You Hold My Heart... A RagLak Story. (Completed)

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Well I am going to blame myself for not reading it first as soon as you posted because I was busy posting my update.. I get you Nimmi.. So I don't blame you.. Just my luck that I missed reading it..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Well I am going to blame myself for not reading it first as soon as you posted because I was busy posting my update.. I get you Nimmi.. So I don't blame you.. Just my luck that I missed reading it..

awww sweetest don't blame yourself.🤗
gimme few hours and i will post the story again. need a little time to sort myself out. thank you for understanding. *love*

me is devouring your updates.
you go girl❤️.

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Love you Nimmi.. Take your time and post it back if you want too.. Don't do it on my account.. It your story and it your emotions..

You liked my FF.. Me on cloud nine and cloud ten if there was cloud ten..

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Where it went?
Nimmi..I'm sorry I could not read it fully..actually my exams r also on so I get sm time n read it thoda thoda..
May I know why did u remove it? 😊

😭😭

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove
Where it went?
Nimmi..I'm sorry I could not read it fully..actually my exams r also on so I get sm time n read it thoda thoda..
May I know why did u remove it? 😊

😭😭

good luck for your exams Neha.
sorry for removing the story. will post it back.

why did i remove it?
let's say.. messed up emotions.

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Mike13

@Mike13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Thnks a lot for this 🤗

it was a beautiful story 👏

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Mike13
Thnks a lot for this 🤗

it was a beautiful story 👏

I should be the one thanking you Mike.🤗
for reading this story and liking it.
and for finding it beautiful.

a big thank you for this.
love.

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Thankkkyyyooouuu Nimmi for rewriting it🤗
I daily came n checked if u posted it or not😆..
N today I was like "Yayyy!!!!"[:D/]

This story is amazing!!! Brilliant!!! One of the best stories on RagLak I've ever read!!

Your writing style is unique..Simple yet fascinating!

I loved every bit of it..The start to the end, it was amazing..
Ragini's huge crush turning to love..
Love how 'losing' rxn Laksh had when she thought b4 shaking hands n refused for the lift😆
The part of Ragini's two conflicting feelings.. I loved it..

Laksh's regret on playing with Ragini's emotions.. It was not only heartbreaking for Ragini but for me too that he chose Ragini as the way to reach Swara.🥺

But then all this..
His reaction "Learn WHAT? "..n those crazy laughter for murdering n molesting music.. n then that "Nopes Nahi nada naaye"😆

Ragini taking him forcefully for pani puri 😆 and Laksh always giving large portion of 'chai' to her😳
That was amazing..

Aww Laksh jealous of the nerd who talked to Ragini..😆

But know which was my favourite part?
That behenji one!!!! I loved it..awww.. he couldn't hear a word against Ragini..err..HIS Ragini..😳

His confession was too cute to handle..the dialogues u wrote nimmi..was amazing..

This story had been my dream track from the beginning...
Thank you sooo much for this..

I know u don't like RagLak but writing such an amazing story for them...thank you..😊
N also..
Ziddi n budhhu sa mann says.."waiting for more"😆
Jz kidding..don't worry...u have had so much for me..that's enough! 🤗

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Dear Nimmi,

Loved it and I am like:

Will get back with a coherent reply,

love,

Nyna

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Me ..Me ... Me Res again i think 😆

Unres..

Nimmi do you remember how many res i have left in your works and posts..Well i dont must be a lot though because it has become uncountable 🥺..So sorry dear.. I know i should start somewhere ..So decide to do it today..Better late than never right..

Well i read it as soon as i saw the PM. Didnt want to miss it again😆.. Wow it such an lovely story Nimmi..Me loved it so very much.. Ragini and Lakshya stayed true to their character yet stayed positive.. I loved Ragini here and Lucky too .. Such an interesting story.. Lucky with his hidden motives as always,Ragini being just happy with his friendship but finally got his heart as well..It was so good Nimmi dear..

About one more time, i want to read the whole story once again..So maybe tomorrow..As now i am sleepy and grumpy because of not sleeping😆😆...

Lots of Love

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago