SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16) - Page 12

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Talia dear will get back to your comment asap🤗

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Saying the same thing again 😭😭😭..Will get back to it asap ..

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita sweetie..i doesnot matter u reply or not...important is that u have seen it n read it...thats it...no worries...relax...

Talia

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res nita baby

Unres

😭 starting with heartfelt apology...as i have piles of unreserve post..n im unreserving whenever im getting chance...n this one got delayed...sorry...Let me start with an heartfelt apology for the delay in replying back to such a lovely comment Talia dear😭😭😭.. And how can i not reply back to such a lovely comment..It sure did make me feel a lot better as an writer..You know when it comes to writing i dont think i am not good at all ..Comments like yours are the one that kind of make me keep writing in spite of no confidence 😳

Coming to last part of TS...i must say nita ..out of soo many memory lost track stories i have read your one wasby far the BESTEST...👏 i soo enjoyed it...I am super touched Talia dear.. 🤗..Love you dear for saying this..To know you liked it this much means a lot..

Part 3 was simply incredible...😉..Thanks 😳

Depicting swasan journey of friendship...with outmost care and perfection.i just loved swara waiting for him..their talk n deep conversation on any thing onweek days..n on weekends just trying to pass time..pinning for each other..hoping week end soon..their five question part was amazingly woven.you were so good with dialogues...was wowed..😳..Super happy to know you liked them..It like i write what my mind comes up with and to know it liked makes it super special 😳..Yeah i took lot of time coming up with the five questions,so many question were discarded in the process 😆...

U handled swara memory loss thing soo delicately...iwas shocked when read that swara had vision of ragini stabing her n pushing her in river..but the way u filled that part in swara's life was commendable...with sansku efforts n input too obviously..i loved his teasing onlakshya n ragini matter...👏...Thanks dear.. Wish cvs handle it delicately as well..It would have been an epic track... Teasing was fun right..Especially those scene would have been lovely ,Swara running away from Lakshya as she feels awkward with the new information and Sanskar teasing her with it ....I was planning something little different with Ragini teasing but stick with this one in the end..Now dont ask me what my brain forget that by now😆..

N finally after sorting everthing ..one thing left n that was her n his relationship...after getting boostup with help of ragini..swara confessed...it was magical.n they kissed thrice or more...😆we didnot get chance to know it...😉 but it was drool worthy..i just cherished it baby...😊Happy you liked the confession, i wanted Swara to confess before her memory comes back..That would make it much more special right 😳... Well you know romance is not my forte but we can imagine it up right 😉..Thanks Talia dear..I cherished your lovely comment as well 🤗

Thank ufor this one awesome memory of swasan...love u muaahhh😃...Love you a whole lot as well Talia dear 🤗..

Loads of hugs n kissy

Talia😳

Lots of love

Nita

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey dear...

Super late..but unres @ 12...

Talia

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for all the parts.😳

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hope you like this one as well Aheli dear🤗

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Unresed.😃
Not only like, I loved it Nita.🤗...Really happy to know that Aheli dearest🤗..And i am so so so sorry for such a late reply back..😭

Prologue:-
Awesome!! I just loved Sanskar.😳 He's so smart.😉 Swara back with her stubbornness with her ML.🤔 And Sahil!!! I just hate him!!!😡😡...Thanks dear ,really happy to know you liked the prologue Yeah Sahil i hate him too, and nope Swara in that track is not the Swara i know, it was someone else😆.. I want Sanskar to be always Smart😎

Ch 1:-
So beautiful update. They way Sanskar was convincing Swara with all the recordings was awesome.😉 Swara started to consider his words and thinking deeply about it.😳 But Sahil!! He is really pissing me off!!🤢...So who do you hate more Sahil or mystery killer of Masks😆😆..Silly question i know 😉... Yeah i wrote this TS solely based on the recording idea and i am happy to know you liked it.. I so wanted Swara to think Sanskar words once and reconisder in the show, i never got that..So what option do we have left except write our take 😭...

