SwaSan OS: 'Sick Days' - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Absolutely amazing os..very very heart touching..

Everyone wants someone who will take care of you in every situation and circumstances and Swasan are the perfect of example of it..just like the vows one couple takes during their marriage and fulfill it..

The beginning was beautiful..how Sanskar waker her up..how they are always entwined in the morning seeking warmth..so romantic..must say Sanskar has found a perfect way of ensuring that his wife always find him and cuddles into him due to the chilling AC..and then Swara reaction at not finding Sanskar the usu way the way she panicked..she cares for him so so much..Even the doctor would freak out if we call him at such inappropriate timings..but even he knew Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari..that part was so cute..even the doctor knows how they two adore each other..but seriously to see Sanskar like that was painful..The person who is out anchor if he gets unwell it really makes up feel helpless..I still remember Swara's line from one of the episode. Which she said for her mom..agar hamare khayal rakhne wale ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye toh bahut darr lagta hain..and here Sanskar who is always so strong always standing upright never feeling weak getting suddenly so unwell..it must have freaked out Swara..

The way Swara took care of her was really very loving..even the whole family knows that they should not take tension as Swara is there for him..Sujata was so cute here..the way u told otherwisotherwisshe would have taunted if anybody else would have been there in Swara's place..even she knows how much Swara loves Sanskar..atlast she has come to know that she loves him with the same intensity as Sanskar does to her..Sanskar was so weak felt very bad to see our hero like that..but Swara knowing the sunlight is hurting him..covering the curtain.. He asking Swara to stay away from him when he realizes he is completely leaning on her and she can catch it too..and then Swara so strictly cutting her off was so caring..The way he was leaning on her completely,snuggling into her warmth was heart touching..these small small moments you write so beautifully..sometimes it bring tears to my eyes to see the love between them..there will never be a couple like them..so in love with each other..that they feel each other before they feel themselves..

Swara making him drink the khada and Sanskar expression was so very cute..I literally wanted to pull his cheeks..the way he stood in front of the bear..his stance so strong and protective..backing down the bear just with his gaze..just amazing..And then the epic scene..this scenes even makes me blush at times..she taking out his vest..atleast he allowed her here..not feeling sharam in front of her wife..and she checking him out..Sanskar is so naughty and mischievous.
Can't stop teasing her wife..but he is so handsome just like a Greek god..nobody can stop checking him stop..so no offence from Swara..it should be Sanskar to stop looking so gorgeous..and then again he goes to tell him to stay away from her..he is really so worried about Swara that she should be well at all cost..he is so caring..and then Swara was so so awesome.. It was so obvious she would join him on the couch and we will get the all famous scene..I personally love that scene..tum mere upar ho..just a simple sentence but it has the ability to set the screen ablaze with their chemistry..not only their grand children but their grand grwand children will also giggle and listen to these amazing stories of our so loving Swasan..and then he cutely accepts his request..they are just so beautiful.. U make me speechless every time..

Swara also gets unwell but we all know it was then Sanskar's turn to care for her beautiful lovely wife and bring her back to the healthy state by his love and care..amazing is really..no words to describe the cuteness and love between them that is eternal and immortal.. Please always keep writing these stories..you make our days beautiful by writing them..

Piya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Hey Nynu darling 🤗 🤗


So touched by the super fast res 😳😊


Viji,🤗🤗🤗

I think I might soon be down with a bout of that flu (quite prevalent in Hyderabad too😉) Any idea where I could order one of the Sanskaari hotwater bottles☺️☺️☺️ - personalised would be better

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

viji 🤗

Hey Akku 🤗🤗

this is so adorable love..
an Ill sanskar and concerned swara...
oh how much we crave for such beautiful scenes in the show... what we get is below average villains nd Swasan detective agency...
thanks to the writers here, bliss of Swasan continues...

Awww...thanks so much yaar. Really touched by your warm words. So overjoyed that you found this OS adorable. 😳 That really made my day. To be told that I could make you feel blissful with the SwaSan scenes here----that is really the ultimate compliment. 😳

coming back to the os... I throughout the shot had that stupid grin on my face as if m the one taking care or taken care of...ever so enthusiastic swara suddenly so frantic seeing sanskar shivering all alone nd her he didn't disturbed her...
she seems uncontrollable... rightly so.. it's the matter of ur own health... Swasan are one ...if one half gets the burn.. the other is ought to feel the pain...

