SwaSan FF- Woven Destinies- Chapter 1 Pg8 updated(PMs late) - Page 3

Hey Sakshi.. 🤗.

hey sakshi'..

Hey Sakshi,

Hey sakshi..

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey Sakshi.. 🤗.

I must say I'm literally crying. It was an heart wrenching update. I love it.. I can feel the pain of Sanskaar. Ohh how rude was fate on him. Soo he'll join his uncle's family here after. I would have more happy if you continued the last scene. I'm laughing like a teenage girl when I read about their admire (eyes description.) Okay dude.. waiting for more.

With love..

Kam..

Hey Kam!🤗
Omg...I am sorry to make you cry honey!! Thank you so much for the comment. Actually for a moment I felt am I exaggerating? Then I tried to place myself in Sanskaar's place. And imagining a life without my dad?! I might be a mighty gal physically, but he is my biggest weakness and hence I felt, that no...I am not exaggerating.
Umm, the last scene...well you'll definitely get a continuation of that but not in Chapter 1 but in the later chapters.
Was it funny? Don't tell me man😕 The prologue is anything but funny...I mean it has to be! Well, I feel eyes are the language of the heart. They are the most honest and give away everything you are feeling beneath, it is just that the person in front of you should know how to read it. And eyes are the most beautiful part of the human body for me...so...I wrote that!
Thanks once again!
Love ya,

Sakshi!

Sakshi 🤗

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Sakshi!

Very nice start to the story, I felt- you need have no fears or nervousness on that score at all. I am glad this is a different story- don't think I can stomach even reading the current track in fiction at the moment 😉. The character sketch was interesting- Sanskaar is hurt and hardened by the most horrific of personal tragedies . RamTa are dead 😭😭- but an interesting way to set the story in. I really like the bits about both Shomi and Swara having self respect and dignity, it's nice to read that not being sacrificed as it is in the show 🤢. That SwaSan meeting was all things it should be- the pain momentarily healed by a simple touch and electrifying exchange of glances and that indescribable pull- all came through. Will await the start of the story and to read more:)

Love, Shru x

Thank you so much for the lovely detailed comment Shru!🤗 It just made my day! Thank you so much, I was pretty anxious about the way it would be received and it is better than I expected it to be.

I understand...the show has so lost it's original charm. I was just watching the scenes before and of the time of SwaSan fake marriage...and that nostalgia which struck! Those were the days...such amazing scenes and tracks we had...and now look at the crap we are getting!! I wanted to write something on this track, but then I was like...no man, I can't even write this stuff!

Yes, RamTa are dead in the story, I made them that, keeping a stone on my heart honestly. But the story had to be formed this way...It is actually a very weird idea in my mind, and I just wrote it with a few changes here and there. Let's see, what is the outcome of it! Trust me, I get scenes while having a shower in the washroom on SwaSan! *embarrassed monkey emoji*

There are some aspects in the show with which I am badly irritated. One of them is Shomi and Swara's character being suddenly shown as ones without a self-esteem. This lady could break of her marriage but would not agree with the fact that Swara is wrong. She would not bow down, and suddenly this has happened. Even Swara, that bold confident girl, who had gone in Gadodia house with fish in her hand is just lost!! That is what I want to cover here. I want to show them as strong women and not some abla naaris..! Then I also want to take out all my frustration on Shekhar Spineless Gadodia. So I assure you, or maybe leak a spoiler, that you'll hate this non-introduced character!!

Thank you so much for the way you described the SwaSan eyelock!! I loved it more, than what I wrote honestly!😆 I just love the elegance in eyelocks, which give away what the person is feeling with utmost honesty..given the other knows how to read them. So this was just an example that I wanted to show of it..and I hope it came well!

Will try to update as soon as possible! Thanks once again!!😳
Love,
Sakshi!

Originally posted by: chinnni1992

hey sakshi'..

awesome.. character sketch and prologue both are awesome..

loving it dear.. bring it on...

really its deifferent story loving it...

Thanks Sru!🤗
Loved your comment!!<3<3
Will update soon!

Originally posted by: ErisedWitch45

Hey Sakshi,

Wonderfully written prologue. I liked the way you described the pain and torment that Sanskar is going through after such a horrific tragedy.

The Sanskar-Swara first meet was beautiful. It wasn't anything filmy or over the top - but simple and real. 2 people, sitting in silence, mulling over the tragedy. I also liked Sharmistha and Swara's character sketch.

Waiting for the next update. Lovely start. :)

Thankiess!!❤️
I had just tried to see myself in Sanskaar's place, and it came from within!!
Thank you sooo much for the way you said it! It was exactly what I had feared...it being too cliched and OTT and stuff, but thankfully it wasn't!! You really made me the happiest!!🤗
Will try to be update soonerish!
Love
Sakshi,

P.S.: I keep pestering you for updates and I dunno your name!!😆 So how do I call you?