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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Awesome update
The pain of Sanskar was beautifully portrayed...
He is totally shattered after the incident.he loves swara but his mind is not ready to accept it...
And swara she loves him...when will he realize that they love each other and they are soul mates...
Swara trying to find what happened in past...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: SwaSan4ever

Wonderful update !! Sanskar's fear making the situation complicated ., but love swara's attitude ! She rocks

Glad you like the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Harshita, very beautiful story dear.. 👏

I love swasan here. Broken sanskaar & his pain, innocent swara & her determination is clearly described in here. Raglak & ramta are superb. Dadi... 😡 no words for her..
Very well written. Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the nxt update. 😊


Thanks
Glad u liked the story


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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: raaz19

Amazing update and so much pain...woe he does love her...and cares...

Please share the back story of his pain and would love to see how she fixes his broken soul...

Update soon..

Raz


Thanks
Yes I will surely reveal his story in details soon

Surely i will update asap.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
they both lobe each other
n expressed it too
still they r not together
sanskaar is so broken n he is not giving her chance to heal him

Thanks for reading and responding prachi it matters a lot..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome update

The pain of Sanskar was beautifully portrayed...
He is totally shattered after the incident.he loves swara but his mind is not ready to accept it...
And swara she loves him...when will he realize that they love each other and they are soul mates...
Swara trying to find what happened in past...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

Thanks for replying
Glad you like the update
I will Surely update asap...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Part-4


Hi all thanks for reading the previous part. Glad u liked it.. I don't know till where i be able to take the story in this update or how long will it be. But I will try my best to get the max to u. Pls do read n leave ur replys and views on the part I am egar to know them. Thanks for reading in advance.



Swara was sitting alone in his room n crying he too left from there. Blood was continuously flowing from his hand. His eyes were red drinking another bottle of alcohol he was walking through the corridors of mm.
He reached the entrance.
Su- sanskaar..k hua thare haath ko..
Sa- nothing. (Cold reply)
Su- no u come here.. laksh take that alcohol away from him.. n throw it out..
Sa- mom
Su- shut up..
She was continuously scolding him n bandaging his hand..
He was admiring his mother.
There in the room swara remembered of his hand n ran Down..
She felt relieved when saw mom with him..

Sanskaar saw her n ragini ran to her.. she cried her heart out on ragini's shoulder..

Ragini then made her sit on the sofa n then she brought water for her. Swara slowly drank it.

Sanskaar stood up n started to leave..

SW- sanskaar..

He stood still..

SW- kya hua tha .. that you are not trusting me.. u r not accepting our marriage and our love .. y sanskaar y I want the answer..


Sa-u r no one to ask ..
Saying this he held her wrist tight and her bangles broke.. blood ozed out her wrist..
SW-AAhhh sanskaar... chodo mera haath..

He left it with jerk
Sa-tum mera peeche chodo swara it's been.. the limit..

Saying this he left.. leaving a broken and shattered swara behind..

Next afternoon -
I'm his room -
Sa- swara ..
SW- bolo sanskaar kyun chilla rahe ho
Sa- shut up.. Awaz neeche aur tameez SE bola karo..
SW- same to u ..
Sanskaar came to her and twisted her hand behind ..
Sa- swara go away I am a beast..
Sw- y u always want to pretend what u r actually not.. u ain't so bad that you pretend to be..
Sa- jhooth.. wrong .. I am bad swara...
A saying this sanskaar pinned her to.a wall .
Sw-. Sanskaar what is this..
Sa- go away..
Sw- never ... never before knowing ur true and complete story...

Sanskaar losened his grip .. turned her to him n kissed her lips forcefully..
Sw- door raho Sanskaar..
Sa- yahi toh mein keh raha hoon.. door raho .. stay away..
N he made a line b/w them with alcohol..
SW- sanskaar pls bolo batao.. kuch toh hua hoga tumhare saath..
Sa- kuch nahi hua h mere saath but agar tum chup nahi hui toh tumhare saath bahut kuch hoga .. got it..
SW- jhooth..
Sa- sach..
Sw- I know u r lying.. agar patni nahi man sakte uska darja nahi de sakte toh kam SE kam yeh hi batao Na y .. kyun.. kuch toh wajah hogi Na ...
Sa- shut up..
SW- I won't..
Now sanskaar slapped her hard...
Sa- then get lost..
Sw- aur bhi marloo but I want to know the truth..
Sa- oh then wait... I will tell you the truth...
He held her hand and took her down stairs .. he was continuously pleading him to leave her...but he wasn't a person who listens ..

In hall-
Su- sanskaar thara dimag kharab h kya..
Sa- no doubts mom...
RP - chod chori ko..
Sa- no Mr dictator...