Thanks again. 😳 So happy that this could bring a grin to your face. 😊 🤗 Yeah, Sanskaar and Swara are true soulmates na? They are two halves of a seamless, perfect whole; and they really are passionately intertwined twin souls. They feel each others pain much deeper and keener than their own. Swara would be extremely concerned and anguished, seeing Sanskaar unwell, and vice versa.

loved the way u described sujata here... not so subtle nd believing in the old age essence of saas bahu saga... they are entertainment provided no malice hidden...

Yeah...I do think Sujju is a dramebaaz, a total nautanki without really having much malice or spite in her. Of course, initially she conspired along with Sanskaar and Ragini (in their gray phases), against Swara---but that was when she herself thought Lakshya and Durga Prasad had back stabbed her beloved chora! After that, as time has gone by, she does seem to have mellowed down, become genuinely fond of Swara. She still would pass comments, though! 😆 😉

loved the cheeky conversation between hubby nd wife... vests nd boxers... 😆 😆

I think a mischievous, flirtatious and slightly brazen Sanskaar is very cute. 😳 😉 And Swara would find this avatar completely irresistible. 😳 Oh yes, Swara wanted to take off his vest to sponge his torso with the cold compress, but Sunny boy was naughtily suggesting another motive. 😆

Swasan scenes written by you are always a delight to read... so so lovely nd swasanliscious...
keep it up viji...

😳 😳 As a huge SwaSan fan, those words mean a lot to me. Feel immensely blessed and humbled, that you love to read the SwaSan moments in my fics. I love writing them, and it is a pleasure and privilege to know that pals like you love reading them. 🤗🤗

I will unres on other reserves soon...

No issues dear. Take your time, do so when convenient. No rush whatsoever, just glad to know you loved them. 🤗🤗

love you 🤗
akanksha



My Dear Akanksha,🤗🤗

Replied above in blue text dear. You made my day with your comment. 😳

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Res 😊

Will unres once I get back to home .

But meanwhile I just want to say an amazing and heart pleasing read.
Enjoyed a lot reading it.

Love
- Harshada



Thanks so much, Harshu 🤗🤗

So happy to know that you loved this.

Loads of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Get Well Soon Saku :)

Lots of love, prayers & good wishes for you <3
Res: Going to read Viji :)



Nupur sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Love you loads, let me know what you felt.

Cheers

---Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Piya 🤗🤗🤗🤗

So touched by your super fast res, sweetheart. Let me know what you felt, when time permits.

Loads of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Viji,🤗🤗🤗

I think I might soon be down with a bout of that flu (quite prevalent in Hyderabad too😉) Any idea where I could order one of the Sanskaari hotwater bottles☺️☺️☺️ - personalised would be better

love,
Nyna



Bwahahaha. 😳 😆 ☺️ You mean the slightly brazen and relatively Asanskaari avatar, I presume? 😉 He he, I have no clue where a duplicate model can be found. I would presume Varun Sanskaar Maheshwari would become one; as would Ahir Gadodia, perhaps. But you would not want to wait for 24 to 25 odd years to get one, no? 😆 😉

Jokes apart...do take care of your health. Wouldn't want you falling unwell.
🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji
Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
your replies to my comment dear viji always makes me want to die out of embarrassment... after that I feel I forgot to add this nd that.. 😆
your writing makes our days for quite long... you deserve lovely comments by all... 🤗

get well soon saku 🤗
Edited by sharif_lafungi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

your replies to my comment dear viji always makes me want to die out of embarrassment... after that I feel I forgot to add this nd that.. 😆
your writing makes our days for quite long... you deserve lovely comments by all... 🤗

get well soon saku 🤗



😳 🤗 I'm just expressing how touched I feel, by all the warmth and love in the feedback. And this comment by you, again made me feel very moved. 😳
Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Friends 🤗🤗🤗

A Big round of jhappis for all the lovely comments and likes coming in. You've really made my day special.
🤗🤗

Saku dearest---Hope you are speedily on the mend.
🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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