Ragsan FF My Not So Simple Life Pt21 Pg13

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys it's me again this is my second fanfic so i hope you guys all enjoy
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Swara had chosen Lakshya it was simple as that Sanskar knew it but he felt broken. It was the same pain that he had felt when Kavita had died except she was dead. Swara was alive he had smiled his way through the engagement and the marriage.

He thought for once maybe Swara would recognize his fake smile his fake words but she didn't. Maybe this was his punishment this was his karma. All through his life what you do what you get but never once he thought while doing the horrible deeds something would come back to bite him.

Thinking all this as his karma he gladly accepted this marriage and finally it was all over. He wished the new couple congratulations and went on his way. He didn't go to his room he didn't felt like thinking about all the bad things that he had done or all of the bad things that happen.

For once today he just wanted all of it to go away and so he went right out the front door.


Ragini was sad Swara her perfect sister had gotten everything she wanted. She had gotten to marry Lakshya her one true love scratch that a piece of SH!T. Ragini realized that immediately she almost murdered her sister and much more.

For what, for Lakshya to humiliate her he didn't even think twice before showing every family member that video of her confessing all the pain and agony of just getting him to even notice her. Ragini thought in her mind "enough is enough I don't need Lakshya in fact i'm done with him".

Ragini felt a huge burden being lifted off her shoulders tonight she wanted to go to her favourite place a place where you could the whole of Kolkata and at night was a shinning pillar of light.

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So this was my part 1 if you guys want more tell me and also constructive criticism is always welcome
P.S Next part will be pretty shockig😉😉

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Wattpad Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/86647429-ragsan-ff-my-not-simple-life




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Posted: 8 years ago
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This seems interesting! 😃
Do send me a PM once you update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its really nice.. please do continue.. love ragini n sanskar to the core..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys it's me again thanks for all the reviews here is the second chapter hope you all enjoy
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Sanskar had the left the Maheshwari house and was driving in his car. The night was dark but he could see the shimmering stars. How he wished he was one of those shimmering stars high above watching below not having a single care in the world but he knew it couldn't be.

Sanskar knew where he wanted to go for the first time in forever 😃 it was his favorite place. A place where where you could see the whole of Kolkata.

Sanskar had finally reached the place it still was has beautiful as he remembered. The trees were slightly curved so that the made a little arch while the moonlight reflected off of the trees and pointed it to one place the middle. The middle had a bench only for two people it was a tiny bench and was the first time he had brought Kavita on a date.

Although something caught his eye their was a person sitting in the middle. As he got closer Sanskar thought she looked familiar. As he took one more step she suddenly turned around and they both shared eye-lock.

At first he was shocked this was Ragini but not she wasn't wearing a saree infact she was wearing a salwar kurta. He remembered the first time he had seen her she was wearing this exact before all the drama, the lies and the conspiracy's started.

After getting out of his shock Sanskar said "hi".

Ragini turned around and just went back to looking at the city like nothing had happened. Sanskar thought that "this is weird Ragini isn't usually like this" but he then went to the bench and sat beside her.

After a few minutes of both of them looking at the city Ragini finally said something "you know what's funny"

Sanskar being curious said "what?"

Ragini:"Both of us lost our love to the person we hated".

After thinking a while Sanskar said "i never loved Swara".

Ragini smiles and says "I never said anything about Swara, besides i could see it in your eyes that pain at the wedding smiling but being crying on the inside, see i know what that pain feels like but I've decided to let go."

Sanskar chuckles and says "you know whats funny what are the chances of me and you meeting on the same spot at the dead of night."

Ragini: "Sometimes I wish that i could've meet you earlier i feel like we would've been great friends."

Sanskar then takes his hand out of his pocket and says "Hey i'm Sanskar Maheshwari whats your name."

Ragini then shakes his hand and says i'm "Ragini Mahesw-, Ragini Gadodia nice to meet you Sanskar Maheswari."

Then they both turn around and talk, they don't talk about any plots or conspiracies they just talk like friends like they used to.
Ragini says "Hey Sanskar do you feel cold"

Sanskar says "No i don't do you?"

Shyly Ragini says "yes."

Sanskar then gives Ragini his jacket.

Ragini gets surprised and asks " you gave me your jacket but won't you feel the cold now."

