perhaps unhelpful guest at . Tennis is possibly one sport I have pretty much zero interest in (I need the whats app embarrassed monkey emos)! It just doesn't do anything for me and when I try to watch or read any of the technicalities of the game, I kinda switch off in super speed 😲. Due to that, I really can't think of any tennis players that I've really paid attention to in terms of going beyond the being aware of some big win etc so it is a leap to imagine Sanskaar as a tennis player 😆 but I am sure with you writing him, it will be a treat for those way more sophisticated and tennis-oriented than me 😆. Swara as a singer is of course 😳 and that I can totally not just see but almost "hear" 😊.

Having given the health warning about why my input here may be limited, the premise I gather from the Prologue and Synopsis seems very interesting. The Synopsis was very detailed and seemed to reveal a lot of Sanskaar's BG already so felt that stage was set as such (pardon the pun). I like that they are both stars in their own right here and in that sense a more equal footing than the usual one of him a successful man and her a young girl searching for her place. Will look forward to read how things develop and what influences affect these orbiting constellations and how those starry sparks fly 😳. Just forgive me if my responses on the tennis player bit are a slightly wan 😆- really a struggle for me to drool much on tennis players (more a football/ racing/ cricket fan 😆 ). I will be here whenever I can but this will be more developed once DBC is complete? 😕

Loads of love,

Shru xoxo

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Shru my dear Sis 🤗🤗🤗

I will reply in more detail in some time, either later today or more probably tomorrow (and Un res on EI #8 too!) 😊 🤗 Caught up in a lot of pending work ahead of last date for returns filing which falls on Monday 17/10. 😕

So thrilled to have you here, despite your not-so-intense passion for tennis. 😊 Well, the tale will revolve more around SwaSan and how they navigate the minefield which threatens to explode around them of course. There will be some tennis related stretches----I am going to really let my imagination run riot on Sunny as the ace tennis champ. I have great plans for Australian Open 2018. 😉

Will be back soon, Shru. Love you Loads
🤗🤗

-----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Unres on page 2

Nita dearest 🤗

Was grinning so widely to myself while reading it. 😆shall reply in detail tomorrow. In meantime...yes yaar, Vijay Amritraj reached a high of No.16, way back in 1980. Sunny is No.6 of course. 😉

The top 6 are: Novak, Rafa, Wawrinka, Federer, Murray. I know I am being a bit cruel to Murray (you know I don't like the dude much 😆😆), but hey, he's still top 5! 😉

Love ya loads, and will be back later

Viji

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Beautiful prologue & synopsis viji dearest
lol sanskar tennis player & defeated Djokovic & others great I know I m in 🤣 imagine sanskar maheshari playing tennis.will love to know their love story dear & what happen that he withdraw from Paris open.
update soon dear.
by the way when I update doc.
Bye

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: showrav24
Beautiful prologue & synopsis viji dearest
lol sanskar tennis player & defeated Djokovic & others great I know I m in 🤣 imagine sanskar maheshari playing tennis.will love to know their love story dear & what happen that he withdraw from Paris open.
update soon dear.
by the way when I update doc.
Bye

Hey Showrav, 🤗🤗

Sanskaar Maheshwari is going to be a top tennis pro. 😊😉 Will reveal what happened that made him withdraw from the Paris Masters, once I start rolling out chapters here, after completing DbC. 😊

I hope to have chapter 6 of DbC up in the coming week yaar. Loads of work pressure till 17th, hence taking time. I am really touched that you are looking forward to it so much. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Sanskar a tennis player and Swara a singer...
Deadly combo..

Loved it
Thanks

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Sanskar a tennis player and Swara a singer...
Deadly combo..

Loved it
Thanks

Hey Bhardwaj 🤗🤗🤗

So glad to hear that you loved it, yaar. 😊 Yup, Sanskaar is a tennis ace, and Swara is a supremely talented singer. 😳 Glad you love the combo.

Cheers,

-----Viji

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

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Dear Viji,

And I am lost, reading and soaking up the whole chapter - so full of SwaSan and their magic - luckily not much of tennis, so it was easy to follow (I do not follow any games, not much into them though I can tolerate a little cricket. The rest of the games - completely over my head, I actually switch off)

I will revert with a detailed comment.

Had to say that I loved it - especially the repeated references to yaman kalyani. Did you know that both Abhi na jaaon chood kar (from Hum dono - not completely yaman kalyan) and Chandan sa badan, chanchal chitvan (from Sarswati Chandra) are based on yaman kalyan. Extremely sensous and very suitable to SwaSan.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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