SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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showrav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Nice update dear

loved swasan moments very much so by helping helping she fall on him.

Here also swara have family problem🤢 now here laksh did opposite of the show

love swara little jealousy toward kavity

update soon dear & thanks for the pm

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Nyna.. darling... I wanted to read now... Very eager too but i wanted to read when I'm relaxing not in a hurry... Soo im postponing it to after Eid... Hope you understand me... I know you will...

Till then res...

Unres... I thought.. I can't..

Nyna .. 🤗... Ohh man I felt like cheated you finished with the update... Ohh now I have to wait for long... 😭..

I have never been greedy in my life before... Not after either. But for now feeling greedy.. want to read more.. more more..

Just more... I loved their every meets in the coffee shop.. my cappuccino.. you love coffee.. how can I forget that.. I'm loving the fact you're adding your favorites in it..

I'm happy that laksh rejected swara if not ohh.. no.. again I can't shine that bridge... Notebook.. nice selection.. MATHEMATICSmy genre.. love you for that...

That pink shirt.. it trigger my laughing sense.. ohh man I know how it'll feel.. even my son hate to wear a pink shirt.. even I gifted my husband a lite pink shirt.. profusely...

Loved it darling.. i enjoyed it a lot.. mmmuah..

With love..

Kam...

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Soundless_mirth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hey nyna!
you have no idea how excited i was when you said you'd update soon!!
And then i read this. OhMyGod you would think this was a sweet little chapter but my heart went through a series of roller coasters reading this one piece and can i say i absolutely positively loved it! Loved loved loved it! I eagerly await the next update and im sending you virtual laddus for posting the story in the first place!
Lots of love
~fati

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb Update.. Really like the concept
Update soon and thanks for pm

Dear Sneha,

Thank you - it means a lot to me, as I was a little worried about the concept.😳

Will pm once I update.

Love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Nyna dear,
Am I late ? Sorry if I am but as you know I am not much active these days.

First of all, I so loved that pics idea. They were amazing. Coming to chapter one, it was an amazing read. As I have told you earlier also, I love your write-ups.

Most favourite thing or lines in this chapter -

Love is just a word, love stories are illusion, soulmates are a myth and happily ever after do not exist * dreaming * I am yet not over this .
I found it so so so beautiful.

Love
- Harshada

Dear Harshada,

You are not late - and even if you are, no sorry!

I am thrilled you loved those pics - I spent quite some time on it and even in the end was not too sure - was actually thinking that it was a little weird.

And Swara's dialogue - so like her, but then considering what she has gone through she would carry that strong conviction - which could play a role in the future (she has conveniently forgotten about her Maa and Baba - how many get a second chance in life?). I am glad you like that line.😳

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: showrav24
Nice update dear
loved swasan moments very much so by helping helping she fall on him.
Here also swara have family problem🤢 now here laksh did opposite of the show
love swara little jealousy toward kavity
update soon dear & thanks for the pm

Dear Showrav,

That is true, by helping him she would be falling for him though she will take some time to start believing in love per se😉.

Yes - Swara's family problems are the same (though that little tale about her Dida's parents - not sure if it is in the serial)

Laksh - yes, this is the twist, he is engaged to Swara but falls for Ragini - I twisted it so that it would strengthen Swara's belief that love does not exist. And the more the time she spends with Sanskaar, the more she realises that Kavita is a fool and is jealous, a little - not because she is falling for Sanskaar (that was in the first two weeks) but because she would like to know how it could be to be loved by someone like Sanskaar.

Will update soon.

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Nyna.. darling... I wanted to read now... Very eager too but i wanted to read when I'm relaxing not in a hurry... Soo im postponing it to after Eid... Hope you understand me... I know you will...
Till then res...

Dear Kam,

Take all the time you need, I just love the fact that you are reading it.🤗

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Soundless_mirth
Hey nyna!
you have no idea how excited i was when you said you'd update soon!!
And then i read this. OhMyGod you would think this was a sweet little chapter but my heart went through a series of roller coasters reading this one piece and can i say i absolutely positively loved it! Loved loved loved it! I eagerly await the next update and im sending you virtual laddus for posting the story in the first place!
Lots of love
~fati

Dear Fati,

Firstly, I loved the virtual laddus (I generally love laddus, but virtual ones are better - no weight gain😉)

And as a writer, I am thrilled that you found this chapter to be a roller coaster ride. It is still going to be a sweet story in the sense that there will not be any villainy of sorts (Dadi turning to a fire breathing dragon, sibling murdering sibling etc.) my protagonist's own beliefs and choices will cause enough heartache😉

love,

Nyna