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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am in love with ragsan...
They are amazing..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey ! Just read ur story and I must say ur concept and the chapters you have written seem really interesting👏😃 I love how you are developing their bond😳😳
Loved that line about the phone battery dying when u most need it😆
I m a bit rushed so unable to give u a detailed comment for each chapter so will just say that I m really liking thus story and look forward to reading the next part soon😃
Love ur writing style and hope u continue it soon😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This should have been the first line of my comment Though😆😆
Really glad to see a Ragsan story on IF after so many days😃😳
Thank u for writing this🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

This should have been the first line of my comment Though😆😆

Really glad to see a Ragsan story on IF after so many days😃😳
Thank u for writing this🤗


Thank you for amazing comment it really means alot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really nice story can't wait to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for updating late I was busy with some stuff abut anyways this is the 4th chapter hope you enjoy
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Ragini had just woken up happy to find herself on a bed instead of. Everytime Ragini thought of that moment something just felt weird. Not the bad kind of weird or the good one just weird. Ragini then told herself to stop thinking about this and went to go ready.

After she was finished getting ready she saw a jacket. At first she didn't recognize the jacket but then it clicked it was Sanskar's. She thought to herself "why do I have his jacket still I should've returned it". Ragini made a mental note to return it today or tomorrow.

Everytime she looked at the jacket it just reminded her of that moment when she woke up. Even thinking about it just made her feet weird.


Sanskar woke up he had the best sleep in the world. He didn't know why today he didn't wake up covered in sweat or had a terrible nightmare. His mind raced back to yesterday morning seeing ragini sleeping like that she looke-.

"Wait what am I thinking" Sanskar thought but his mind kept racing back to that one moment, that one second where everything was frozen as if the while world had stopped moving.

"Ugh this is so wrong come on Sanskar if I keep thinking this somethings going to happen and I don't want last time happen😳😳".

Sanskar finally got those thoughts out of mind😳 and took a shower to get ready for work. After coming out of the shower and getting dressed for work he saw that his jacket was missing. Now normally this wouldn't be a problem but this time his jacket had his wallet in it which had basically everything.

He tried remembering where his jacket could be and the. He remembered last time he gave is jacket to ragini.

Ragini was preparing breakfast for everyone with her mom then suddenly she hears a a ring. It's her phone. Her mom tells her to go she who's calling she can take of the food while she's gone. Ragini picks up the phone and hears a.

"Hi"

"who is this" Ragini asks.

"It's me Sanskar".

Ragini again gets weird feeling but she manages to say

"Oh it's you Sanskar. "

"Uh I thought I was in contacts remember you gave me your number when we were a uh planning conspiracies" Sanskar feels really awkward saying this.

"Anyways why are you calling me"
Ragini says

"I think I left my jacket with you when we were in the-" Sanskar quickly gets cut off by ragini

"Oh yeah I have your jacket it's with me ill drop it at your house shortly. " Ragini says all this really quickly.

" I have a better idea I'm getting late for office and swara and Lucky really want to come here so I'll drop them at your house and I'll pick up my jacket from there sound good. " Sanskar says

" Uh really OK sounds good" Ragini says

" okay then bye see you at your house" Sanskar says.

"Bye" Ragini says.

Then the call cuts.

Sanskar then looks down and says "dammit you always come at the worst times 😆."

While ragini walks down and sees herself in the mirror. Her cheeks are red flaming red and she hasn't even put any makeup on.

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So guys this was my second chapter hoped you guys all enjoyed and today's chapter was a extra cheeky but it usually won't be like this.

Also for the upcoming track I will show some evil Swara since I really want to see her being selfish and evil now for what you'll see that in the upcoming chapter hint hint his name starts with a S

But anyways hoped you enjoyed it and next chapter coming pretty soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Sweet update I liked it can't wait to read what happens next hope you post it soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello friends it is me and this the the 5th chapter in this story one special part about this story is that you will see some hints of Swara turning evil other then that you just have to read the story to find out more. So hope you enjoy this chapter.
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The sun was at it's peek, it was 1:30 and the whole Gadodia family was waiting for Sanskar,Swara and Lakshya to arrive.Finally Sharmista sees a a trio of people entering the badi she realizes it's them.

Before Sanskar can knock on the door Sharmista opens it. She quickly invites all of them inside she gives Swara a big hug while she blesses Lakshya and Sanskar. Sanskar quickly notices something the aroma of the house is pleasant.

Sharmista is what brought Sanskar out of his thoughts "Uh Sanskar i think Ragini has your jacket why don't you go to her room."

"Oh, okay thanks" Sanskar gets up and walks towards the hallway. There are only three rooms so it doesn't take him that long to find Ragini's room. He knocks on the door and a hears a voice "who is it."

Now normally Sanskar would just say "it's Sanskar" but he was feeling a little pranky and decided to prank Ragini.

Sanskar makes his best Lakshya voice and says "it's me Lakshya i uh want to talk to you."

"What is there to talk about your a worthless piece of sh!t."

Sanskar got taken back by this but he did agree somewhat.

Sanskar then says in his Lakshya voice "your right i am a piece of sh!t but I think my brother likes you." Sanskar cracked up on the last part and hoped Ragini didn't notice.

Ragini did notice and thought to herself "oh your pranking me Sanskar Maheswari it's on."

"Well if your brother does like me that much I suppose I can give him a chance" Ragini is trying really hard not to laugh.

Sanskar still doing Lakshya's voice says "Also if you two do decide to date can you stop calling me a piece of sh!t."

Ragini thinks for a moment and says " how about i call you 🤬 🤬🤬🤬instead."

Sanskar was trying so hard not to laugh he was almost in tears but he somehow managed to say "I think the first one sounds good."

Then both Ragini and Sanskar hear Sharmista saying "Sanskar, Ragini what it taking so long lunch is ready come quick."

Sanskar knew his prank was over and starts laughing really hard he then trips, the door opens and he falls on Ragini. They make eye contact for a few seconds but then they both start laughing again. Sanskar gets up but is still laughing but not as hard as before he helps Ragini up and says "sorry" but that was too good.

He then looks at her face she laughing lightly but her cheeks are red. Ragini stops laughing and says "lets go before they yell at us again."

As they were leaving Ragini says "Sanskar don't forget your jacket again here." Ragini gives him his jacket with his wallet and they all sit down to eat. 2 minutes later Sanskar sends Ragini a text
saying "piece of Sh!t."

Ragini while eating her food she opens up her messages and sees the text she tries so hard not to laugh you can see tears in her eyes from trying to hold all that laughter in.

"Ragini are you okay their's tears in your eyes." Ragini opens her mouth to say a word but ends up laughing instead which in turn makes Sanskar laugh. After two minutes of non-stop laughing Swara, Lakshya and Sharmista have a very weird look on there face.

Swara asks "what was all that about."

Both Ragini and Sanskar reply "nothing." they both chuckle and start eating there food.

Seeing this makes Swara jealous this was a new feeling to Swara but she quickly just focused on eating her food.

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So that was chapter 5 I really wanted to have some funny and lighter moments between Ragsan so I thought of this prank scene and also in the upcoming chapters so will see a evil side of Swara but also some very nice Ragsan moments. I also want to give many thanks to all of you that have reviewed and read this story part 5 seems like a milestone and without you guys this would've never happened.

I hope you enjoyed chapter 5 and chapter 6 coming very shortly. Until then hope your having a nice day😃
Edited by YOLOevery - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great! I am liking this story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really sweet update can't wait to read what happens next

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