Sanskar chuckles and says "it's okay i don't feel the cold that much i'm warm-blooded"

Ragini laughs and "thanks"

Sanskar then smiles and says "Remember Ragini no sorry or thank you's in friendship."

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So that was my second chapter in my story hoped you all enjoyed and 3rd chapter should be coming up pretty soon

Have a good day everyone
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so good!! Sanskar & Ragini could have made great friends in the show!
Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pheunli

This is so good!! Sanskar & Ragini could have made great friends in the show!

Waiting for the next part!


Thanks really means a lot part 3 is coming really soon probably tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice and interesting😊
Waiting for the story to unfold

Plz update soon and PM me😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey almost done the 3rd chapter should be up in 15 minutes glad your liking the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Hey friends thanks for all the wonderful reviews and without further ado here is chapter 3
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The chilly air had woken Sanskar up at first he was surprised since normally he would be sleeping in a warm cozy bed. As his eyes adjusted to the morning light he saw that he Ragini had fell asleep on the bench. Ragini was sleeping on his shoulders with her arm around him, Sanskar saw this as awkward but he didn't want to wake Ragini up.

As Sanskar was about to move, Ragini suddenly opened her eyes. At first she didn't know what was going on but then after a few seconds she quickly got up and turned around. Sanskar also quickly got up and said "Ragini I think it's uh time to go."

Ragini then remembers she told no one where she was going they all must be worried. Ragini quickly opens up her phone and sees 21 missed calls from her dad. She quickly turns around and tells Sanskar "please lets go i don't want them to call the cops or do something drastic."

Both ragini and Sanskar quickly went to Sanskar car. Sanskar quickly started up the car and sped. As Sanskar was driving he could see Ragini's cheeks were still red. Also he could still see she was wearing his jacket.

Around the halfway of there journey they get into this huge jam. Ragini then looks at her phone and sees it's almost lunch then suddenly her phone dies. Sanskar seeing this laughs

Ragini then asks "whats so funny"

Sanskar then replies "your phone just died at the moment your needed it most."

Ragini then makes a angry face and Sanskar then focuses on driving.

After 1 more hour of driving they finally reach Ragini's house. As soon as they step into the Badi Ragini's DadiMa and her parents come out.

Sharmista then asks "Ragini where were you, we were trying to contact you all night we were just about to go to the police station."

Ragini was about to answer but then Sanskar chimes in and says "Ragini was with me."

Everyone then gets this weird face

Sanskar realizing how weird that must've sounded he says "uhh i mean she was walking alone in the night and i realized it's not safe so i took her to my house since everyone sleeps my house late."

"But beta why didn't you call me in the morning" Sharmista said

Ragini says "I was helping out Swara with the dishes because she doesn't know how to make anything."

"Accha koi baath nahi chalo lunch kar thai hai" Sharmista said

"Sanskar beta you also come" Sharmista said in a loving tone.

Sanskar:"No aunty it's okay i don't feel hungry right now maybe next time."

Sharmista chuckles "OK Sanskar, but remember next time its mummy ji not aunty."

Sanskar:"OK bye mummy ji."

Sanskar leaves while Ragini, DadiMa and her parents go inside to have lunch. While sitting down Sharmista notices something "Ragini whose jacket is that."

"Oh it's Sanskar, I must've forgot to give it i'll go right now."

"Ragini beta give it to him tomorrow he must've left by now" DadiMa says.

Ragini nods her heads and eats her lunch.

Later that night

"Sharmista i don't think Ragini is telling the truth their something fishy going on." Shekhar says

Sharmista just smiles and says "don't think about to much and try to get some sleep."

Flashback

Sharmista picks up her phone and calls Swara. Swara picks up and Sharmista says "Swara is Ragini in with you shes not picking up my calls."

"No neither is Sanskar the whole family is worried for him." Swara says

Sharmista then smiles "okay Swara" then both of them talk about other things.

After a while Sharmista says "goodbye" to Swara and hangs up. Knowing that Ragini is safe and sound.

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So that was chapter 3, i will try to down some parts with Swara, Lakshya and some other family members next chapter. Also excuse me for my Hindi writing i can speak and understand but can't write so if they are any grammar mistakes just pm and i will fix them.

Chapter 4 also will be coming up tomorrow or the day after. Other then that hope you liked this chapter and are having a good day 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am liking the story!! Its nice and different too!! Looking forward to the next part!

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