SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Interesting concept.. N lil scary too...

Waiting for the first update



Thanks dear.. Really happy to know you find the prologue interesting..And is it scary ..And yes it might have the scary tone throughout but certain chapter will be not so scary 😆 ..Trying out something new in mystery genre ..Hope it not too much scary later.. Will post it tomorrow or sunday


Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
@Sanya and Showrav- Read your lovely comment and it made me so very happy ..Feeling sleepy now..So will reply back to your comments tomorrow..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Congrats for new story
interesting prolouge
lots of mystery
eagr to read nxt parts
cont soon
loved it ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Interesting shock after shock first shock is sanskar was married and have a daughter 😲 I first thought swasan somehow separated but they were never married 😲 that's second shock please I hope we are spared from kavita it will not be easy for us to imagine sanskar with kavita even if she is dead and who is so evil and desperate to stop the marriage that he/she kept stabbing swara and that too multiple times😲 I canthink of only one person who can be capable of doing such deeds ragini when I read about familier face my first thought was sanskar first but then that person stabbed swara and that too multiple times😲 that was third one as I realised it is not and can't be sanskar who is trying so hard to kill swara and I noticed that you have told that the attacker is a she so it is definitely one and only ragini



Well sorry for getting Sanskar married to someone else..😆😆 ..Everyone seems to be 100 percent sure about Ragini, given the plotlines and her character it makes sense the most.. Let wait and see if you are all right as i cant spoil the suspence 😉.. I am really happy to know you find it interesting..Will post the first chapter today 😊...It might reveal further mystery but wont reveal everything though 😉.. Regarding Kavta i didnt want to spoil but well you seem to be so worried about that.So no Sanskar was not married to kavita 😉


With lots of love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Hi guys ...I just updated Chapter 1.. Will get back to the remaining lovely comments asap..


Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome prologue
N superb 1st Chappy,
Oh so Sanskaar Loves swara n vice versa... Great ...
But what are his secratets .. He hat us her past waiting for it .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: showrav24

Res nita dear

unres
Hi How r u dear?
beautiful & mysterious prologue
why sanskar change his name?
why she married other if his proposal sent for swara?
why he stay alone with his child far from family?
& who stab swara & why i think its ragini
so update soon dear & clear suspens
I know this story will going super hit likes ur others story
Because u r one of those writers in this forum who have very special talent to entertain its viewer & i say this to u many time.
update soon dear egarly waiting for ur story
Bye
love u & a very happy friendship day


Hi showrav.. I am good.. Well posted chapter one.. But still all your questions will not be answered in chapter one.. I try to answer them in the next chapters.. I am really happy to know you found the prologue interesting.. Hope you like chapter one as well...

Simply touched by your comments 😳.. And your compliment makes me feel so happy.. Though I am not good as you are making it look like.. Posted chapter one.. Waiting to know you thoughts on that..

Happy Friendship day showrav 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48


Finally gotten around to reply to lovely comment in the previous post showrav.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
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Unres




Nita now this story is mind blowing seriously 👏 and very well written 👏 👏 👏 and thank you clearing my confusion that swara is pari i thought pari is parineeta and adharsh there love story will start 🤪

Someone tries to kill swara ok then my guess the girl who killed swara is ragani for lakshya ji 😉 am i right? Now swara has loses her memory for the first time i am very happy with this memory loss track 😆

Swasan have kissed already 😲 in fast&furious style 🤣 sanskar guilt but poor swara loves him alot 😳 but who is asha's mother?

Now the love story already started so i am damn excited for future parts to known sanskar past 😉
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: anu012

Congrats for new story
interesting prolouge
lots of mystery
eagr to read nxt parts
cont soon
loved it ...


Thanks Anu dearest.. Really happy to know you found the prologue interesting.. And posted the chapter one today.. Do read it when you get time..

Love

Nita

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