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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Hey guys i'm back with chapter 16 hope you enjoy it
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It was 2 P.M the lawyers had just left and Ragini didn't like the sound of what them and Swara were cooking up. Sharmista and Shekhar had also been there and they agreed with every word the lawyer said but they didn't know the truth.

Ragini however had stayed silent during the whole ordeal she didn't want to take part in tarnishing a man's reputation who spent years building only for it to be brought down by some obsessive person. Once the lawyers had left Swara went to her room while Sharmista and Shekhar went to there room.

No doubt to talk about the coming days of what would be happening. As she was thinking about that the doorbell ringed she went to check it and when she opened the door she saw a postman. By that time Swara had even come out of her door and was standing beside her🤪.

The postman said "Who is Ragini Gadodia her I have a package for her from Ms.Priya." Now Ragini knew she had no friend called Priya but she played along anyway.

"Oh me I was expecting this package" Ragini said. The postman handed her the package and left.

Ragini thought " hmm that's weird the postman didn't ask for my signature" but she didn't focus to much on that thought. Ragini and Swara both sat down and opened the package inside was a teddy bear with a note attached to it.

The note read "Hey Ragini here's the your birthday present sorry if i'm late love Priya."

"Who is this Priya I've never heard of her I hope it's not Sansksar" Swara said.

Just when Ragini thought Swara was acting somewhat normal she starts acting obsessive again WHY!

Ragini then said "Swara Priya was my best friend in high school she went to America for her higher studies a few years back we haven't seen each other since but we talk a lot on Facebook and how could this be Sanskar II never told him about Priya."

Ragini hoped this would be a good enough story to make Swara believe that Priya was a real person.

"Ok Ragini but make sure you don't talk to Sanskar since you what he did to me and what will happen I don't want anything bad happening to my sister right." Ragini was disgusted by her sister's thought but had to play along.

Ragini kindly nodded her head while Swara got the teddy and went to her room. As soon as Swara left she immediately picked up the note and smelt it. The note smelt weird it smelt like ink but not normal ink.

Ragini then realized what it was and went immediately to her room and then to her cupboard. Ragini used to send notes to her friends in school. For that she would use a special kind of ink that allowed it to be only seen in a UV light.

Ragini had told Sanskar this sometime ago she was glad he remembered it.

She quickly got out her UV pen from her cupboard and went inside the washroom and closed the lights. She hoped that her UV pen still worked, she turned it on and worked "thank god" Ragini thought.

She flashed the UV pen on the front side there was nothing there but as soon as she flashed it on the back side she could see tons of writing on it. It was a plan "Wow" Ragini thought. Ragini quickly memorized the whole plan and flushed down the sheet of paper.

"Sanskar your a genius" Ragini thought.

She went outside her room and saw Swara and the teddy bear right on top of her desk.

Ragini then in her mind said "Swara guess you weren't that smart enough" and then went right back into her room.

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OK so that was chapter 16

I'll have some more Sanskar in there next chapter but I really wanted this chapter to be more Ragini and Swara based. Anyways this track is coming to an end probably in the next chapter or 2 so stay tuned for that.

Some things to look forward in the next track Sanskar's independence, Uttara's truth and some more Ragsan love.

Otherwise I hoped you liked this chapter and are having a good day😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Genious ragsan..
Loved it too much
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Nice update.
RagSan bond is so strong. Love them a lot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Hello guys it's me and it's late chapter 17 🥱
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BANG! The thunder had struck again it had now woken up Ragini who was fast asleep. Ragini still hazy from waking up checks her phone but the white light blinds her. "Ugh" Ragini thinks but after a few seconds are eyes adjust to the bright white light.

She looks at her phone it's 10:27 P.M. Ragini then looks outside her window it's pitch black with flashes of blue from the thunder. She then hears a loud knock, at first she thought it was her imagination probably from the sounds that the thunder is making.

Then BANG! BANG! Ragini hears the knock and knows its not her imagination. She quickly gets out of bed to check the door. She walks down the hallway only to find her ma and pa there in front of the door.

She gets closer and sees a man in his early twenties he's wearing a blue jacket and is wet from all the rain. Ragini hears the man say something it's not that loud but she can make out the words.

"Hello, sorry to be at your house so late but my car broke down in this weather and my phone is wet from all the rain can I stay at your house for the night if you want I can pay you money."

After a few seconds of thinking Shekhar lets the man inside and closes the door. Shekhar always had a good prediction of what a person is like and his gut feeling was telling him there is nothing to be scared about him.

As he comes in Ragini feels someone behind her she turns around and sees Swara behind her in her night gown. "Ragini who is this" Swara asks.

"Even I don't" Ragini replies back.

Ragini then turns around and sees Sharmista going into the kitchen while Shekhar sits down with the man. Ragini and Swara also go over to the couch and sit down.

The man is the first one to speak "I cannot tell you how grateful I am by the way my name is Vijay."
Then everyone introduces themselves and they all talk. Before they know it it's 11:30 and they decide to go to bed.

Sharmista shows Vijay to the guest room and then she leaves as well. Swara had noticed something weird about Vijay. Whenever anyone in the family would ask him about a girlfriend or a wife he would just change the topic.

So 1 hour later when everyone was sleeping Swara sneaked out of her room and went to Vijay's. She could hear through the door that he was talking to someone so she put her ear to the door.

"Baby I really miss you but I can't come right now the thunder storm is really bad." Swara thought Vijay was talking to his wife or his girlfriend.

As the conversation was going back and forth Swara got bored of it and was about to leave when she heard something that boiled her up.

