Obsessive-a 16+ ragya [UPDATES after March 3 2017] A/N Page one. - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one,it keeps on getting interesting please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
harshita it's already 9, please post asap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely711

harshita it's already 9, please post asap

Sorry dear my course is not coming to an end pls be patient..I have typed half part or so next may be by midnight..I apologize for the delay
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Posted: 9 years ago
no problem dear, good things take time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update..laksh's intension are dangerous
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Posted: 9 years ago
Obsessive part 6
Hi all thanks for the great response.here is the next part for all my egar raglak fans..
Hope u enjoy..

Laksh sat there gulping one after the other bottle down... N planning to avenge ragini..
He did not return home n there ap was all worried for her son..
AP-sanskaar..
Sa-ji badi Maa...
AP- laksh isn't back home yet..
Sa-badi Maa u know Na ki he might be with some ..
AP-I know sanskaar but pls ek baat call him.. because he had not returned since mrng..
Sa-okay..
Sanskaar tried Calling him but he was continuously cutting the calls...
After about 15 minutes sanskaar started tracking his number n located his location...
He brought him back home n made him lie on the bed.. he removed his shoes.. covered him with...a blanket...
Sa(caressing his hair)- lucky I know u r hurt but Bhai .. tujhe sach mein badalne ki zaroorat h .. u need to realise ki life mein sabse important cheez pyar h.. n not money..
Sanskaar left laksh who was sleeping under the effect of alcohol..

Few weeks later...
It has been quite some time to that incident.. laksh was ready with his plan.. now ragini had finally recovered ...
Afer her last check up at Mr sengupta laksh came to pic her up.. he didn't utter a single word to after that incident yes he came to pic her up as a part of his plan.. whose 1st step was gaining her confidence...
In the car..
L-next session kab h...
R-(coldly)- ab nahi h bas..
L-good.. toh ab age ka kya socha h..
R-idk.. I need time..
L-(fake guilty eyes)- okay take ur time...
R-thanks..
L-ragini..
R-hmm.
L-I want to apologize for what I did .. matlab I never knew ki u won't like me being with u n u were forced for our marriage... I cannot return what I took from u... I am sorry for that...
R-past is past laksh.. let's move on...
L-hmm.. ho sake toh pls forgive me.. I don't force u but still if u can..
R-no need to apologize or feel guilty Jo hua it was my mistake as well..
L-u were r8 ragini I am a bas***d..bloody cheap man..
R-sshhh... I am sorry I ..
L-bas don't be...
L-(in mind)- ragini Don't be sorry or I won't be able to do what I want.. I would like to see u feeling sorry for urself n not sorry because u insulted me.. oh god how hard is it to be good at times.. I did not want to talk to you.. not at all interested to see ur face still I have to continue this drama.. shit man... par the satisfaction of insulting u will be a whole new level ... U just wait n watch...
Rest there was no exchange of words...
L-bye n swara Bhabhi will come to u at n8 she will stay with you... Okay so take care till then...
R-thanks n yes I will...
She turned n entered in her mansion...
Laksh left. ..
Laksh POV-... Huh... Ragini how much I say I hate u.. I can't.. u r different..idk y ... But the way u insulted me is not acceptable.. now it's my turn.. uff see ur effect on me.. nowadays I don't feel like horrifying my dumb lover boy Bhai sanskaar n his loveable wife swara.. eeeghh.. swara Bhabhi... But I am also not able to do so.. wese yesterday I regreted upon this change .. u know rags .. kal 1st time that swara wore a saree .. I so.muvh wanted to horrify my bro n his wife but then I was reminded of u... Yes ..yes ...yes I have to admit just a thought of you and I felt disgusted at me for doing all sorts of wrongs.. eghh.. nowadays I do things so unlike me .. yeah u know last week I apologised to swara Bhabhi n sanskaar I don't know y I did that but yes I did... U know I thought to sleep with kavya again I called her but couldn't.. n she was..so astonished but what can I do when I am myself astonished at my own self.. u know I don't want to do wrong with u.. every next second I am cursing myself for even thinking about hurting u but kya karun now it's late I have decided what I want to do n so will I ...u know some times u need to punish urself..I am doing the same I will hurt u n will get double hurt but... I want to punish myself for thinking n doing wrong to u .. don't worry i will punish myself again after doing this to u as well but 1st hum dono ki saza barabar hogi.. phir I will separately punishment myself ..u don't worry...
Laksh POV-ends...
Fb--.
Laksh was too angry at ragini he wanted to hurt her in any way... N one of the best was to sleep with another girl.. he called kavya tot he hotel room.. n waited for her...
Kavya arrived n she wore a red short hit dress...
K- hi Baby..
L-hi honey so what's up...
K-nothing I was missing u. .
L-oh really..
K- yes ..
Laksh pulled her close n smelled her...n then she moved closer placing her lips on his ...
She kissed him.. n so he responded.. he bit her lips n this put an end to the kiss... He Removed her dress... N explored her body.. kissing each n every part.. of her body..her hands worked on his bare back n chest... He wanted to further but ragini's words echoed in his ears.. he felt her disgusted looks getting more alive.. he felt as if she is around.. he got up from kavya...
K- kya hua laksh..
L-woh .. I ..I need to go ..
K-but y ese beech mein..
L-(wearing his shirt)- yes I have an important work...
K-(irritated) - oh really...
L-yes..
K-I think u have got a better sleeping partner or that ragini... She is at ur back before marriage... Hmm.. u know I hate...
L-(low dangerous voice + holding kavya's hair)- listen carefully.. dare u take her name from ur dirty mouth.. samjhi .. or it won't be good for u..
He jerked her n went away consuming alcohol...
Fb ends...