Ch 2:-
Sahil Sahil Sahil!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤬 I feel like killing him!!!!!🤢 Without Swara's knowledge, he made her sign in the divorce paper of her and Sanskar!!!!😡 He is so cheapo!!!!!🤢 Thank god Sanskar came at the right time and saved Swara from his clutch!!😳 So Sanskar believed Swara and understood that it must be Sahil's plan. Finally everyone understood that Swara didn't sign the divorce papers intentionally. 😃 Oh! So it was Sanskar and Swara's joint plan to prove Sahil's involvement in separating them, and they succeeded in proving it.😉 Finally Swara trusted Sanskar and decided not to divorce him.😃 And she asked for some times from Sanskar and he happily agreed.😳 And decided to re-start everything by being friends😃 She was worried when he didn't messaged him.😉..Yeah it was Sanskar plan but Swara was on the loop too...She decided to trust him after all... And this was another aspect of the show track i hated when Sanskar refused to listen to Swara screaming she didnt sign the papers😡😡... So had to rectify it by making Sanskar believe her 😉😉..Ofcourse i wont let them get divorce..I am not stupid like our Cvs😆😆..

Ch 3:-
Wow! Their new journey as friends started beautifully.😃 Initially it was awkward for Swara but Sanskar dealt with the situation and handled it perfectly by making Swara comfortable.😉 He told her all about himself. And also about themselves.😳 5 questions per day deal was nice.😆 ..I must have spent half of the time i wrote this chapter in coming up with this 5 questions😳... Happy you liked their new journey dear..

But there was no progress in her memory.😕 No, there was some progress, but all about Ragini trying to kill her twice.😕 Finally Sanskar told her everything, everything including Ragini's and his dark past.😊 Swara felt awkward in the presence of Laksh.😆 Poor Lucky, unaware of it.😆 ..Poor Lucky right, he would probably had no clue 😆😆... There was so much potential for the Memory loss track and cvs wasted it..They could have given a proper reconciliation between the sisters using this track ,they could have given an amazing SwaSan story and our Cvs did nothing😡😡

Finally Swara forgot about all those things and again forgave Ragini (although she didn't knew anything about Swara's feelings.)😳 And her nightmares stopped.😃 But still no progress in her memory.😕😭 Finaly Swara and Ragini spend time with each other by talking.😃 Ragini and Shomi didn't want to burden Swara with new infos, that's why they were hiding facts from her, which was caught by Swara, and cutely she complained about it to Sanskar.😳 And Sanskar began to tease Swara again.😆Swara will always be forgiving one, and i wanted her to take her own time doing it...In the show they rush it up so we sometime feel it unbelievable😆.. Sanskar loved teasing Swara.. I really had a huge grin on my face when i imagined that scene up..It would have been so lovely to see such scenes on the show right 😳...

Finally Ragini was able to make Swara confess that she fell in love with Sanskar again.😳 And persuaded her to tell it to Sanskar, before its too late.😉 And finally Swara proposed Sanskar in the famous "tape recorder confession" style.😳😆 And Sanskar was so happy that he kissed her.☺️ And this kiss brought her the clear memory of Swara's first date with Sankar.😃😉 Sanskar was pleasantly surprised.😛 Loved their cute and romantic moments at the terrace.😳😃 Finally happy and sweet moments between them.😳 And their three consecutive kisses in a single day!!!☺️☺️☺️ Nice way to get back memory.😉😆 I loved it.😳..Swasan are meant to fall in love with each other always😉... Really happy to know you liked the romantic moments and i know i am so bad at writing them..So i am really glad you liked those moments..Three kisses is definately and good way to start their journey right again 😉

I loved the whole TS so much dear.🤗❤️...And i loved your Comment so much Aheli dearest..Thanks dear for such a lovely and detailed comment that made me relieve this TS all over again

With love,
Aheli.

With lots of love

Nita