SwaSan FF: Thinking with my Heart Chapter 3 - Page 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: humtumsalman

I just hate this sahil
it boils my blood
rest it was awesome

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..

Lanny... 🤗
This is brilliant. This track has left a big scar on SwaSan (too big to be healed Nitzu😭 they ruined SwaSan in a single stroke!)... and currently your story is like a balm to it.. Its only two chapter long sight now but still it felt so good reading it. Because you have written the Sanskaar we know, the one we had expected here in this track. Chapter 1. What a great start. Loved the reply Sanskaar gave to Laksh. His devotion, his love, his faith shone in those words so brightly. (Yes, what is Sanskaar if not the very epitome of faith & selfless love?)
Also, loved the first hint of the struggle Swara is going to face in future; her unconscious mind/heart wants to be in his presence forever but her conscious mind wouldn't let her. (And how could Swara not feel his presence when he was right there beside her!)
Chapter 2; such an amazing chapter once again. Finally got to see his POV about being called a murderer and most of all I loved how you gave a proper reason for him to be there around Swara in park. (I absolutely hated how they showed Sanskaar stalking Swara in that garden. This is the same man who used to knock on his own bedroom door before entering when Swara was there! Creeps like Sahil stalk, not gentlemen like Sanskaar! Hence I had to give him a reason to be there) and ofc that he doubts that 🤬's intentions. This is the Sanskaar Maheshwari I love. Can;t wait to see what he does to that 🤬 when he finally get to know his intentions.

Love,
Nitzy 😳

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Hi Shruti🤗

I am so glad you are writing on this storyline. By starting this FF, you have started our (fans/viewers) own way of not giving up on the real SwaSan. I am so proud of you for this.😊..I want to say a lot of things in my comment. So reserving it...And 'mere mehboob kayamat hogi' is one of my favorite songs by Kishore Kumar. Thanks for PM :)

Res...

Lots of love,

Tia😊

PS: I finally arrived back to Kolkata today!:)

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Lanny 🤗

Read and really liked Chapter 2. I liked how you delved into the natural feelings of hurt on Sanskaar's part. They were as I always expect from him (until he is mad with rage 😈) balanced and reasoned but still effective. (Ya, how could it not hurt him that HE was the only person she has forgotten😭) Then there was that terrible scene of getting hit on the head- I still get furious and feel pain when I recall it 😡😡. Here, I loved seeing those wonderful cogs in his brain whirring away about dear friend Sahil 🤢. I liked how in Sanskaar's way, he is not jumping to immediate conclusions as that wouldn't be right but he is wondering and along exactly the right track. I liked how Sahil's statements made him uncomfortable but loved how he froze him out nicely and put his own point across. (I missed a possessive husband too very much in that scene. How could he not remind Sahil that Swara was HIS WIFE long before she was his friend? What was Sunny even doing there in that scene in the show IDK😳) Also, the taunts about Sahil and his muscles through Sanskaar were hilarious! 😆 Will await chapter 3!

Love,

Shru x

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Hi shruti

First let me thank-you in the forum for helping me to post a work and be active in the forum. Without your help I wouldn't be here today.

Yday I wanted to protest for giving us a very short chapter which soon gave way to happiness seeing the super fast second chapter. (Since I already have a broad story from the show & have just to fill in the details which for me are VERY important I think I might be able to do a chapter daily. Lets see) Since you are somebody who vehemently opposed the current track on behalf of all of us, I am sure you ll treat us with a story which meet the dreamy swasan sequence each of us had wished at the start of this track. (I sincerely believed that the track had a lot of potential & my heart bled to see it all go down the drain simply because the non creatives were so least bothered about the wonderful characters they had themselves created)

And the best line from the update...what were the muscles for? Lifting petite women out of rivers? That was a punch line at the CVs (😆 😆 😆)

Please update soon

Veena

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lanny...dear

Awesome start...loved both chapters...as usual my sansku is in pain because of swara's memory loss..n pinning for her..but didnot lose hope..want to talk to her ..but that kabab mai hadi interfered...ahhh but sansku my intelligeent baby already started doubting sahil intentions...good... thank God..u kept him sharp..true sanskaar maheswari of earlier days ..wise n smart..judging people..keeping an hawks eye...waiting for further story progress...

Update earliest..

Talia