"Okay bye Sanskar Maheswari I promise i'll come tomorrow and we can do some fun stuff."

The only thought that was going through Swara's head was "How dare this 🤬🤬 have my husband Sanskar i'm going to kill you, you 🤬."

Swara quickly went to the kitchen and grabbed a knife and went straight to Vijay's room opened the door and was about to stab him when someone grabbed her shoulder.

She turned around and saw it was the police behind them was her whole family in tears. Especially her ma. Ms.Swara you are under arrest the police woman said and those words echoed through the whole house.

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Well that was chapter 17,

Sorry guys for updating late I was having writer;s block 😭. Anyways epilogue to this will be seen next chapter and also new Track starting Chapter 18 so excited. (I know I said this a thousand times)

Otherwise I hoped you liked this chapter and are having a good day
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Interesting, glad this Swara went to her right place, jail. Waiting for RagSan to be united.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Chapter 18 coming out in a few hours stayed tuned
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Hello guys back here with chapter 18
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"Wha - what" that was all Swara could muster. The police women held tightly Swara's hand while she could see her whole family right in front of her. Swara thought this was a dream and that she would wake up any second but she soon realized that this was no dream.

"Ms.Swara Gadodia you are under arrest for false accusations and conspiracy for murder." Swara was shocked and started sobbing she broke down and fell to the ground. "Maa, Baba don't send me to jail please don't." Swara said.

Sharmista then broke down and said "why Swara why would you do this we thought you were better but WHY SWARA WHY!." Sharmista yelled. Swara had no answer for this but she also that everyone already knew the answer.

As the police women started picking up Swara Shekhar was going in for a slap but Sanskar saw this and stopped it immediately. "No, uncle by hitting Swara nothing will change it will just make matters more worse I brought the police here to catch Swara not get her hit."

Shekhar pulled his hand away and backed away even Sanskar could see Shekhar had tears in his eyes. Then the police man said "Is there anything else someone would like to say otherwise Ms. Swara is spending her days in a jail cell until a court's date can be set."

"Wait, Sanskar before I leave, I want to know how did you catch me" Swara asked.

"Does it matter Swara," Sanskar said.

"It matters to me think of it as doing me a favor before I never see you again " Swara replied.

Sanskar chuckled when Swara said favor and he replied with "Swara after everything you've done the last I want to give you is a favor, police take her away."

The police took her away but Swara could be still heard sobbing until the police cars had long gone. After that Sanskar and Vijay had left Ragini, Sharmista and Shekhar were the only people left.

They were still standing in the same spot until Ragini went to her room and then so did the others.

Next day

"No bhai this can't be true." Lakshya said. Sanskar had told everyone the whole Swara incident. At first they didn't believe him but after he showed the recording everyone was shocked to the core.

"So where is Swara know" Parineeta asked.

"Swara is in a jail cell the court date hasn't been decided yet but it will be soon."

"Enough about this talk I don't want anymore negativity in my house let's just serve breakfast" Sujatha said.

Everyone agreed with her and they were about to go with her when Sanskar said something.

"One second I also want to tell you all something I'm not going to be living in this house anymore." Everyone was shocked to hear this especially Durga Prasad.

"but why beta" DP said.

"After all that's happened I don't think me living here is the best choice and I come home late so it disturbs everyone so I think me living alone would be better."

"Ok let me think about this talk to me in a few days." Durga prasad said as he was heading to the dining table.

Sanskar then very calmly said "Sorry bade papa but this isn't your decision to make it's mine and I've already made it."

DP was surprised by this Sanskar never made a huge decision like this without his consent.

'Sanskar beta your decision will affect the whole family."

"How so." Sanskar said.

Durga Prasad was left speechless he didn't know that Sanskar would question him so in a surrendered voice DP said "okay fine Sanskar you can leave now lets go eat."
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SO that was chapter 18

really sorry guys this week was really hectic for me and that's why I updated so late but next week will probably be a chill week. SO I'll update faster.

Anyways new characters will introduced next chapter for the new track and Swara won't be seen that much in this track.

Otherwise I hoped you liked this chapter and are having a nice day

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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Nice update😃😃😃
I love how you keep things simple and realistic in your FF and not add too much drama👏
Those little details like the white light blinding Ragini just make ur FF so relatable😃😃
Love how Sanskar refused to divulge details to Swara about how he caught her. Perhaps his protective nature towards Ragini and the fact that revealing Ragini as his accomplice could lead to Swara harboring thoughts of revenge towards Ragini in d long run shows the extent of care towards Ragini😳
I know I m very irregular with my comments but just want to say that I love reading ur FF and eagerly wait for ur updates😃
There is a different flavour to your FF which is something I can't highlight but it is intriguing enough to get hooked on to😃
Will try to update my comments on d other chapters too when I get the time😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Nice update😃😃😃

I love how you keep things simple and realistic in your FF and not add too much drama👏
Those little details like the white light blinding Ragini just make ur FF so relatable😃😃
Love how Sanskar refused to divulge details to Swara about how he caught her. Perhaps his protective nature towards Ragini and the fact that revealing Ragini as his accomplice could lead to Swara harboring thoughts of revenge towards Ragini in d long run shows the extent of care towards Ragini😳
I know I m very irregular with my comments but just want to say that I love reading ur FF and eagerly wait for ur updates😃
There is a different flavour to your FF which is something I can't highlight but it is intriguing enough to get hooked on to😃
Will try to update my comments on d other chapters too when I get the time😆😆


Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Thank God swara is arrested..
But why am I feeling it is not over yet??
She will be back..

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