Swasan OS: Revelation and Confrontation

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"Mein eek hi chat ke neeche us insaan ke saath nahi reh sakti jisne mujhe kahi baar marne ki koshish ki hain!" Swara said making everyone gasp. All were present inside the Maheshwari mansion as Ragini was pregnant. Ragini insisted Swara to stay with her in the mansion till her delivery; first she hesitated but eventually agreed to her sister's wish. But the presence of him who was her life a few days back has now become her "khooni". She was astonished to see the room decorated but as soon as she got to know that he has decorated she failed to recognize it. Every being present there looked at her as if she had grown three heads but there stood the villain smirking at the poor hero. While Sanskaar was just looking at his lady love.

"Sanskaar ne humesha mujhe dukh pochane ki koshish ki hain! ek baar goli mara aur dusra goons ko bheja Sahil ko marne ke liye! Tumhe meri jaan kyun chaiye?" Swara shouted looking at him yet he was still staring at him. He was digesting the fact she was accusing of him hurting her? His Swara? How can you? Not even in his nightmare he could do that. No getting any reply she continued

"Ab chup kyun ho? Bol the kyun nahi? Accept it Sanskaar! And more over that you have a criminal record too! Any talk upon that?" Swara said while Ragini caught hold of her shoulders

"Swara tum zyada bol rahi ho!" Ragini said not wanting to hear any shit about Sanskaar from her sister's mouth because she knew if Swara got her memory back she will be drown in the pool of guilt

"Ragini tum ek galat insaan ka saath de rahi ho! Isne mujhe goli maari hain! Nadi mein dakha diya hain! Goons bheje hain mujhe marne ke liye! Criminal record hain! aur aap log mujhe bol rahe ho ki yeh mera pati hain!" Swara shouted turning to her family while Sanskaar marched towards her like a predator walking towards his prey.

"Bas ab ek aur shabd nahi! Bohout bola tum ne aur bohout sun liya meine! Ab meine bolunga aur tum sunogi!" Sanskaar said gripping her shoulders

"Sanskaar back-off!" Sahil said looking at his grip

"Don't you dare come in between us! She is my wife! And I have all the rights to talk to her! And who the hell are you to instruct me? When none of my family members is objecting?" Sanskaar said as his eyes covered with rage looking at Sahil. Swara was stunned to know the tone he was using to talk with Sahil. But she didn't speak anything, nor could she realize the pain Sanskaar was giving her by tightening the grip around her shoulders. Swara didn't speak a word; she really wanted to hear what will Sanskaar speak now. she decided to keep quite.

"Sanskaar you are hurting her!" Sahil said softening his tone towards Sanskaar seeing his rage. Sanskaar looked at Swara and loosened her grip on her

"Sahil is better you get out of here! It's a family matter!" Sanskaar said looking at Swara, Who was trying to read him through his eyes.

"I will be here! No one can stop me from being here!" Sahil said and Sanskaar sighed.

"Aur tum! Kya bola tumne? Meine tumhe goil maari?" Sanskaar asked not to sound sarcastic but eventually he was sounding sarcastic.

"Goli ka nishaan bataogi mujhe! Kidhar hain?" he asked. Which hit Swara in her mind? Where was the mark? She didn't have any mark on her body? If any if not was the mark of the bullet. She kept quiet and looked everywhere but not him. She knew he was right! All stood there stunned with his question; Sahil couldn't say anything because he also knew he was right.

"ab tum kyun chup ho? Jawab nahi hain?" Sanskaar asked shaking her a little. She still didn't looked at him and he smiled sarcastically looking at her

"Aur rahi baat nadi meine girane ki! Do one thing ask you sister, your dad and bade papa, Laksh and even if you want some more people I will call the police who were there when you were pulled into the river and then I jumped behind you to save you!" Sanskaar said losing his temper. Swara looked at him wide eyed; she didn't know what to reply to his answer.

"In ease you can take the police to your side with the money you have!" Sahil mocked at him

"Did I ask for your opinion Mr. no-one?" Sanskaar snapped at him

"Aur rahi baat those goons! What do you think I am behind all these?" Sanskaar said in a stern voice which indicated he is not going to back-off

"I..i saw you giving them money!" She said stammering and not looking at him

"And you thought that I was behind of them??!!!" Sanskaar asked in a sarcastic tone

"You were giving them money! I saw it from my own eyes!" Swara snapped at him

"You want to see something?" Sanskaar said and she looked at him in confusion

"What are you talking about?" Sahil asked sweating

"Mr. no-one! Its better you say something about the goons!" Sanskaar asked smirking

"What about goons?" Sahil asked wiping the sweat out from his forehead

"Don't try to be god in-front of her! What if you have saved her you can't take the place I have in her heart! I know she doesn't remember anything! But the way you have took the advantage of her vulnerability! Commendable!" Sanskaar said walking towards them while everyone gasped behind hearing the new piece of information.

"You can't prove yourself innocent and you are blaming me for them!" Sahil said

"They confessed it Sahil!" Sanskaar said stopping on his tracks

"Fine I was the one who sent those goons!" Sahil said and Swara couldn't believe her ears she walked towards him and the next thing Sahil's cheek were burning sensation with the sting he just got from her. He looked at her not believing her what she did to her. Sanskaar looked at Swara in surprise; he didn't expect that Swara will return into a feisty avatar.

