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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey friends in my first post you can see i have add the PM LIST it's for people that want to get Pm'd whenever I post a new chapter

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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Another great update poor Sanskar hope he feels better soon aww Ragini believes him that's good can't wait to see what happens next hope you post the next part soon and it's long
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: rbb1

Another great update poor Sanskar hope he feels better soon aww Ragini believes him that's good can't wait to see what happens next hope you post the next part soon and it's long


Will try but thanks for the review 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Nice update..in your story character sketch is so different from the show.
Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Hey guys i'm having this glitch with India fourms where i'm not able to post I will try again in 2 hours
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Hello friends here is chapter 11 and hope you all enjoy it

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Sanskar opened his eyes he immediately noticed his throat was dry but his headache was gone. He felt cozy under the blanket and he almost didn't want to wake up from it but he did anyway. As he got up he noticed that it was night time and that he wasn't even in his room.

He then turned around and saw Ragini, she was sleeping on the chair beside him. He was about to go to sleep again since he didn't want to disturb her anymore. As he was about to lie down he heard Ragini's voice.

"Oh, Sanskar your awake now here let me get something for you."

Sanskar said in a hoarsely voice " water would be fine." Ragini immediately got a glass of water and gave it to Sanskar. After drinking it Sanskar's throat felt much better and could think properly again. As soon as he set his glass down Ragini hugged him.

It was a strong hug like never letting you go types, Sanskar was honestly surprised by this. Then Ragini said "Sanskar, I was so scared today I had all these thoughts running through my head never do that again Sanskar" Ragini's voice had even broken down.

Sanskar honestly didn't know what to do at this point he never really knew that Ragini cared that much for him. Ragini was still holding him in a bear hug and Sanskar was just holding her not really knowing what to do. After while Sanskar noticed that Ragini had fallen asleep on him.

Sanskar was also feeling pretty tried so he laid down and slept listening to Ragini breath coming up and down.

The next morning Sharmista noticed Ragini wasn't up it was 8. "that's weird, Ragini would be up by now." So Sharmista went and checked Ragini room she wasn't in there. Sharmista had a gut feeling that she might Ragini in Sanskar's room. So she went and there and opened the door there she saw Ragini on top of Sanskar.

Sharmista just quietly closed the door and went on her business smiling to herself.


While in the guest room Ragini opened her eyes and found herself on top of Sanskar. She immediately got up and went to her room. Few minutes after Ragini left Sanskar had woken up to. He thought Ragini would still be on top of him.


Sanskar then thought "it must've been a dream" but his heart told him that it was to real to be a dream. He could remember everything vividly Ragini's hand on his back, the smell of her hair everything.


Sanskar then got up and went to the hallway to say "thanks" to Sharmista for her hospitality. Just then Ragini also came out of her room as soon as she saw him she started blushing she could see her cheeks had turned a bright red.


Though Sanskar wasn't focused on her that he was more focused on her she looked so beautiful. He thought. While Ragini was also thinking the same thing they subconsciously moved closer to each other. While they were both staring at each other's eyes they could feel the tension rising.


They both knew what each other wanted and there lips got closer and closer until it was almost a millimeter away.


Just then they heard Sharmista calling them saying " it's time for breakfast." They both turned around and went to the dining table. Ragini was blushing even more now and her mom even asked her about it.


Ragini just made a excuse saying " she was on her special day." Sharmista then understood and they all started eating. After eating Sanskar said very kindly thanked Sharmista for her hospitality and said " if she ever needed anything she could without hesitation."


Sharmista then said "there is one thing you could do."


"Yeah anything." Sanskar said


" I have to go to my sister's house tomorrow for a couple of days and Shekhar also has to go for a business conference out of town so if you could house sit the house with Ragini for a couple of days it would mean a lot." Sharmista was hoping that her plan would work.


Sanskar was stunned Ragini's mother playing cupid "this day just keeps on getting better and better" Sanskar thought.


"Yeah it won't be much of a problem i'll just bring my laptop and work here for a couple of days" Sanskar said.


Ragini was also stunned she thought " why is my mother playing cupid for us, did she see us almost kiss."


" Oh thank you Sanskar you have done me a great favor." Sharmista said


Then Sanskar said " I should be getting home now all the other family members must be worried for me."


" Oh right, here Sanskar I've packed some kheer for give it to your family tell them its from me." Sharmista said.


"Okay, I will and thanks again Sharmista aunty."


" Uhh Ragini why don't you Sanskar out i'l be in the kitchen." Sharmista said and left.


Then Ragini and Sanskar went for the door, Ragini opened the door and was about to say bye when Sanskar kissed her. She didn't respond at first because she didn't know how to but then she got the hang of it and started kissing him back to.


After 10 seconds Sanskar stopped the kiss and whispered in Ragini's ear " bye Ragini see you tomorrow" and he left. As Sanskar was walking out of the badi Ragini also whispered " bye Sanskar see you tomorrow and closed the door secretly smiling on the inside


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Wow this was a really heavy chapter to write. First off I want to start saying there will be some changes to the ff from the main show I.E family wise. Other wise the rest will basically be the same.


Also we have now established that Ragsan now love each other but i won't be showing up the marriage track anytime soon I want there bond to grow more.


