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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nandini
I still have tears in my eyes, feel very sad. You have suceeded well in connecting the pain to all your readers. Presently I am at loss of words to even praise you for the work. We could complain for the sad end but the tragedy is what makes it beautiful and different!!!.
And as nyna rightly said sujatha s is the worst condition. For swara ,she is living in her chose n world of ignorance but sujatha to fulfill her son' s wish has to die everyday to pretend happy. Please write more dear.
Let me read it once more.
Love, veena.


Hi veena. I'm so happy that you took your time to read comment and found this story worth reading more than once. Thank you so much for your lovely words dear.
Thank you for finding beiaty in this tragedy.

Love
Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

My head started spinning once I finished reading. Oh why Oh why why? This was sheer pain personified and hauntingly beautiful.

Love,
Sakura


Thank you so very much Sakura. It really does mean lot that you like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: smnsupp

Hiii,supriya here
I personally don't know u and I usually don't comment unless I really love the story
This piece of yoursss seriously I have no words to express what I felt reading it
So beautiful and poignant!!!!
My eyes are still damp
This is really beautiful!!!
Loved it!!!
Hope u give us loads and loads of such pieces!!
Go gal!!!
Love,
Supriya


Hi Supriya
I'm Nandini and I like tragedies. I'm sure you've gathered that already. :)

I'm so happy that you commented on this story although you don't often. I'm touched that you found it good enough. Thank you so much dear.
I hope I'll be able to write more too.

Love Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Oh God! That was brutal! It started off on such a nice note, I thought SwaSan are finally together after the ML drama but then with Sujju's reaction I guessed something was terribly wrong. I was reduced to tears by what followed next and I rarely cry!! But this 😭

Lanny. 🤗
I'm so happy you liked it. I wanted to keep this a suspense tragedy and I'm relieved that it did extend work out.
I'm glad that this story has moved you.

For the second time they were so close, but fate intervened and separated them, this time forever. And isn't it natural for swara to assume that he is alive. She is alive, then how can he be dead? Isn't it what he believed as well? 😭

Yes, for their hearts beat in unison. Although sanskar is gone he hasn't really stopped existing and that, I believe is what keeps her going. I always thought of their connection to go beyond and just because he doesn't exist in her world doesn't mean he's not with her anymore. They've a bond which nothing can break. He is a part of her beating heart.

And sujju...what do I say about her. She has come such a long way! She is willing to pretend for years now just because she knew that is what her son would want. I swear I kept hoping that logic be damned, sanskaar will be back but he wasn't ...and I am tearing up again as I write this comment.

I'm pleased to know that you found that part believable. Because sujata would do anything for her beloved son.
And as much as I wanted to bring him back, I couldn't. It was saddening to write this shot.

Fabulous work 👏

Edit: This is the sort of story that I will not be able to forget any time soon. Its going to stay with me for a real long time. And now I need to go watch some videos of swasan in happier times. Phew!

Thank you so much. That means a lot to me. To write a something that stays with the reader, that feels amazing. Again, thank you.



I loved your comment and I'm so very touched that you like this os.
Replied in color above.

Love
Nandini

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nandu🤗

Res

Un res

They that love beyond the world cannot be separated by it.
Death cannot kill what never dies.

That was heart achingly beautiful nandu .I literally had goosebumps reading this ..I mean never ever thought of this kind of take on ML track and I am totally at loss of words ar this beautiful portrayal of swasan love going beyond death ..death ..gosh never ever thought I will love something this painful ..but this is just so so beautifully heart wrenching

This is one of the heart touching OS i have read in this forum..keep writing more ..would love to read


Love
Lucky




Thank you so so very mcih lucky. You kno how much your word means to me. I'm absolutely thrilled that you love this.

It's great that you were moved by this story and you think it is unique.

Their love is indeed otherworldly isn't it. That's how I've always imagined it to go. Beyond even death. For death cannot kill what never does. so aptly put.

Thank you for such a beautiful comment dear. And I will try to write more.

All my love
Nandini🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nandini,
I'm speechless dear..I'm crying right now..😭Everyone are acting to save Swara..Lovely bond..Shot was written beautifully..Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hi Nandini,

I'm speechless dear..I'm crying right now..😭Everyone are acting to save Swara..Lovely bond..Shot was written beautifully..Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊


Hi geethu. You're really sweet.🤗
Thank you soo much for you kind and lovely words.

Love
Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nandini,😊
I'm just speechless dear.😳 So awesome update.👏 And very emotional and painful too.😭 Even I couldn't believe that Sanskar was no more.😭 I was crying.😭 Could feel Swara's pain of loosing him.😭 Sahil!!!😡🤢 But loved reading the OS.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Nandini,😊
I'm just speechless dear.😳 So awesome update.👏 And very emotional and painful too.😭 Even I couldn't believe that Sanskar was no more.😭 I was crying.😭 Could feel Swara's pain of loosing him.😭 Sahil!!!😡🤢 But loved reading the OS.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.


Thank you so much Aheli.🤗
I'm so glad you liked it.

Love
Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
this actually brought tears in my eyes

speechleess

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