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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#711

Look whats here and who is back.. should I say who never left .🤗🤗

I am sad I missed that excitement of waiting for prologue ..but a greedy side of me is dancing , that I got to read the prologue .. and what a start we have nynu👏⭐️. I could feel vibes hitting straight out of your writing. The wait, hope , pain ,resignation of Swara and Sanskaar, the subtle notes of it could be felt with intensity and the cosmic connection angle. It took me to FM ,nose and toe😆

👏I am glad Sanskaar decided to hear out to Swara. That was very fair on his part..and deep down its his own need to find her, keep her by his side always. I so loved Sanskaar's part..a bit more.😉

I Cant wait for chapter 1 .

I always tell you I wish I could write like you and I keep wishing. May be one day😉😉😳

I am super glad you posted this.I will step in forum to catch more of memories and few other dwellers

Love Loads

Lucky

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ripo

@ripo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#712

Awesome dear nyna dear love it

Excited to read next

Post soon dear

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#713

This is my spot for prologue.😃

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Beautifully written nyna dii...loved it loadzz...post soon...

Moumita🤗 Thanks for finding it beautiful. I am just going over the final draft for part 1, almost falling asleep, will post tomorrow early morning, (my laptop charge is also going down)

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
And yes I want pms for every chapter...

Will do😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Look whats here and who is back.. should I say who never left .🤗🤗
I am sad I missed that excitement of waiting for prologue ..but a greedy side of me is dancing , that I got to read the prologue .. and what a start we have nynu👏⭐️. I could feel vibes hitting straight out of your writing. The wait, hope , pain ,resignation of Swara and Sanskaar, the subtle notes of it could be felt with intensity and the cosmic connection angle. It took me to FM ,nose and toe😆

👏I am glad Sanskaar decided to hear out to Swara. That was very fair on his part..and deep down its his own need to find her, keep her by his side always. I so loved Sanskaar's part..a bit more.😉

I Cant wait for chapter 1 .

I always tell you I wish I could write like you and I keep wishing. May be one day😉😉😳
I am super glad you posted this.I will step in forum to catch more of memories and few other dwellers

Love Loads
Lucky

I knew you never left, but you were missed - and so was your tale (and I know I still have to get back with a detailed comment for Chapter 9 and 10 but still..😳)

I loved writing the prologue - the same structure but with a little twist and the cosmic connection - it had to be subtle so that rational Sanskaar can dismiss it as stress related though Swara admits that she is missing him like never before.

Sanskaar is a fair person and this is almost six months afterwards, so good bit of time to make rational decisions- but I was a little worried and now after reading your take, I am relaxed. And since Swara is also willing to tell him about all her memories, it would help them find answers.

Chapter 1, part 1 almost done but too tired to post now (the double quotation marks will trouble me, so tomorrow morning)

@bold - all the encouragement I need to keep writing☺️ And yes, now that I have started posting, I would be more regular. I have to start posting on RR too, have a few snippets for that too.

lots of love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: ripo
Awesome dear nyna dear love it
Excited to read next
Post soon dear

Thanks, sweetheart (you have to let me know how I call you). Next part - up tomorrow. I know I said this morning, but then work caught up with me.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: Anahita_Leve
This is my spot for prologue.😃

Dyuti🤗how is life now? Your examinations are done? Take your time though I am very very eager to know your take.

love,

Nyna

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#719

Hello nyna how r u buddy hope everything is fine.
U knew I missed few chapters but by prologue look like sanskar misunderstood swara.
now both are missing each other.
Waiting for update & hoping catch unread chapters soon.
Take care buddy
bye

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: showrav24
Hello nyna how r u buddy hope everything is fine.
U knew I missed few chapters but by prologue look like sanskar misunderstood swara.
now both are missing each other.
Waiting for update & hoping catch unread chapters soon.
Take care buddy
bye

Hey Showrav,

I am fine, just a little busy with work and house shifting. How are you and how is your father? Hope he is recovering quickly?

You missed a few chapters, and yes the misunderstanding was a big one, though the events which led to it are quite reasonable - Chapter 1 which I am now updating will give you a hint as to what the misunderstanding was.

Chapter 1 updating now and I am eagerly waiting to know how you found the previous chapters.

Take care too,

love,

Nyna