Ragini entered her mansion...
Ragini POV-
Oh .. god what should I do.. I don't know..this laksh the whole Kolkata knows how he is ..yet at times I feel he isn't that bad.. he can be a genuine person.. well sanskaar bhai at times told me he is changing..mag be he is but the fact is I don't trust him.. I think I should talk to ur mom n dad n tell them about my feelings...
Ragini POV-ends...
Next mrng-
In mm hall...
L-what but y ragini? What's the problem...
R-idk laksh but I can't marry u ... Pls I can't..
AP-laksh Pls let it be u should not force her into this relationship...
Laksh stood numb as he didn't know how to react...
AP-beta pls try to understand...
L-(cuts ap..)- okay do as u wish n he left for.hus room...
Ragini felt relieved.. she still hated laksh to some extent.. yea she did.
In his room..
L-(monologue) he was drinking- laksh laksh kuch soch.. soch..u have to get ragini back..no ragini no...u cannot go back... U can not reject me.. u r mine.. only n only mine.. samjhi...
N there then stick something to his mind.. he immediately ran Down n reached ragini's mansion...
In the room..
L-ragini u really want to break this engagement..
R-yes I want to...
L(fake tears)-but ragini ..(he folded his hands n sat on his knees..) I need a chance pls.. ek mauka dedo.mujhe..I want to change pls ..pls.. I promise I will change..
R-I don't trust u laksh..
L-what should I do to make u trust me..pls ragini don't leave me...
R-okay .. I won't but I give you a week's time show me n prove ki u r changed if yes then I will definitely marry u with my complete will...
L- pakka..
R-hmm.
L-thank you so.much ragini u r an angel.. thanks..
N he hugged her tight..

Ragini-(in mind)- pata nahi I am doing wrong or r8 bus just giving this man a Chance I don't love hi. But if i will feel he is changed then I will accept.him...
L(in mind)- ragini..now 15 days.. n I will turn ur life upside down.. just remember..up side down.. u won't be able to decide weather to live or to die..(smiles evil..)...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the update .interesting one
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Posted: 9 years ago
He is in a confused state it seems..interesting update dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another great update but feeling sorry for Ragini god what is Laksh gonna do can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
He's changing thats good😛

Hope he won't do anything wrong with Ragini😭

Update soon please! 'm in love with this FF😊

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