SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17])

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phoenix27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#931

Finally an end to a magnificent story. loved it a lot Kavya's past was painful but her deeds were no excuse for her past.

Loved bonding between Swara and Sanskar they were true friends back then and now they are soulmates.

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

I, for one, am happy with the happy ending. No explanations needed, Payal's punishment, is her final realisation of how wrong she was, that is going to haunt her for the rest of her life.
This is a very short one, I will give a detailed one in the RES post.

love,
Nyna

You happy them me super happy Nyna dearest 😃.. Payal will spend the rest of the life in prison.. But her biggest punishment according to her is that he knows.. She did everything to keep it from him but he does know.. That much is enough for her to give up.. And yeah her crimes already haunt her every night.. She just choose to ignore it before now she got to face it..

P.S - Wait for my detailed comment for forgotten.. Will get to it ASAP..

Loce

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: ria2794
Finally an end to a magnificent story. loved it a lot Kavya's past was painful but her deeds were no excuse for her past.
Loved bonding between Swara and Sanskar they were true friends back then and now they are soulmates.

Thanks Ria dearest 🤗, really happy to know you liked the final update.. And thanks for your continuous support to this story.. It really means so much to me 😳.. Yeah kavya had an horrid past but that no excuse for her actions.. I am not letting her off the hook she will be spending the rest of her life in jail.. But I did felt like I need to let you meet the real person.. And the reason she was so obsessed with Sanskaar.. He comforted her when she was all alone.. And when she met him again it turned into a scary love.. I hope you get what I am tying to say.. What I meant was kavya past was not meant to make you feel bad for her but to make you understand why she went to such extents.. And I am super glad you loved swasan moments.. Thanks once again for your continuous support Ria dear

Lots of love

Nita

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#934

Dear nita ,

Its good that finally you have updated the next chapter and it is the final chapter. Its happiee tat u ve updated but sad as its going to end. For the payal character u ve made the correct progress and justified by giving her life imprisonment. If she would ve punished less for just helping sanskar at last moment to help to arrest her father then it would have become injustice to those who lost their lives in her obsession. I am happiee that payal deserved the right punishment.

But one thing still i din understand the reason y sanskar was behaving cold to swara and then suddenly behaving like nothing happened. Ok its understandable that sanskar wanted to spend time with his daughter for that he could ve told swara n she wouldn't be hurted. He his the one who understood swara most n must have found tat his actions would hurt swara. But he behaves like nothing happened n asks swara for date,i mean asking date is not wrong but not explaining the sudden cold behavior n mood change am confused.

I hope u will explain it so that i can understand ure pov in which u had written n my confusion might get cleared. N hope there are bit more bonus chapter possible to post as many wont want the fiction to end. Its just a suggestion.

With love,
Divya

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#935

Nita dearest,
I can't believe BTM has almost come to an end. The journey was glorious, full of twist and turns and unique from other ones.I felt bad for Kavya/Payal after reading this chapter. And about Sanskar's guilt trip for not being good friend... surprisingly I noticed most of us do that. Don't or can't keep in touch with our friends. We live in present and leave behind the past.How will I miss this version of Swasan! hope very soon you'll come out with another project and show us Swasan in an alternate universe.

I'll really miss waiting for the updates of BTM.

Love,
Dyuti ❤️[

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: Rumadiv
Dear nita ,

Its good that finally you have updated the next chapter and it is the final chapter. Its happiee tat u ve updated but sad as its going to end. For the payal character u ve made the correct progress and justified by giving her life imprisonment. If she would ve punished less for just helping sanskar at last moment to help to arrest her father then it would have become injustice to those who lost their lives in her obsession. I am happiee that payal deserved the right punishment.

But one thing still i din understand the reason y sanskar was behaving cold to swara and then suddenly behaving like nothing happened. Ok its understandable that sanskar wanted to spend time with his daughter for that he could ve told swara n she wouldn't be hurted. He his the one who understood swara most n must have found tat his actions would hurt swara. But he behaves like nothing happened n asks swara for date,i mean asking date is not wrong but not explaining the sudden cold behavior n mood change am confused.