"Get away from here!" Swara said in a low voice but stern

"Swara just listen to me once!" Sahil said stepping towards her but she backed away

"Get out!" she said in a threatening voice

"Just listen to me once Swara!" Sahil said pleadingly

"Get-"

"Let him stay here! We are going out of the topic!" Sanskaar said stopping the conversation between them

"And what was the next query of yours?" Sanskaar asked Swara

"Criminal records!" she said looking straight in to his eyes. She wanted to finish this once and all.

"It's not me you also have criminal records!" That stunned her she didn't believe that, even if she had memory loss she was sure, she hasn't committed in any sin to get her to jail.

"And if I and Ragini weren't there then you were there still in that jail!" Sanskaar said and Swara looked at him and then towards Ragini while Ragini just nodded her head

"Tumhe yeh bhi yaad nahi ki tum mujhse shaadi karne ke liye jail se bhagi???!!" Sanskaar asked shaking her

"Tumhe mere saath rehne problem hain! fine! meine yahaan se chala haaonga! Par aage se kabhi mujhe khooni mat kehna agar wapis sunuga toh shayyad meine zinda nahi reh paunga!" Sanskaar said in a soft tone looking at her. His eyes now were covered with a thin layer of tears. He looked away from her and she felt something rip her heart.

"Par ek baat samaj lena! Kahi bhi jaogi aas paas rahunga meine tumhare! Agar do kadam ke baad gir bhi jaogi meine rahunga wahan peh tumhe uthane! Manta hum tumhe yaad nahi ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho aur tumse kitna par mujhe bharosa hain ki tumhe kabhi toh mera pyaar yaad ayega us din ke baad hi meine is ghar aaunga!" Sanskaar said stepping towards the doorway

"Pyaar karta hun meine tumse Swara aur humesha karta rahunga! Agar zindagi bhar mujhe tumhara intezaar karna padega meine karunga! Par mujhe kabhi khooni mat bhulana! Kyunki tum us insaan ko khooni bula rahi hon jo tumse is duniya sabse zyada pyaar karta hain aur tumhe bachane ke liye apni jan bhi de sakta hain!" Sanskaar said and turned towards Sahil who was standing there probably digesting all the facts. While Swara wasn't knowing what to react towards his talks. When he wa stkaing one step towards the door her heart was falling apart giving her a ache. Sanskaar walked towards Sahil.

"Even if you tried to come near her with any of your dirty tricks, remember I am always there beside her! Agar galti se bhi meine tujhe uske aas paas makkhi ke tara mandarte dekhe udhar hi jaan se maar dalunga!" Sanskaar said in a low yet a threatening voice which made Sahil gulp in fear. Not knowing what to reply he just walked away from there. Sanskaar turned towards his family.

"Mom fikar mat karna! Meine thike rahunga!" Sanskaar said looking at Sujata

"Jana jarrori hain?" Sujata asked coming toward him

"meine kahaan na mom fikar mat karna aur jab tak meine yahaan hunt oh shayaad mera pyaar mujhse aur dur chala jayega!" Sanskaar said looking towards Swara, who already had her eyes on him.

"Sanskaar yahi ruk jao!" Swara said while he was going out making him stop in his tracks

"Mujhe tumhari sympathy nahi chaiye Swara! Jab tumhe mere pyaar ka eshaas hoga tab meine is ghar meine vapas aaunga!" Sanskaar said stepping out of the Maheshwari Mansion Making Swara's heart broke into pieces.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh yess!! finally i completed this Os! I was writing this from two days! and i finally completed, and i feel so good about it! so guys hows it?!!!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜›

My SS and FF will be update soon!

comments please!šŸ˜†
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Superb os šŸ‘
Totally loved it
Really like the way sanskar answer back to swara šŸ‘
And finally swara realizes her mistake šŸ‘
Very well written šŸ‘



P.s- Can you convert this os in to ts please?
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Awesome OS dear... I love Mr.no one... nice idea...

Me kamila...

With love..

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nidhi this os awesome...! the way you have written sanskar's character is so good...and I m so glad that in this story swara is questioning things and she is ready to listen his explanations...and you have written her mind vs heart so beautifully...šŸ‘ brilliant simply brilliant...

I wish we see something like this in the the show someday...anyway loved that slap so much...šŸ˜†

lots of love,
Helee.
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os nidhi.. šŸ‘šŸ¼
Well written one.
Wow i just love that slap.. Poor mr. no one.. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update...
Just like the sandbar we need to see in the show loved it ...
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Yes finally some thing straight forward which gets to the points and has facts and detail
Fabulously written really enjoyed it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just forgot commenting on this! I'd already liked it but forgot to comment.
I just loved this OS Nidhi, like I'm loving both of ur FFs!
This was really fabulous, the way Sanskaar just ticked off Sahil and made Swara realise and hear everything!!
This is the Sanskaar Maheshwari I actually want. The intelligent guy, who is able to look through someone and plans his actions accordingly! And he did it...woohoo! Swara slapping Sahil...yayyy!! This has to be something I so badly want. And also, Sanskaar beating him black and blue and all colours!
The last line of Sanskaar was just fab!! He doesn't need her sympathy, he isn't a toy after all. The day she'll realise and remember her love for him, she shall have him back!!
Just amazing!
Loved it a lot
Sakshi!
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb Os.. šŸ‘šŸ¼


thank you so much😳

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