Vajra An Elven Tale Updated chapter 23 B pg 4 (18/12/17) - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dearest Saku.. Typing from mobile so gonna keep it short..

I can't keep myself from reading as soon as you updated.. And girl you are amazing.. The twists and turns you deliver while other seems to guess it.. I an just going so shocked at it each time.. Really luxji is not brainwashed.. Wow that was awesome twist.. I am like wow I didn't see it coming and then you threw in ram Prasad back story.. I am like I can read an entire story of just ram and aruna.. As if it not enough you mention a dead first prince.. And then suju story.. Girl I am still reeling from what I have read.. Now wonder I am addicted to Vajra.. You are awesome.. Love you for writing vajra on swasan.. I would love to read the next chapter as soon as possible.. But I know enough not to pressure my dear friend.. So I will be waiting as patiently as I can


Love

Nita



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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Sakura,

I'm in ❤️ with this FF. I'm a huge fan of LOTR, Hobbitverse and all other associated universes and hv read a lot of fanfiction in almost all the permutations n combinations in various fanfiction /blog websites. So I guess you can imagine my surprise to find one such for our own desi swasan! A lovely surprise indeed!

And whats more surprising is ur patience to conjure up a whole new elaborate universe based on Indian mythos! Fab work indeed! Kudos! 👏

Now me being a huge fan of soul bonding and all other bonds usually found in these universes, am eagerly hoping to find some of those elements here too in future. #FingersCrossed 😉

Nevertheless I'm reallyhappy to hv chanced upon this particular AU of swasan! Keep up the gr8 wrk dear! 👍🏼

-Luv Niki
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 19 part two... anyone still awake? You can read it on page three now. I'm off to bed.
Bye bye!
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Posted: 8 years ago
I res here too 😈😈

Will read over the course of Sunday. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Will be back , after I read😊
Could not resist😆 and I loved the last line - Spring is coming. Portending great change - of hope and love. It was spine tingling in a beautiful way. Will be back for a detailed revert, soon.

Love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

I res here too😈😈

Will read over the course of Sunday.😊


You're awake!!! 😳 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Will be back , after I read😊

Could not resist😆and I loved the last line - Spring is coming. Portending great change - of hope and love. It was spine tingling in a beautiful way. Will be back for a detailed revert, soon.

Love,
Nyna


The chapter is spine tingling in a bad way I fear. But...had to deal with the ill Sanskar sooner or later. Hope you won't be disappointed after you read through Nyna dear. Tell me about it, when you can 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved the 19/2 more... Don't care if you never reply a comment, but upload regularly . The spring is coming, flower in blooms in the her tree.. you know I kind of expected a kiss! Kiss of a lumiere healed him..So magical... 😳
But Swara's agony seeing Sanskar to suffer... his apology and indirect confession. ..loved him... that wolves part though... it's a coincidence in my ff last update had a canine attack Sequence and you've wolves attack... great minds think alike 😉

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved two lines specially the one "the vajra rage mixed with the cold calculation of naga is not a healthy combination " this proves that sanskar's enemy may win for a short time against him but in the end they will end up losing the battle someone who is craving for love and finally started to get it but at the same time has the rage of vajra and calculative mind of naga will indeed be dangerous for those who try to harm swara or backstab him
I don't agree when sanskar said his heart had died his emotions had died that is not true he is craving for love now when he finally started to get love if someone tries to harm swara they have to face such a version of sanskar which no one ever seen nor can even imagine a desperate sanskar trying to protect the love for which he is craving for such a long time along with his vajra rage and calculative mind of naga will be a deadly combination for his enemy if enemies of sanskar are intelligent they will not try to harm swara but it seems many of sanskars enemy are not intelligent enough to guess what exactly awaits for them they are not exactly aware of the level of sanskar's power nor they have any idea about how much swara has started to mean to him the wolves scene prove what he can do to those who betray him or takes enmity with him the people who are planning to harm swara need to think thousand times before laying a finger on swara in this list pratula Annapurna and aryamaan are in the highest level of danger nor that I care because they seem to bring this danger by their own doing suvanna even in enmity seems to maintain some rules class style and emotions she is one of my favourite character but if I tell about grey character she will be one of my all time favourate


But I love the last line spring is coming which means no matter how much dark the situation becomes soon the darkness will get removed new light of love hope and happiness will come


Edited by Sanya17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Chapter 19 part two... anyone still awake? You can read it on page three now. I'm off to bed.

Bye bye!


Well sadly i was sleeping bye then...Now i am awake and runs off to read..Thanks dearest..Love the surprise😉

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