SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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@ Tani, Nita, Aheli and Talia,
Updating...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear All,
Finally, it is done. Chapter 1 or rather: Act I - Part 1 is up on page 1. I am

Do read and let me know your views.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res ..I am first..Off to read

Unres


Nyna dear🤗.. Be prepared i am going to start my ramblings.. I love it , i love it and i really really love it ..It was so amazing..I am going to keep rereading it till you update the next part... It was so beautiful and i love my SwaSan..Swara take on love..I am kind of on her side..Well i might change my opinion if i met a Sanskar of my own😉


You know the feeling that when you start reading something you dont want it to end.That how i felt reading part 1..I loved reading it but part of me really didnt want to see the last line as i want it to be going on and on..


It was so beautiful dear, i am already in love with Sanskar and Swara..Thankfully Kavitha decided to marry someone else..My Sanskar is free and Swara is as well.. 😳..It was simply awesome Nyna dear..


Sanskar believes in love, Swara doesnt..Great..Sanskar mission to win back Kavita..Wow Sanskar is really an sweetheart.. It Swara gain and Kavita loss.. And we got AdRi love story as well..


As always i never get proper words to express how much i liked something but you know that already right. Just letting you know I really loved it Nyna dear and when will i get my part 2.. I am going to be waiting from now onwards,,,


With lots of love

Nita
Edited by NitaReid - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb Update.. Really like the concept
Update soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res nyna ...baby
Unres dear...

Sorry for delay nynu...busy in eid celebrations...😃

😃 from where we start..hmmm.. Amaranthine..the min i read this word..i googled its meaning...😆 you all introduce variety of innovative titles ...😊 well Amarathine...unfading...everlasting...this SS will be amaranthine forever in our hearts...

Act 1 part1 was itself big enough to be a marvellous OS...i just loved it flow..two strangers ...one relaxing spot...destiny played its game n both became i wont say friends but partners / one who share seat in silence..n slowly bonded..assumed about each other...n then finally talked their heart out...i just loved this slow n steady journey towards friendship...

Both shared their problems n made a deal to help each other in their own specific mission😳..i just loved it..though mention of kavita gave me mini heart attack..but thank u for this gift...she is gone forever..this was the bestest thing in this part..kavita married n gone..phew...😆 now we can concentrate on swasan fully...😳 ...i just loved climax...sansku giving handkerchief to swara...wondering what will happen next??? Will raglak unite???

Adarsh n pari got their part of lovestory..i loved it...😳

Update next soon darling..😉

Love n kissy
Talia😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Nyna :)
No surprise that I loved loved & loved Chapter 1/Part 1 of Act 1 very much!
I really loved the concept when I read the beginning and I was so waiting for the first chapter! And I really loved it to the core & waiting eagerly to read next chapters!
Res:
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res ..I am first..Off to read

Unres


Nyna dear🤗.. Be prepared i am going to start my ramblings.. I love it , i love it and i really really love it ..It was so amazing..I am going to keep rereading it till you update the next part... It was so beautiful and i love my SwaSan..Swara take on love..I am kind of on her side..Well i might change my opinion if i met a Sanskar of my own😉

Dear Nita, I so love your ramblings, so do not worry. And I am happy you liked it. Swara's take on love, well the serial could have capitalised on that, considering that there is no male figure, it could translate to Swara have a very disgusting view on love. So I simply could not resist it. And only Sanskaar can change how Swara feels.
And wishing that you to meet a Sanskaar of your own😊

You know the feeling that when you start reading something you dont want it to end.That how i felt reading part 1..I loved reading it but part of me really didnt want to see the last line as i want it to be going on and on..

That is indeed a compliment and I think I am going to read this comment a few times too.😳

It was so beautiful dear, i am already in love with Sanskar and Swara..Thankfully Kavitha decided to marry someone else..My Sanskar is free and Swara is as well.. 😳..It was simply awesome Nyna dear..

Absolutely, I can never really get rid of Kavita from my tales (unless I want to show Sanskaar has never ever had a woman in his life or Swara does not need competition) but then I end her track pretty soon. Often she would only appear in Flashback or conversations. And yes both are free, Sanskaar just has to fall for Swara and she, well she does not believe in love, will she recognise that emotion?

Sanskar believes in love, Swara doesnt..Great..Sanskar mission to win back Kavita..Wow Sanskar is really an sweetheart.. It Swara gain and Kavita loss.. And we got AdRi love story as well..

That was nice (though the idea is not a very new one, even the serial touched on it) we have the male protagonist as a champion of love and the female protagonist does not even acknowledge the existence of that word. Well, Kavita never realised what a gem of a man Sanskaar was, who is blessed with the love a of a man who is willing to do anything for you, because you like it? Rare breed of gentlemen.! AdRi, the serial ruined them, beyond redemption😡

As always i never get proper words to express how much i liked something but you know that already right. Just letting you know I really loved it Nyna dear and when will i get my part 2.. I am going to be waiting from now onwards,,,

Nita, your words are beautiful and I can make out how much you liked. Will update part 2 soon. I have the draft is place, just one round of final editing.


With lots of love

Nita


Dear Nita,

Replied in blue above.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😳Will wait
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Nyna :)

No surprise that I loved loved & loved Chapter 1/Part 1 of Act 1 very much!
I really loved the concept when I read the beginning and I was so waiting for the first chapter! And I really loved it to the core & waiting eagerly to read next chapters!
Res:


Dear Nupur,

I am so happy to see that you loved the chapter. I think I going to have a very nice Monday😊

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nyna dear,
Am I late ? Sorry if I am but as you know I am not much active these days.

First of all, I so loved that pics idea. They were amazing. Coming to chapter one, it was an amazing read. As I have told you earlier also, I love your write-ups.

Most favourite thing or lines in this chapter -

Love is just a word, love stories are illusion, soulmates are a myth and happily ever after do not exist * dreaming * I am yet not over this .
I found it so so so beautiful.

Love
- Harshada
Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago

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