SwaSan FF- Woven Destinies- Chapter 1 Pg8 updated(PMs late)

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: lucky.m
wow ..Sakshi🤗🤗
Bring it on😛 res

Thank youuu Lucky!🤗
Will be posting the prologue soon!

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Loved the cs
Update soon

Thank you! Will do it soon!😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Dear Sakshi,

An amazing update and the prologue promises to be the start of a very fascinating journey, a fact born out by the title itself.

Count me in on this journey.

love,

Nyna

PS: Real sorry for the short note - I normally 'res' when I want to give a detailed comment and unres once I have framed a comment but of late I have become quite tardy, so I prefer to give a quick comment and come back to give detailed one. Please bear with me.

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Have posted the prologue people! Do give your views on it and likes, if you like it😊

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Sakshi,

An amazing update and the prologue promises to be the start of a very fascinating journey, a fact born out by the title itself.

Count me in on this journey.

love,
Nyna

PS: Real sorry for the short note - I normally 'res' when I want to give a detailed comment and unres once I have framed a comment but of late I have become quite tardy, so I prefer to give a quick comment and come back to give detailed one. Please bear with me.

Dearest Nyna🤗
Thank you so much for these words, you made my day by the fast comment! Don't be sorry please as I loved the comment!😊 Hope you find the further chapters good enough. Thanks a lot!
Lots and lots of love
Sakshi.

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Thank youuu Lucky!🤗
Will be posting the prologue soon!

That was an awesome start 👏...I absolutely loved the pain emotions and the moments transipred between swasan ..that silence spoke volumes ..and I guess the will holds the key to further events .😲

Cheers to a great start and promising journey sakshi 🤗👍🏼

Love

Lucky

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Characters Sketch is very interesting Sakshi, so as Prologue!

Unres:

Hey Sakshi 😊

You were fearing unnecessarily as it was awesome & I'm sure we are on for a beautiful journey!

So don't fear or underestimate your skill, just bring it on!

As I said the Character Sketch & Prologue are very interesting & quite intriguing!

I felt so bad for Sanskaar! He lost his everything - love, care, happiness, smiles, joys - with the sudden demise of his parents! Just the thought that he lost both his parents at the age of 20!

Bt destiny sent an angel who is his soulmate in his life when he thought he has nothing left! Bt he didn't know it yet neither the girl who was born & is destined to be his soulmate!

Bt they felt the pull towards each other & both were captivated by each other's eyes 😳

Why I'm having the feeling that this encounter of them will play a pivotal role in their lives & relation in future?

Btw the prologue is about past right when they were teenagers & Sanskaar lost his parents? And you will give present scenario in upcoming updates as you mentioned on characters sketch that Sanskaar is a ruthless businessman & Swara a psychologist?

So Sanskaar will stay at MM with his Uncle-Aunt after this & will not be in touch with his Mother's best friend Shomi?

I loved Swara's character already bcoz of her thought process & what I read in character sketch!

And I liked Shomi as well. Both Swara-Shomi are so much like how they were in initial days of Swaragini, and thankfully unlike of their current version!

So Shomi is Sanskaar's mother, Sujata's best friend & she was in touch with RP-Sujju as they helped her in her tough times, maybe when Shomi lost her husband? Then how come Swara & Sanskaar don't know each other?

Btw I'm curious to know about the successors of RP's legacy as you mentioned successorS, not just a successor which is ofcourse Sanskaar! Bt I want to know who else?

Brilliant start Sakshi & I'm so looking forward to read further!

Please update soon!

Loads of love & hugs <3

P.S: I'm demanding PM after your every update!

Edited by Nupur_5 - 8 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: lucky.m

That was an awesome start 👏...I absolutely loved the pain emotions and the moments transipred between swasan ..that silence spoke volumes ..and I guess the will holds the key to further events .😲

Cheers to a great start and promising journey sakshi 🤗👍🏼

Love
Lucky

Lucky🤗
Thank you so much for the comment!! Yes of course, the silence spoke volumes. Sanskaar is going through too much! I sometimes feel I might be exaggerated it, but then loosing your parents has that mind-numbing torment.
Let's see!! I hope the further events are atleast a good read as this one, if not better.
Thanks once again!❤️
Lots of love,
Sakshi.