Swasan SS A MAGICAL LOVE STORY (updated chap 4 page 11)

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hey Mansi dear,😊
Awesome update!!!👏 Totally a new concept!!!!😉 So Harry, Ron and Hermione r Swara's besties and loves her Indian food.😃 So Lavanya got killed?!😕 And Arnav blames Swara for her death!!😕😭 Poor Swara. Felt bad for her.😭 Arnav and Swara ka full on tashan!!!😉 But no one is supporting Swara!!😭 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.
With love,
Aheli.

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey Mansi dear,😊
Awesome update!!!👏 Totally a new concept!!!!😉 So Harry, Ron and Hermione r Swara's besties and loves her Indian food.😃 So Lavanya got killed?!😕 And Arnav blames Swara for her death!!😕😭 Poor Swara. Felt bad for her.😭 Arnav and Swara ka full on tashan!!!😉 But no one is supporting Swara!!😭 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.
With love,
Aheli.

Thanks Aheli😉

Swara has Ron Harry and Hermione for her support for now she is fine with out ASR and the Gadodias 😕

Don't feel bad for Swara cause while writing her character I am feeling like am writing the nok zok of Rosalie and Jacob of Twilight and continuous insults and one one liners😆

I will try to give an update soon😉

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

😆
Same here
I'm hungry right now

Am hungry for Pani Puri

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Am hungry for Pani Puri

Monsoon me no pani puri 😭

I want something spicy

Ive been eating something sweet all day long

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Survi Kapoor

@FrostNight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Amazing!
The concept is just awesome!
I m a mad fan of Harry Potter and Twilight! Both r my favs especially HP and so I m so excited seeing Swara as witch! Thank u for this amazing story, u fulfilled my wish of HP and Twilight mashup! Thank u! 😊

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: FrostNight
Amazing!
The concept is just awesome!
I m a mad fan of Harry Potter and Twilight! Both r my favs especially HP and so I m so excited seeing Swara as witch! Thank u for this amazing story, u fulfilled my wish of HP and Twilight mashup! Thank u! 😊

Thanks for your comments dear😉

I am so glad you liked my Story😳

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RAONE8

@RAONE8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Awesome concept!!!!

Loving D plot

Cont sooon

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: RAONE8
Awesome concept!!!!
Loving D plot
Cont sooon

Thanks for your comments😉

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Chapter 2:

Swara entered her room expecting it be a mess as she expected that Arnav mustn't have allowed Ragini to get it clean...

But she was shocked when the room was sparling clean and all her things were neatly arranged...

Swara:Yeh room kisne saaf Kiya??? Zaroor Ragini ne kiya honga...

Just then a crack was heard and a house elf appeared wearing puple robes...

Swara:Oh Tweety so all this is done by you...

Tweety:Yes Madam Tweety have done this and Madam Swara I have got dinner for you...

Swara: Thanks Tweety btw how is Lupin's son ?????

Tweety:Yes Madam master Teddy is fine and he misses you and Harry Potter sir a lot...

Swara:Hmm!!! Tweety am planning to join college so get my things ready for tomorrow...

Tweety: Yes Madam

And she disapperated with a crack...

Swara went to sleep thinking about how she will settle down in this house as a family...

Somewhere in the Middle of the Jungle:

Arnav: What is the status Lakshya?????

Lakshya: Arnav I am confused cause this is the third death in the week...

Arnav:Kon ho sakta hai Vampires??????

Angad:Nahi ASR Vampires nahi hai kyunki jab humne hamare borders pe kissi Vampire ko nahi dekha...And the treaty is intact the Maheshwaris have not come here...

Arnav:Then who could it be...

Lakshya: Arnav mujhe lagta hai Kahi yeh Avada Kevadra curse to nahi????

Arnav: Maybe you are right???? Anyways Lakshya I think we should go back... Khushi ghar pe akeli hongi...

Lakshya and another Wolves started sniggering...

Lakshya:Sedhe Sedhe kyu nahi kehte meri behen se milna Haim...

Arnav: What the????

Lakshya:Ok ok Chalo...

GUPTA HOUSE:

Ragini: Khushi bhabhi...Aap rehne dijiye main khana laga deti hoon...

Khushi: Are koi baat nahi hum kar dete hai aur waise bhi Arnavji aur Lakshya bhai aa rahe honge...

Arnav and Lakshya entered the house...

Lakshya:Are Khush tum ab tak jag rahi ho tumara kal college hai na... Ragini kal tumhe bhi toh college jana hai...

Arnav ignored Lakshya and pulled Khushi's hand and took her to her room...

Khushi: Arnavji yeh aap kya kar rahe hai chodiye hume...

Arnav:Tum theek toh ho na... Khushi agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payuga...

Khushi hugs him...She finds his body hot (guys the other "hot")

Khushi:Hume kya honga Arnavji aap hai na humare paas hume protect karne ke liye...Toh hume kya honga...

Arnav:(kissing her forehead)Waise tum meri soulmate ho toh agar tumhe koi bhi takleef hui toh sabse pehle mujhe pata lagega...

Khushi:Toh kahi yeh dar apko Swara ke wajah se nahi lag raha hai????Ya woh murders ho rahe hai us liye?????

Arnav:Tum in sabse door raho that's better...waise am too hungry...So sweetheart let's have our dinner...

Khushi:Ok my Wolfie...

And she ran away giving a peck on his lips...

MAHESHWARI MANOR:

After a long and fun filled Family hunt the Vampires entered the Manor...

Arushi stopped in her tracks...lost somewhere...

Arjun: What's it????Kya dekha tumne????

Arushi:Kal college main ek nayi ladki aane wali hai...

Arjun:(Teasing Arushi)Is she beautiful???????

Arushi gives him a glare...

Sanskar:Aru ka vision clear nahi hai...

Parineeta:Par Aru tumhare visions toh kafi clear rehte hai???

Adarsh:Maybe she is a Werewolf?????Or vampire?????

Arjun: Maybe not kyunki some humans have natural Shields ...

Sanskar: Anyways mujhe ab tak yeh samjh nahi aa raha hai Aru ko yeh vision kyu aaya?????

AP: Shayad woh Ladki humse judi hui hai ya judne wali hai...

Parineeta:Nahi mummy ji aisa nahi ho sakta ek insaan humse jud nahi sakta...

With that she leaves and Adarsh follows her... Everyone leaves... Except DP and AP

AP:Suniye ho sakta hai yeh ladki humare Sanskar se Jude ...

DP: Annapurna hum bhi chahta hain ki ek ladki humare Sanskar se Jude par Sanskar pyaar me viswas nahi karta...Aur us hadse ke baad toh bilkul nahi...

AP:Par ji?????

DP:Nahi Annapurna is bare me mat socho...

Here is the second chapter please read and let me know your views on the same... Guys please Seriously give me your views cause its tiering to send over 170 pms and to get only 5-6 comments for the story...If this is the response then I may have to stop writing...