SwaSan 3S ~The Trials of the Dead ~ Prologue pg 1

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Hola all ..!! I have been disappearing in the mist for quite sometime now . This is my try in horror quite new for me ! I haven't seen many movies in this genre . It is an experiment , would love to know your views regarding this
Prologue is posted below . Do tell your views


P.S.- During this time I also learnt some of the glitter graphics and wanted
you all about it . ( Do tell me about that too 😉😉 )

Love

Soundharya ..❤️
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3 August 2015

It was a warm morning in the maheshwari household. It was like a traffic happening around , Men getting ready to leave for their workplace and the womenfolk packing their lunch and arranging the breakfast table. It took whole 10 minutes for silence to spread.

Exactly at 8:30 , all the members of the family were seated in the dining table, it was the rulr made by durgaprasad sharp 8:30 they have to assemble in the table or else their breakfast is Cancelled'. They started to eat the delicious dishes made by their wives for they family . Another rule was also made by him talking prohibited' , according to him opening their mouth in the dinning hall is meant only for eating and not talking , which the family members considered very old-fashioned and monotonous but, there had no choice they had to obey him ,he never changed his policies and would never too and if they go against his orders , this may create many problems leading to a rift between the family . To avoid such unwanted differences they decided to stay quiet.

After around 15 minutes ,

'so..'' , started durgaprasad soon after their breakfast . All turned towards him curiously to know what he is about to say .

' I am very happy with you all Adarsh, Sanskaar and Laksh , your hardwork and dedication has brought us success in establishing Maheshwari Industries in New York and so we have...''

He smiles seeing his brother ram and continues...'' decided to give you all a gift ... not something like money or any other commodity , It is spending time with family '. A confused look emerged the family.

'' A two day trip to Tarapore ''

all the family members rejoiced unaware of the danger that awaits for them .


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Res 😎
Unres in dhina dhina style


Pooja welcome back 🤗

Aur sab stories ka kya hua 😕

Aur ek baat mere comment pe 4 likes kaha se aagaye hai 🤪

Now coming to story

Superb story 👏
Toh dp khaadoos old man who rule everyone 😈

Tarapur interesting 😉 sanskar ki tara aur lakshya ki pur and adharsh ko baba ji ka thullu 🤣

Damn excited for the story update soon
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I thought you were still Res.. So waited.. And sujoy beat me to it 😆.. Read the prologue dear.. It is really interesting.. Dp rules the house. What happens on the picnic .. I am excited to know.. Do update soon dear..

Love

Nita
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Originally posted by: NitaReid

I thought you were still Res.. So waited.. And sujoy beat me to it 😆.. Read the prologue dear.. It is really interesting.. Dp rules the house. What happens on the picnic .. I am excited to know.. Do update soon dear..

Love

Nita

Nita di ! I was actually going to quote as soon as I saw your like you are first not sujay 😛 and regarding the prologue it got deleted due to some mishap and thus I wrote it all again
Thanks for viewing this first I am super happy !!


Love
Soundharya😳
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Sujay ... Maine Unres kar diya ab Thu bhi Unres kar de 😃
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Awesome...👍🏼
Waiting for next part eagerly
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Hey Soundharya!

Wow - a horror tale! The prologue is very interesting and set the scene for the autocratic maheshwari head DP who rules his family with an iron fist. So now they're all off to Tarapore where the happenings will take place and I can't wait to read what unfolds:). I will wait to see if swaragini are already bahus or whether that's not the case and the boys will meet the girls amidst whatever supernatural you have planned for us!

Looking forward to your story:)

Love
Shru
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Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Nita di ! I was actually going to quote as soon as I saw your like you are first not sujay 😛 and regarding the prologue it got deleted due to some mishap and thus I wrote it all again

Thanks for viewing this first I am super happy !!


Love
Soundharya😳



Well ofcourse i had to read when i first spotted it 😊.. Continue soon dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow iam super exciting to see swasan in horror

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