Also next chapter more evil Swara and more more cute Ragsan moments so stay tuned for that in chapter 12.


Other then that i hoped you liked this chapter and are having a good day.





Edited by YOLOevery - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
This was an great update I loved it aww sharmista is such a cool
Mum l, they kissed that's wow but them falling in love is really
Sweet and cute, loved the long update keep posting them can't wait for the next part then spending time alone will be great to read
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Hello guys it's me again and today I have brought you chapter 12 hope you all enjoy
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Sharmista was happy, Ragini had finally found someone instead of Lakshya. She was especially happy since it was Sanskar.

Swara was not happy far from, "who knows what would've happened with Ragini and Sanskar alone" Swara thought. Just then Lakshya came in and he locked the door, Swara knew what he wanted. Lakshya then came closer and closer to her until they were only a few millimeters apart.

Lakshya was going in for the kiss when Swara yelled "Stop!" Lakshya was taken back by this and moved a few steps back. "Swara what happened" Lakshya said.

"Lakshya, I want a divorce" Swara said.

Lakshya was shocked by this "everything was going great then out of the blue Swara wants a divorce what's going on" he thought.

"Swara your joking right." Lakshya was hoping that would be the case.

"No Lakshya i'm not i don't feel like us i working out" Swara said

"Swara what happened is there anything I did." Lakshya was hoping that this matter could be resolved now.

"No Lakshya it's me and my decision is finally you'll be getting the divorce papers in a couple of days." Then Swara went to her wardrobe and started putting all her clothes in her suitcase while Lakshya was on the ground pleading with her to stay.

Once she was down she went out of her room and to the door. With Lakshya still behind her and still pleading. Once she came down everyone in the Maheshwari was looking at her they all thought that she was going somewhere with Lakshya but that changed very soon.

They saw Lakshya pleading with Swara not to leave they were all confused so Durga Prasad said "Swara, Lakshya what is happening."

" I'm getting a divorce from Lakshya" Swara said coldly. Everyone was taken back at this why in the world Swara all of a sudden get a divorce from Lakshya they all though.

" Swara whats wrong why do you want a divorce" Annapurna asked.

"Lakshya and me aren't working out that's it and before you say we can solve the problem we can't because there is nothing left to fix" then Swara went straight to door and left. Everyone was left dumbfounded.

Few hours later Sanskar comes in through the door with boxes of sweets and yells " Hello everyone I have great news!" but he finds everyone sitting on the couch quiet. With the exception of Lakshya who is crying. Sanskar's smile quickly fades "what the hell happened why is Lakshya crying" Sanskar thinks.

Sanskar immediately goes to Lakshya and asks him " Lakshya why are you crying, what happened."

" Swa Swa Swara say she wants a divorce and I can't live with out her." Lakshya replied in between sobs.

This was it for Sanskar it he went to his room and called Swara, she picked up after 2 rings.

"Hello Sanskar you called me because you got my little present right."

"That was your present my brother Lakshya is broken to pieces while you talk to me about presents."

"Well what else should I do anyways this was necessary to make me your wife."

"Swara what the hell is wrong with you I told you I don't love you anymore and I never can and besides I love someone else" that last part slipped out of Sanskar's mouth.

"No! Mr.Sanskar you can't love someone else your mine and your only mine."

Sanskar had to do something quick he knew Swara would eventually fit the pieces together and find out who he loves.

"Wait a second Mr.Sanskar I know who you like my sister Ragini you've been spending more time with her than anyone lately but she's just a obstacle in our love i'll make sure that she gets what she needs so that we can finally be one."

Sanskar knew he didn't have enough time he had to say something to make Swara confused-and give him time to get to Ragini he then got this brilliant idea.

"Swara I don't love Ragini."

"You don't Sanskar I was worried there for a moment so that means you love me right." Swara said excitedly.

"No Swara I don't love you or Ragini I I am gay" never in his life Sanskar thought he would be saying those 3 words but he hoped it would give him enough time to get to Ragini before Swara could.

On the other hand Swara was shocked by this but then she heard the call cut, she wasn't focused on that she was thinking " Sanskar gay well i'll just need to find his boyfriend then me and him can finally be married." While also thinking how to make her divorce story conceivable to her family especially her sister.

Then Swara said " driver make it fast to the Badi I have a lot of unpacking to do."

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So that was chapter 12, I'm thinking of handing some other concepts into this story like homo sexuality since we don't see a lot of that in Indian TV shows. Now don't worry I'm not going to add sex scenes or something like that but I'm thinking of making one family member come out of the closet (NOT Sanskar, Ragini, Swara or Lakshya or any elderly people on the show).

Reason i'm doing this is because I want people to know being gay or a lesbian is nothing bad and people don't need to hat on them. Anyways I would love to know your guys opinions so comment down below what you guys think.

And as always i hoped you liked this chapter and are having a nice day 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
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Don't worry will unreserve it very soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
I really love RagSan. Tevar actually look good together. They would have made a great pair. There are very less number of FF on them and i am glad you made one.
Gay and lesbian thing is a concept that's not been explored much.
Swara for the first time is shown evil. Everytime it was Ragini the obsessive lover, committing crimes.

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