SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Dear Khushi and Viji,

I know I am long overdue to get back to your lovely comments, 😭😭😭it is just that the writing bug bit me and I had to simply get it out of my system.

Just finished posting in on the MF and am now too tired to make reply properly.

Will get back tomorrow.

love you loads,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Khushi and Viji,
I know I am long overdue to get back to your lovely comments, 😭😭😭it is just that the writing bug bit me and I had to simply get it out of my system.

Just finished posting in on the MF and am now too tired to make reply properly.

Will get back tomorrow.

love you loads,
Nyna

Nynu 🤗 🤗

Take all the time you need...I will be un resing on my 2nd comment slot for Chapter 5 today. 😊 2 comments slots, 2 un res's, as promised. 😆😉

Liked Guardian Angel II , a lot. Left an interim comment there, will be back in a couple of days (after I post DbC # 6).

BTW, a thought struck me about a potential tagline for Sunny boy: "The Handsome guy with the Amaranthine Tie" 😆😉.

Sunny would look extremely dashing (when does he not!) With an Amaranthine tie, to set off his classy, sophisticated all-black ensemble. 😉

Lots of Love

Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Dear Viji,

@ bold above, check your PM and let me know, if it meets your approval might upload😳😳😳 (I did not read your tagline, 😭 so used a different one, but modify for this too. )

love,
Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

I shall split my comment into two 😆😉 So 2 un res's will be done. 😊

Love

Viji

Nynu...🤗🤗🤗

Here I come, merrily skipping in for my second Un Res, for the last third or so of this delectable Chapter 5. 😊 I actually wanted to do this yesterday, but I got caught in typing up final proof of DbC #6, I am 2/3rds the way through, I reckon. Should be able to post (all going well, touch wood!) tomorrow.

What I loved in this latter part of the chapter was the well connected weave of various threads you had drawn before. Swara's doctorate, her field of expertise and study...it was wonderful, the way you linked that to RagLak's plan of ensuring her appointment as the consultant/ expert who would be working with the Maheshwaris for the restructuring/ re engineering of their Diversified corporate entity. And expectedly, Swara put up a fight, she would not be able to bear the fact of working with Sanskaar in close proximity, with him being unable to recognize her, and being rather indifferent to her. Sigh... 😭

But the Dean was very obviously in favor of the proposal, RagLak had certainly done their homework very well indeed, to ensure that Swara would have no wiggle room to escape from this.

I loved the way you described the reactions of various family members once Swara got back. That moment with Ragini in her room, the reactions of Durga Prasad and Ram Prasad...it was so well done. I love stories where these supporting/ parallel characters also are explored, their reactions and motives delved into. And the way you do that in your fics is really special.

One conversation I absolutely adored, was the SanLak one where Lakshya somehow persuaded his Bhai to appoint Swara, though Sanskaar was not initially so inclined. I get the official reasons for his reluctance---all very well reasoned, no doubt. Her practical experience in this field was limited, and he might have wanted someone with more industry experience in corporate restructuring. Plus, the fact that she was Ragini's sister (the only relationship that Sanskaar was now conscious of) might make it seem that her appointment, sans all the requisite experience, was something along the lines of nepotism. Something which Sanskaar, conscientious and fastidious as he is, would obviously have balked at.

What I am a bit unsure of, was if there was another subconscious/ unconscious reason for his reluctance as well. Is he somehow wary, of the effect an apparently unknown person has on him? He felt so soothed by her voice, it filled him with such a sense of warmth and familiarity---might Sanskaar be wary as to what implications that has? But then, Sanskaar is always one to take the bull by the horns...so I am not very sure, frankly. Just that this thought struck me.

The way Lakshya persuaded him, the words he used. 👏 👏 That was a subtle, lovely touch there, Nynu. Sanskaar recollecting ---not the conversation itself, nor the person to whom he said this, nor the situation. But he just felt a satisfying sense of warmth somehow, an echo of him having used the same words once. 👏

So the much anticipated meeting happens...and poor Swara is filled with a helpless rage, when Sanskaar not only failed to recognize her (which she expected, but it still hurt like crazy), but also the fact that he seemed so distant and cold with her. That easy and warm friendliness had now been replaced by a slightly cold, overtly professional demeanor; and that cut Swara very deeply. Especially when Sanskaar left the discussion for her and Lucky to carry on, and moved away. That really raised her hackles!

So now in her anger, I wonder what Swara would do? 😉 A few tart remarks, some clash of personalities? I rather like to think Sanskaar would be more than a little intrigued by this petite little firebrand! 😆

Waiting eagerly for chappie 6!

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Aheli,

Take your time, there is absolutely no rush. Hope you enjoyed your vacation.

love,
Nyna

Nyna! 🤗
Unresed @45. 😃 And yeah, I enjoyed my vacation dear. 😃

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Dear All,

I am sorry that I am still lagging in getting back to your comments, I had additional workload, an unexpected personal emergency to attend to and as though this was not enough, I so gotten carried away by Viji's request that I had to do something about it.

And being the showie Libran that I am😳😳😳, I am now posting my amateur efforts here.

To Viji and Lucky: For being the inspiration behind my stories and my banners"

This is what Viji wanted:

And this what my interpretation was (I, in my hurry, missed out the tagline she had asked for and wrote one of my own keeping the current track in mind😊😊)

love,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear All,
I am sorry that I am still lagging in getting back to your comments, I had additional workload, an unexpected personal emergency to attend to and as though this was not enough, I so gotten carried away by Viji's request that I had to do something about it.

And being the showie Libran that I am😳😳😳, I am now posting my amateur efforts here.

To Viji and Lucky: For being the inspiration behind my stories and my banners"

This is what Viji wanted:

And this what my interpretation was (I, in my hurry, missed out the tagline she had asked for and wrote one of my own keeping the current track in mind😊😊)

love,
Nyna

Where is that dreamy eyed emoticon when you need one? Ok...I shall make do with these...

😳 ☺️ 🤪

Very enthralling banners Nynu...one could gaze at them for a looong time without blinking 😉😆

Where is that last one? The warrior and the storm? 😳

P.S: I am also going all 😳☺️ at all your lovely words. Means a lot. 🤗🤗

Love

Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Res Nynu,

Am drowning in work, meetings and some very stressful situations with my (relatively) new team so apologies in advance for late readings and even later commenting! Will be here to bore as soon as time permits xoxo

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Res Nynu,
Am drowning in work, meetings and some very stressful situations with my (relatively) new team so apologies in advance for late readings and even later commenting! Will be here to bore as soon as time permits xoxo

Dear Shru,

Take all the time you need. I have read your comment on Kosmos Connection - and I am currently walking around in a daze, a very warm and delirious one 😳😳😳

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago