SwaSan SS:Destined by Choice-Epilogue 1 Pg 110,Epilogue 2 Pg 118

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Very interestng.
M all in 4ths 1.

Hey Sonu 🤗🤗

Thanks a lot. Glad to know you loved it. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Bennet.Lizzy
Dear Viji🤗
I'm so glad and excited about this new SS.

Hey Nalini 🤗🤗 So thrilled that you are excited about this. 😳

But the title had me intrigued. By choice? What's going through your mind. I have a sense that this is going to be a twisty path especially because you say 'by choice.' And I can't wait.

😉 Your intuition is very perceptive. 😳 🤗 Its going to be a twisty path, definitely. It will highlight the importance of choices in determining one's ultimate fate. I am quite a fan of the concept of fate versus free will, preordained paths versus ones consciously trodden 😊 😉. And for a magical couple like SwaSan, I do feel they are both Destined by Choice as well as Willed by Fate. 😳

Two, I have read through the synopsis to find it wholly dedicated to sunny boy. But it was deep again. With already so many layers and new shades added to him. He is not the cold hearted knight, nor is he happy and sunny. He is somewhere in the lands between searching for himself and only rapidly losing himself to a grey shaded swara. I'm soo soo intrigued and I really wish you could start soon.

I will start the soonest I can, dear. Just that time is really at a premium right now. Yup, the synopsis was revolving more around Sunny's backstory as I saw it for this Fic, the layers and shades to his very intriguing personality. You put that so well----he certainly is searching for himself in a sense. He is a very driven, focused man, an achiever who is extremely dedicated and resolute. But beneath all that veneer of consummate, suave articulateness, he still has traces of that emotionally scarred, vulnerable boy who is starved for genuine love and adoration. Will he find the love he so yearns for, the bliss that he so deserves with this girl whom he is about to meet? Well----we shall find out. 😉 😳

Then I read the next post. Arizona! This I guess is where the Gadodias come in I guess. Or is there a kavitha yet to come into his life.

There is a Kavita in this tale. 😉 😊 But her role will be kept to a bare minimum. She is not part of Sanskaar's traumatic past, anyway. Hmm...I'll just say that Sunny would probably meet this girl who so fascinates him, at the end of Chapter 1, or maybe beginning of Chapter 2. The Gadodias might make an entry a chapter after. 😊

I'm waiting very eagerly for the updates. Hoping for one soon😊

Hoping to post the prologue/ Chapter 1 (I guess I'll just dive straight into Chapter 1), within the coming week, as early as I can. I was aiming for the weekend, but I have a lot on my plate those couple of days. Looks unlikely I might be able to post it on Sat/Sun, unfortunately.

Thanks for all the warm words and motivation, N! It really keeps me chugging!

Love
N

My Dearest Nalini,🤗🤗

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Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Res :)

Unres:

Viji dearest 🤗

So very exciting to see a new SS from you especially after the resounding success you had with Postern of Fate. Am really pleased that this is a SS as I feel such a story deserves the space to be savoured and with you writing it, that will be a certainty 😊. What a thrilling and intriguing start. Really grabs one straightaway.

I love the title- it takes me straight back to those long exchanges we have had about the role of fate vs free will and our shared view (of course! 😉) that destiny plays its role but ultimately ones choices made of an exercise of will shape that too- an inexorable interplay that is endless as such.

I loved the idea that Swara will be explored as "grey" (yes, of course that reference was to Swara 😉). However, even the "grey" there I sort of already suspect will be more off white or even cream and not really quite the grey that one would expect from say a Sanskaar or Ragini? 😉 Just a guess and very premature at this stage but I would have thought that whatever such "shading" you would sketch for Swara would be tempered with a valid reason born out of perhaps circumstance or even MU but again, I could be way off the mark. Whatever it is, it will be very interesting. As you say, all other characters (mainly) bar her have had that side looked at so I am very eager to see this develop.

Looks like we have again had our usual unspoken CC 😆. We are both taken by stories set in the modern business arena with a bit of corporate power play and suspense as the backdrop to the romance 😆 and I expectantly waiting to lap it up! Really heartbreaking back story for Sanskaar and his initial character sketch was so finely nuanced- really set the scene. And wow- a "love" at first sight meeting? Very very alluring indeed and cannot wait to read more on that 😳.

Eagerly awaiting chapter 1. I will caveat that my comments may be scrambled and perhaps even delayed through this journey for obvious reasons but as you know why, I am presuming to think you will excuse all that. I will be here whenever I can and will anxiously await the updates but totally understand the time pressures so really take your time- what you write is always worth the wait so no one would ever mind or complain 😳.

Ohhh and the setting for the chapter to come is already so titillating, really cannot wait!!

Tonnes of love in the meantime xoxoxo

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Res :)

Shru 🤗🤗🤗

So immensely touched to see you here, despite your difficult time with the bereavement in extended family. Take care Sis...hang in there, and Prayers and Best Wishes for you and yours.

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Hi Friends 🤗🤗🤗

So quite a few pals have been asking me, if the setting/heading of the post I've res'd for Chapter 1, means that Swara and the Gadodias are based in Arizona, USA. 😳

Well...not quite. The chapter starts off there, will focus a bit on Sanskaar, then on SanLak. Would then shift to the setting/ event when Sanskaar meets...well I shall not say 'who' right now, but I am sure, most of you already know whom he would meet. 😉

The uncertainty is more on her motives, not exactly her identity. 😊😉

Lots of Love

Viji

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Sanskaar in the prologue is mindblwing.. 👏
Story seems interesting..update soon 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: sneharay
Sanskaar in the prologue is mindblwing.. 👏
Story seems interesting..update soon 😊

Thanks so much Sneha 🤗🤗

So thrilled to hear that you loved Sanskaar's portrayal in the preview. 😊😳 He certainly is a very compelling, fascinating character----with so much depth and layers to his nature.

Will post Chapter 1 the soonest I can. 😊

Love

Viji

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Shru 🤗🤗🤗

So immensely touched to see you here, despite your difficult time with the bereavement in extended family. Take care Sis...hang in there, and Prayers and Best Wishes for you and yours.

Lots of Love,

----Viji

😊😊🤗 How can I not be here sis, even if I am late and not overly coherent? Love you for the concern and wishes. Things are really difficult but all that helps immensely. I have unreserved on page 10 😊

Love ya x

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Omg viji dear...😊

Ahhh im sooo excited ...jumping..with joy..👏.i was bookmarking pages to read later...how could i miss this prologue..im angry with myself...😡im lagging behind.i have soo many post to unreserve...im getting lazier day by day...glad i have seen this story again...😃

anyways...Soo starting with the mention of OUR sansku.☺️.sunny boy...😳the way u have mentioned him...his outer appearance ..or side...what n how he behaves with world n worldly affairs..handling bussiness..the most irresitable bachelor ...bussiness tycoon...i was going all ga ga over him...my family is already handling my crazed for SRK now sansku is also parallel to him..im soo gone nuts...anyways it was icredibally crafted n woven..loved it...🤪

But Our sansku is kinda brokenbfrom inside..n old wound😭...lost family at tender age of 8...got uncle n aunt care n support..but not love..which he craves most...felt bad for him...im already in love with this sansku..😆.n this sansku ..the excellence n dynamic charmer met her...or just saw her..n couldnot take his eyes away...just brilliant baby...😉

They way u talked about hinted that everyone will be grey..swara is a grey mystery...not revealled ..waiting for her entry...delighted after reading it..👏

Waiting for part 1...curiously..😉

Loads of love n hugs🤗

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

😊😊🤗 How can I not be here sis, even if I am late and not overly coherent? Love you for the concern and wishes. Things are really difficult but all that helps immensely. I have unreserved on page 10 😊

Love ya x

Hey Shru 🤗🤗🤗

Do take care of yourself and your family. It really means a lot that you've taken time to comment despite that, and besides, you can never not be coherent...not that I would mind even if you weren't. 😆 And as we've both discussed before, there is nothing like lateness or delay in comments.

Work and family commitments take precedence, as they ought to. I'm just so happy that my pals like you read and comment when time permits. Really means a lot. 🤗😳

Shall revert on your lovely comment in detail, from my lappie later in the day.

Loads of Love

Viji