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blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hi khushi

It really was a beautiful OS. Such pure love that brought tears in the eyes. Lines where Sanskar says that nobody except swara might miss him but she is precious to more people really was heart breaking.

Love,veena.

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Hi khushi
It really was a beautiful OS. Such pure love that brought tears in the eyes. Lines where Sanskar says that nobody except swara might miss him but she is precious to more people really was heart breaking.
Love,veena.

Veena 🤗

Thank you so much ..

I must admit it was painful for me too writing this OS ..

I gald it give you this strong emotions

Khushi

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice one...
It reminded me of one OS I read long back on same plot but in that one, the girl donated her heart to her love.

Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Nice one...
It reminded me of one OS I read long back on same plot but in that one, the girl donated her heart to her love.

Thank you .. 🤗

The idea of concept it not originaly mine .. I have read stories on that the person donated the heart for his/her love

Even in moves .. I watched one where the mother donated her heart for her son ..

It describe the love in most unconditional way .. sacrificing you life for the one you love .. that just ❤️

This OS .. it just my take for this idea ..

Khushi

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Unres on pg 1 😭

Edited by -LumosMaxima- - 9 years ago

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -LumosMaxima-
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I will edit this comment soon
Edit: Okay this is not done. Sanskaar can't die. 😭 This is extremely painful. I just don't know how to express myself but that letter.. Its heartbreaking. It really made me sad. Those lines where Sanskaar is saying nobody will miss him except Swara and eventually Swara will also move on, that part really made me sad. I don't know what to say. Your writing is awesome but this os is very painful. 😭

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Thank you so much ..

I am sorry you found this OS painful .. and made you cry ..

I promise next time I will write a happy one ..

Khushi

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: StarySKY

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Thank you so much ..

I am sorry you found this OS painful .. and made you cry ..

I promise next time I will write a happy one ..

Khushi

Yes please write a happy one. I will be waiting 😳