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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Viji,

This is completely amazing. Sanskar playing tennis. Well I'm not aware much of tennis so hopefully I will sail this. Swasan already in love. Ragini putting allegations on sanskar. Wonder why. Eagerly waiting. Update soon. 🤗For the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi



My Dearest Nivi 🤗🤗


Yes, Sanskaar is one gritty, determined, resolute and supremely talented tennis player in this fic. 😊 I won't make the story too full of sports jargon; of course there will be some, since it is Sunny boy's profession; but the main focus would be on SwaSan. Their relationship, whether and how they manage to confront the storm that would threaten to envelop them and tear them apart.

More about Ragini's allegations, would be revealed in the next couple of chapters. 😉😊

So thrilled that you are coming along for this journey. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Sanskaar background is interesting

Looking forward to read more.


Thanks so much yaar. 🤗 So thrilled that you loved it.

Trust you would have read Chapter 1. Will be back with Chapter 2 as soon as I wrap up the Epilogue of Destined by Choice. 😊

Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fangirl-swasan

I absolutely love Nadal. OMG Sanskar playing tennis Yes give me all the chapters right now. Please excuse my enthusiasm. You are a great writer


Hey there 🤗🤗


So happy to know that you loved this 😳😊 I am a Nadal fan too, of Djokovic as well. 😊 Touched by your words about my writing.

I guess this is the first time we're interacting on a thread? Do let me know your name, if that's OK. So I'll know how to address you. I'm Viji. 😊🤗 Nice to "meet" you.

Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Very interesting prolouge



Thanks 😊🤗 Very happy to know that you loved it.


Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

tho m nt intrstd in games xcept cricket bt still jst 4 swasan music & ur writing i m all in 4ths stry.
a very unique concept.luking 4wd 2it


Hey Sonu dear 🤗🤗


Am so very touched that you found the story concept to be interesting. 😳 I love SwaSan, music and tennis, so I really wanted to write a fic combing these. 😉

Very happy that you are going to be a part of this journey. 🤗🤗

Love,

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Viji,

The synopsis is really amazing. Though I do not know abcd of tennis, I'm all in the story for swasan. I am really passionate for music. Love sanskar's as well as swara's character. Looks like both raglak are jealous of swasan. Eagerly waiting. 🤗 For the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi


Hey Nivi 🤗🤗


So happy to know that you loved the prologue/ synopsis, as well as Chapter 1. 😊 I love music too, especially old Hindi film songs and Classical Instrumental (both Carnatic and Hindustani).

Am so touched to hear that you loved both Swara and Sanskaar's characters. As a huge SwaSan fan, that means a lot. 🤗

Yes, Lakshya is certainly very jealous and envious of Sanskaar. As to what Ragini's angle is, I will reveal more in the next couple of chapters. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago
don't know anything about tennis and also not interested, jyada sports terms nahi honge na😕
i liked that swara is also a star in her field, otherwise your sanskaa always overshadow every other characters😆 most amazing, smart, intelligent, everyone's dream man
ragini seems negative here.
update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Viji detailed Unres later today..Once i post my update..I will be here just rereading the prologue as many times as i want and will unres too

Okay in my experience i have read several tennis articles and what an way to write the prologue that for a time i forgot it was an story😉..



Aww..More than Sanskar, Am i gonna be going crazy with all the names you mentioned in that prologue of yours..😆..Why do you want me to write an essay on all those players ah ..


This is so unfair Poor Murray😆.. I feel bad for him, i know you hatred but poor guy.. How can Novak Beat Sanskar 😈..And Sanskar beat Federer😲.. Okay i am gonna end up discussing all those matches instead.. Wait for it, will discuss all those matches soon enough 😆...



Will do detailed comment later Viji..But this Prologue was refreshing to read and you know my craze for tennis and it an delight to read for me..


Okay finally coming to the story.. Ragini Gadodia ..How dare you ruin Sanskar from playing in the O2 Arena.. You might have seen Nita the Sanskar fan, dont mess with Nita the tennis fan..




Nita dear 🤗🤗


You know just how much I cherish your feedback for this fic, you share my ardent passion for tennis 🤗🤗

I am just so thrilled that you loved the prologue structure and style yaar. 😳🤗 I wanted to try come thing different, make it along the lines of a sports article. Glad that you felt it worked well.

Murray...😆 well you know I love to hate that guy. 😆 Yup, Novak beat Sanskaar in 2 Grand Slams...the French open and Wimbledon. But he also lost to Sanskaar at Indian Wells and Beijing. 😉

Federer beat Sanskaar in the Australian Open, but then lost to him at Shanghai 😉. Rafa beat Sanskaar in the US Open, but lost to him at Miami and Shanghai. Murray never beat Sanskaar. Lost to him at Shanghai and several other Masters tournaments as well. 😉

Yup, Ragini certainly alleged something, the resultant controversy made Sanskaar withdraw from the Paris Masters...and most likely, the World Tour Finals. I am very upset too. 😭

Don't worry...keep your eyes on the Australian open 2018. 😉 😊

Loads of Love

Viji



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Posted: 8 years ago
My Dearest Mishti and Soumya 🤗🤗

Will reply to your lovely comments, later today or tomorrow. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res for synopsis..

Nyna dear..Go on you can res now


Viji dear..Detailed unres for both will come after i update..


P.S - I am first

And I am just thrilled that you were the first. 😳 🤗


Unres 😃


Hi Viji dear,

Gosh the no of res i have on your works make me feel so bad..But i will strive to unres them before the weekend..I said i will try not sure how much i will succeed ..

Don't stress yourself, yaar. I still have to do my Unres on Behind Their Masks #11, as well as your new OS. I am also targeting this weekend. 😊 Un res when time permits, no rush whatsoever. 🤗


I unres on the prologue ,now it synopsis time..And then i got Chapter 1 left to be unres ..



Dark Star and Destined Binary Stars.. Hmmm interesting.. Well so Dark star will play it terrible hand and try to seperate my binary stars 😡..No No No.. I love my binary stars 😳

Yup, that is certainly what that person is going to try. Whether they succeed or not, remains to be seen. 😉 😆 But you know me na, what I try to ensure for SwaSan in my fics...there would be turmoil and some anguish, but then the sun will dispel the clouds. The spring will thaw the winter. 😉

So let talk about Sanskar the tennis player.. So he has no drawbacks..Well that good to know..You know i always compare real with the world you created right..My favoruite backhand has to be off Stan ..Forehand will be Rafa...

Oh yes, I agree with you. Stan's backhand is phenomenal, and Rafa's forehand is deadly. Such a potent weapon that is. I love Federer's backhand too, in fact. Very elegant, stylish single handed backhand. Stan is also single handed of course; and dangerously effective; but Federer's has this lithe grace to it.

Sanskar got a great serve..I wish Rafa had that ...So legendary three cant come close.. Good for Sanskar than ..He loves Football, Rafa loves football too..I think you would know that 😳..Just saying, he wanted to be a football player but choose tennis instead..

Yup, Sanskaar in my fic is a tremendously gifted and talented player. Plus, he has honed his skills through diligent and resolute practice. And his excellent footwork is probably due to the same reason as Rafa---a childhood fondness for soccer. 😆 😉

Baseliner 😉..Got it .. I love how i am able to understand this language 😆..It like yeah i know most about tennis 😛... DP is playing tennis too 😲😲😲... So he is Sanskar coach .

Yup, as of now, DP is Sanskaar's coach. 😉 We can probably assume Sanskaar has some other hitting partners and consultant coaches from time to time. 😊


Laksh is jealous of his brother..Who wouldnt be .. Sanskar met Swara and i know what happened as i read chapter one.. But i dont know what lies ahead as you are still withholding chapter 2 from me 😭😭

Yup, Lakshya certainly is jealous and envious of Sanskaar. How much of it is due to his own weakness of character; and how much owing to the open and blatant partiality shown by their parents (especially DP) will be revealed later. The irony is, that Sanskaar himself is not really comfortable with all the attention and pampering he gets from his parents. He does not really want to be the overtly favored son; and he would love to have a cordial equation with his only sibling. But things aren't so simple...

See after chapter one i was like SwaSan ,SwaSan but rereading the synopsis to unres..I am like Sanskar and tennis.. This 3S is gonna be so fun to read.. And i am really enjoying this journey so far 😳...

I am so touched to hear that, sweetheart. 🤗🤗

Love

Nita


P.S- You take on Novak chances of slipping to world No 2 ..If murray won the next two tournaments 😆

Oh God, please don't remind me, yaar. I am so tense about this. And Nole has not been playing upto his usual standards at all. 😕 😭 Now it all comes down to the Paris Masters and the ATP World Tour Finals at O2. My heart says Nole will win the World Tour Finals. Lets see. 😉 😃



My Dearest Nita, 🤗🤗🤗


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Lots of Love,

----Viji



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