SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16) - Page 11

Originally posted by: aamias

oh my God this is an amazing os my dear nita loved it all the way felt like reading it again and again

love u dear

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Wow... Amazing... Loved it...

Swara started to love Sanskar once again...😳

N the ending is superb... Loved this ts a lottt...

Keep writing more dear... I love ur works...😊

Originally posted by: sneharay

Beautiful ending.. 👏

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb ending ...
loved it

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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So sorry nita for this late unres so i am commenting for both the parts together Come on Sujoy ..No need for Sorry ..Your comments are so valuable to me and everytime i read your comment it makes me super happy but i dont want to see the sorry though.. I really appreciate you taking your time to let me know how you felt about the TS,so please dont say sorry from no onwards..

Part-2

Nita for me part-2 was the bestest part in this whole ts 👏 the way sanskar win back swara's trust was superb 👏
Swara eagerness to talk with sanskar was lovely and then the divorce scene i thought swara is really crazy who cannot trust sanskar i was like 🤢 but then sanskar trusting and swara also trusting make plan against sahil😈 and finally he get success.

That recording idea was awesome and so swasan friendship is going and sanskar introducing himself as a friend not as a husband was lovely
I really loved part-2 and you have written this part brilliantly 👏 ..I am super happy to know you liked part 2 the best.. Thanks for the compliment Sujoy😳.. It feel really good to know you liked the recording idea, the whole TS was kind of based on the idea of mine 😆...

Part-3

Part-3 was a lovely part to read. Finally swasan friendship is growing day by day and i really loved how easily swara shared her feeling with sanskar and finally the nightmare that ragini trying to kill swara and sanskar telling her full story that scene was superb 👏 ..Thanks Sujoy😃 ..Really happy to know you liked part 3 as well.. I just love their friendship it was the golden period of SwaSan and we could have got it in this track and Cvs ruined it 😡...

Finally swara in love with sanskar swaragini scene was nice and then swasan kiss was ☺️ sanskar spoiling swara mood 😆 but finally they kissed 3 times in a day 😳 ..Yep 3 times a day😳... And i wanted her to fall in love before she gets her memory as well.. You liked Swaragini scene as well ..I thought everyone will be like why add it ,but i think the back old ragini who was sharp would be able to help..😊..

Nita i wish you were in the cvs place when there was going ml track so we can actually get this superb story on tv 😳
Just loved this ts ❤️ ❤️ ❤️..All my wishes on how i wished the ML track went was written as TS, and this forum was filled with different version better version than mine ..How i wish cvs did justice to the track then ruin it like they did 😡...

But i am glad to know you liked this version enough to wish it was aired on tv😳..

If you can please update epilogue please this ts is my favourite pretty please
Thanks for pm...Epilogue..Hmmm...I am having another FF Sujoy and i have to update it this weekend ..So it might not be possible but if an idea came ,who knows i might surprise you like i did in my FF..And once again Thanks for such a lovely comment Sujoy😳

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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