Swasan OS: Revelation and Confrontation

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@__nidhi__

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
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Superb os 👏
Totally loved it
Really like the way sanskar answer back to swara 👏
And finally swara realizes her mistake 👏
Very well written 👏

P.s- Can you convert this os in to ts please?

thank you so much😳

i am glad you loved it😃

if i concert it to ts! the Os will lost its charm!

sorry

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@__nidhi__

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Awesome OS dear... I love Mr.no one... nice idea...

Me kamila...

With love..

Kam...

thank you so much😳

i am glad you liked it😃

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@__nidhi__

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Helee
nidhi this os awesome...! the way you have written sanskar's character is so good...and I m so glad that in this story swara is questioning things and she is ready to listen his explanations...and you have written her mind vs heart so beautifully...👏 brilliant simply brilliant...

I wish we see something like this in the the show someday...anyway loved that slap so much...😆

lots of love,
Helee.

thank you so much😳

i also loved the slap very much😆

esa kuch nahi hone wala show meine!

my imagination is better than the show!