You Hold My Heart... A RagLak Story. (Completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

This is the first ever RagLak story I'm reading!

I actually don't read any story of them as I don't like them! And the few stories I read written on both SwaSan & RagLak, I skipped RagLak part always except Bubble's The Best Of Things!
Bt now I'm reading this one just bcoz you are writing this & I absolutely love your writing!
And one more thing is, even though I never actually connect with Ragini even when she was a naive girl in the initial beginning & later as well Bt the phase of Ragini's character I liked is Negative Ragini !!!
Not the harebrained Malkin track Ragini, Bt the Ragini we saw since Swa-----Lak days till her kidnapping by Laksh! After that I don't know what actually happened to her! So I'm hoping to see a Ragini like that! A grey shaded Ragini.
And Laksh, well I have nothing to say about this guy! I never liked him & recently I started thinking that he finally is growing up but after his participation of pregnancy fiasco but now not doing anything & not standing with his wife properly left me irritated! Hence I'm back to square one!
So yeah will keep an eye on this!
Btw is this a sole RagLak story? Or you will give lil SwaSan as well like lil bonus!?
Madam Nimmi, when are you going to give us SwaSan stories btw? When will you update OMT & SC?
Waiting since ages!!!
Don't test my patience Nim *Pout*



Nupur..
🤗

I absolutely love you dearest. you know that right!
despite not liking either Ragini or Laksh you are reading this story because I am writing it.. how truly touching is that.❤️.
feeling so touched and honoured. and humble.

This is an out and out RagLak story. wanted to add SwaSan too but the moment I am writing about them .. I am getting this strong urge to wail.

God as my witness I sat my ass down to finish OMT. I did. but for the life of me couldn't type a sentence let alone a para.
I thought may be it is rut with regards to SwaSan stories connected to serial. I should give them a fresh novel. I have this 'Day and the night' script with me.Twins. One serene brother; another a devil incarnate a kickass vile villain both played by the man himself.
and I couldn't write this one either.
The situation that I am not being able to write for my OTP is horrifying me. I wish I get my 'connect' back.
Truly, terribly sorry about this Nupur. Forgive me girl.🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
I did not plan to visit MF today but galti se aa gyi..then I saw a RagLak story.. n my eyes went to the author..'Banjaaran' n me went..
Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!!!
A RagLak story from u!!!!!!!!
Yayyy...
Love u love u love u Nimi..
So sweet of u..
I've read so many posts of u n heartedly wished to get a RagLak story from u!!!
Thank you so very much re!!!
Jz going to read it now!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Awww!!
What can be cuter than a naive introvert Ragini..Thank you Nimi for this!
I always wanted Laksh to fall for that 'not his types' girl, Ragini..but u know what happened😆..
How I wished for the opposites attract thing in the show ..
Leave that..
Vaise, loved it ..
Awww this Laksh!! Ha ha..lost in her smile..Ragini has a huge crush on him..
Waiting this crush to turn into love..
N more excited about how Laksh ffeels n falls...

Thank you once again 🤗

Love and regards Neha!
Edited by Radhadreamlove - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Nice start 😛
Ragini is already in love and complete crazy for him.
Laksh I feel has some motive. .
Your story is giving me feels of a Mills and Boon novel😆.. its really good..I feel its going to turn more intense and romantic.
Thanks for writing a raglak story😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Nice start 😳
Laksh's started his friendship with Ragini but with a secret agenda🤔

I wonder what that could be

I always love reading such type of stories

Well, I don't know why but your story was reminding me a lot of Samrat-Gunjun 😆

Update soon! Waiting for your next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
wow Nimmi darlin .🤗..Kevvu keka pettichinchavuga😆 , on raglak ..yay ..go on👍🏼
.I am super damn excited for this .😈.trust me ..😉

Res ..Will be back

Love
Lucky


Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Really nice start such sweet and cute story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww thanks for the RagLak story😊
Super ga vundhi. Sorry read the previous comment and came to know that you speak telugu too😛

It's such a nice start. Loved the shy ragini and cool dude laksh.

Aww ragini has a crush on him and he has some motive wonder what it might be

Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Res... Will read it ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
I am sticking with my short comments.. That the only way I will be able to comment.. Me loved it as always And me want the next update now as always .. With you as writer this will an lovely ragya story.. Can't wait to read more.. Nimmi dear I really loved it.. It such an nice start..

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