Swasan SS: You don't love me anymore part 7 on p7 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Sara,
Not fair, you could be bored for a longer time and then we could have had an update that did not end in a cliffhanger.

So Sanskaar agrees to wait for her, (he is worried that she is talking while driving) and then the fates intervene.

Do update soon.

On a side note, that quote you used, I used a modified version of the same in one of my dialogues for my SS. It is such a beautiful and profound one, right?

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sara,

Not fair, you could be bored for a longer time and then we could have had an update that did not end in a cliffhanger.

So Sanskaar agrees to wait for her, (he is worried that she is talking while driving) and then the fates intervene.

Do update soon.

On a side note, that quote you used, I used a modified version of the same in one of my dialogues for my SS. It is such a beautiful and profound one, right?

love,
Nyna

I am still bored to be honest😆 Thank you for reading. Yesss I love this quote its amazing😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Sara :)
I loved your story & I just loved your Sanskaar!
And I so wish on the show as well Swara understand her priority before being too late! I hope Sanskaar walk away & Swara try to manaoying him!
Coming to your story, I loved Sanskaar & his every word was right with valid points & reasons!
Swara needed the jhatkaa to understand his emotions, his worth & him! And she needed to realize her priority & what she loves most!
Yes Swara loves Sanskaar most but she keep herself busy running behind worthless people!
Sanskaar! He decided to go away from her & reached airport as well but still he wants & needs to be with her only! Ofcourse Sanskaar love Swara too much to breath without her!
Sanskaar was worried that Swara was talking on phone while driving & was worried for her safety - Absolutely typical Sanskaar! Whose utmost priority are Swara's safety & happiness! Typically typical Sanskaar!
So he promised to get back to her Bt destiny intervened! It had to! To make both Swara & Sanskaar realize the utmost truth that Swara & Sanskaar can't live without each other!
Swara will be so guilt ridden & will held herself responsible for Sanskaar's life threatening situation!
(I want something similar happen in the show like Sanskaar's life in danger or Sanskaar's fake death)
You stopped at cliffhanger, plz update soon!
And do PM me if possible!
Love,
Nupur
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Hey Sara 😊,
This is amazingly written. The typical sanskar who is worried for swara is always a treat to watch. Oh god! There is a terrorist attack and a bomb blast too. Hope they both are safe. Update soon. 🤗For the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Hi there...
You penned down the whole scenario so beautifully...I m in love with this ss perhaps...😳do update sooner...n yaa you should get bored often😛so that we can rejoice with your ss...😃

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Part 4

"I could have. What does this phrase mean? At any given moment in our lives, there are certain things that could have happened but, didn't. The magic moments go unrecognized, and then suddenly, the hand of destiny changes everything."
Paulo Coelho

How often we have encountered the hand of destiny in our lives. We are living our lives a certain way and suddenly everything changes. We don't anticipate change but change reminds us that we were never in control there is someone else pulling the strings. Swara and Sanskar had been brought together by destiny had Sanskar's mask not slipped that fateful night when Mohni tried to stab Swara they might never have been friends. On her wedding day Sanskar could have gone anywhere but he chose to look for Swara. He found her and offered to help her and at that moment something shifted between them. Swara could not fathom that out of all the people he was there with her. When did the sinner became her saviour? Destiny played its part and brought these two together to fight an endless battle but there souls sought comfort in each other. They were bound by the red strings of faith. Destiny again had something up its sleeve things were about to change in their story.

Her vision is blurry as she struggles to open her eyes. She sees the outline of the ceiling and hears the faint beeping of the machine. For minute she fails to make sense of the situation but than the memories come back to her. Her phone call to Sanskar. He admonished her for talking while driving. He also promised her that he was coming back. She strains her mind to remember further. She remembers the loud noise and the sight of the burning airport building. She wakes up with a jolt disregarding her pain. Her heart monitor shows her heart rate shooting up. She only says one word.

"Sanskar? Where is Sanskar? I need to find him" She shout hysterically the nurse tries to calm her down.

"Mrs Maheswari you need to relax" She says

"Nurse where is Sanskar. What's the time?"

"Please relax you were unconscious for two weeks"

"Two weeks where is my husband please tell me"

The nurse unable to control her calls the doctor. He walks into the room.

"Mrs Maheswari you are up finally how are you feeling?" He asks cheerfully trying to diffuse the situation.

"I am fine but where is my husband. Was he the one who brought me in" She asks

"I am afraid some security personnel from the airport brought you in. You were injured in a blast. I suggest that you take things slow" He avoided her question.

"I need to see him. You don't understand. I need to talk to him" She said and started crying. She tried to get out of bed and stand but lost her balance. A forgotten memory assaulted her senses.

She had just woken up after her sister had tried to kill her and to her surprise he was there. He was encouraging her to get up. "Come on Swara get up this is not the time to think about these things. You need to be strong" His firm voice resonated in her ears. She was still lost somewhere in her mind. Swara outstretched her hand to touch him but he disappeared.

She came back into her senses. He wasn't here. Her brain mocked her.

"You took him for granted didn't you. He always used to be there whenever you needed him but now he is gone" The pain in her head increased. She screamed trying to drown out the pain. The doctor had no option but to sedate her.

Before slipping into unconsciousness she could faintly hear the doctor talking to the nurse.

"She must not know about her husband. I am afraid she cannot bear that much shock"

She slipped into oblivion.

A/N:

Thank you for all the love. I am glad that you are liking the story😊Please share your thoughts on the latest part. Sorry I can't reply to everyone since I am a newbie😕

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another cliffhanger!!?? No! Please update the next part!
Swara was unconscious for two weeks! Where are the so-called-family members? Was she alone in these two weeks?
Where is Sanskaar? Don't say that you will kill him!
Or he is unconscious as well at some other place & everyone will assume him to be dead!
Please update soon & thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Sara,
Nice quick update - so Swara was also injured in the same blast and was brought in unconscious, which is how she stays for two weeks.

I know that questions have been raised as to where her family members are, which is a very valid one. But then the doctors are aware of both her name, her husband's name and her history. That makes it intriguing. As does your ending. So please do update soon.

love,
Nyna


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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
So everything is messed up here...she was unconscious for 2 weeks😕
These doctors also gave me a heart attack...😵

Update sooner

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
I seriously want sanskar to leave his so called family in serial..

Poor swasan..
Just hoping he is fine..

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