I hope u will explain it so that i can understand ure pov in which u had written n my confusion might get cleared. N hope there are bit more bonus chapter possible to post as many wont want the fiction to end. Its just a suggestion.

With love,
Divya

Hi Divya dear,

Thanks for your continuous support to my FF.. It sure means a lot to me 😃. Yeah even I am kind of sad and happy about BTM ending.. Happy that I was able to complete it, Happy that all my lovely readers friend liked it but sad that the journey ends..

Regarding payal.. You are right.. She can't be forgiven.. I had no intention of letting her escape justice.. She did kill lot of innocents in her obsession and nothing could justify that..

Here come the tricky part.. I get what you mean to say regarding Sanskaar.. And I am in dilemma of whether to reveal it now or in the epilogue.. Firstly you got the pov of the week from Swara not from sanskar.. I hope you understand I have no intention of making him cold and distant towards Swara.. His actions got is reasons.. While I am not sure how you feel about it when you read it later.. I just can hope it will make you understand him too..

Also Sanskaar was not cold throughout the week.. Swara did think everything felt the same.. Yet something was different.. That how she felt about it.. Sanskaar might have been cold today by not taking her with him and not even calling her once.. And he got his reasons which I will explain with his pov in the epilogue.. 😳.. But even while updating I was thinking will anyone find Sanskaar behavior odd. And you proved me right..it just that I didn't mean to stop it there.. I was planning on ending it after the first date where you would have gotten your explanation.. So it my fault..

Once again.. Thanks dearest for your continuous support.. Really do cherish this lovely comment of yours..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#937

@Dyuti dearest - Loved reading your comment.. Will get back to it ASAP.. And I will terrible about my unres in Tempest.. Will try to get to it soon as well..

Love

Nita

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#938

Hello Nita dear
How are you buddy?!
Update as usual beautiful & nice At Last curtain fall from all mysterious objects.
sanskar first mat payal as a kavya than after gap as a payel right dear let me know.
& why sanskar behave strange last one week I want to know the reason hope swara not overlook it for the happiness of date hehehe take class him very well.
Now waiting for epilogue & their date.
hope & pray u manage time from ur busy life for urself & ourselves also.
Bye
Take care dear
love you buddy.

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#939

@showrav - Thanks for the lovely comment showrav.. Loved reading it.. Will get back to the reply ASAP.. And also Sanskaar had his reasons and will explain it in epilogue.. Don't worry

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Divya dear,

Thanks for your continuous support to my FF.. It sure means a lot to me😃. Yeah even I am kind of sad and happy about BTM ending.. Happy that I was able to complete it, Happy that all my lovely readers friend liked it but sad that the journey ends..

Regarding payal.. You are right.. She can't be forgiven.. I had no intention of letting her escape justice.. She did kill lot of innocents in her obsession and nothing could justify that..

Here come the tricky part.. I get what you mean to say regarding Sanskaar.. And I am in dilemma of whether to reveal it now or in the epilogue.. Firstly you got the pov of the week from Swara not from sanskar.. I hope you understand I have no intention of making him cold and distant towards Swara.. His actions got is reasons.. While I am not sure how you feel about it when you read it later.. I just can hope it will make you understand him too..

Also Sanskaar was not cold throughout the week.. Swara did think everything felt the same.. Yet something was different.. That how she felt about it.. Sanskaar might have been cold today by not taking her with him and not even calling her once.. And he got his reasons which I will explain with his pov in the epilogue..😳.. But even while updating I was thinking will anyone find Sanskaar behavior odd. And you proved me right..it just that I didn't mean to stop it there.. I was planning on ending it after the first date where you would have gotten your explanation.. So it my fault..

Once again.. Thanks dearest for your continuous support.. Really do cherish this lovely comment of yours..

Love

Nita

Dear Nita,

Thanks for the reply and hope u will update the epilogue soon so that i can get sanskar's pov and y he did that. Eagerly awaiting for the next part.

With love,
Divya

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