Sanskaar dragged her to the temple..
Sa- ab tumhe sach bata hoon.. I don't hate u ..but I hate our relationship.. I hate it when you say ur Mrs swara sanskaar Maheshwari... I hate it...

Sw- y .. y ... shadi kyun ki thi jab itna hi bura lagta tha..
Sa- pucho apni behen SE I wasn't ready n today I will put an end to this incomplete relationship.. bhagwan k samne shadi hoti h Na.. I break our relationship here..

Saying this he pulled her mangalsutra out n removed the vermilion.. he then tried to remove her Shaka pola vain ..she jerked her hand and slapped him hard.

Sw- how dare u sanskaar Maheshwari...
Sa- I am daring miss swara boss ..
Swara grabbed his collar..
SW- u ... tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko..
Sa- jerked her hand..
Sa- out .. out of my house...
He started dragging her out when he felt a force.. ram held hand .. freed her from his grip.. n came in front of her
He slapped sanskaar bad .. so badly that blood ozed out of the side of his lips .
Sa- dictator what you want now ese hi thappad Mar k shadi karadi par yeh rishta kabhi pura nahi hoga.

Now Laksh came forward and he punched him..
L- bloody wild beast..

The family babled a lot about him ... his brother and father they Beated him to some extent.. n she stood numb.. he felt broken again.. left the mansion angrily ..
She was angry at him but still her heart ached ..


In the evening -


He stood at the entrance of the MM .. he was drunk.. she stood up sensing his condition.. his eyes turned red in anger seeing her.. he came towards her in full speed n pushed her towards a pillar .. "what the hell is the thing u want?? " He questioned her , pressing his face b/w his fingers.. his family tried to pull him back but today it was more than enough for him ..
"Leave me sanskaar.. pls... " she pleaded.."I don't want anything." ...

"Oh really!!, Then y r u here .. u r not my wife.. atleast I don't consider u , then y the hell r u here Miss Swara Boss" he replied sarcastically ..

"Mind it .. I am Mrs. Swara sanskaar Maheshwari.. " she replied jerking his hand..

"Oh so u r so called Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari... " he said holding her hair...

" Only for u ... I am so called.. for me this relationship matters a lot..." she replied struggling to free her hair from his grip

He smirked.. "so y not to complete this in all senses... " saying this he drank the remaining alcohol from his bottle.. " I u earlier only not to mess with Sanskaar Maheshwari.. but now I will show you what a beast I am .. "

He left her hair n continued -" last time.1 last time I am saying go away n stay away from me.. I am not a person to love or stay with.."

" U r .. but the only thing is u r scared of love.." she said looking directly into his eyes...

"So u claim to love me.. so let's complete ur love story today..." saying this he held her hand breaking her bangles.. blood oozeout from their hands .. his was bleeding along with her wrist..

" Leave her sanskaar.. " .. "what r u doing" .. yelled his family for.long ...

"Accepting her as my wife.. I am doing what u all wanted me to do .. " he replied n pulled her along with him to their room...

"Sanskaar leave her or it won't be good..." it was RP and dp .
" When I left her u roared on me .. belated me now when I am accepting her u r again roaring upon me.. that's not done.." he replied in disgust.. he felt disgusted at himself for what he was going to do but today.. he was going to do that...

He pushed her inside their room.. or rather his room.. followed by lashing the door behind him...


" This is what u want Na .. now here I will claim u .. " he said coming close to her she moved back until she touched the window.. she was about to fall when he pulled her n they both fell on the floor.. he was on top of her his breath touched her skin..

"Once more.. just the last of last chance.. I am saying go away or u will feel the worst.. " he replied moving close to her.

"Never ever .. u can do what you want but I know u can't touch me like That.. u may call urself a beast but u aren't.." she.saud looking into his eyes.

" Oh really..then let me show u " he moved close to her lips and kissed her .. it was a rough kiss.. she responded back .. n he soon deepened the kiss.. it ended when he bit her lip..

"Want to test me or is it enough.. get Lost.. " he questioned.. expecting her to run away..
" I won't back off .. do what u want to" she answered n his eyes turned more red ...

"U r mad .. but now it's ur wish..." he tore her blouse.. almost removed her saree.. n started leaving a trait of wet kisses on her shoulder.. n then a vampire kiss on her neck..

He did that but felt more disgusted at himself n hence got up.. she too stood up .. wiping her tears.. he simply covered her with his blazer.. he couldn't meet her eyes...he moved to the cupboard n gave her another dress..


His family was banging the door again n again.. as if they will break it .. he pulled another bottle n started drinking again..

She canged n came out.. he made her sit .. banged her hand... but when she tried doing the same he jerked her hand.. n Instead broke his bottle n deepened his cut ..

He smiled when blood droplets started flowing from his hand..
"Sanskaar.. yeh ... " she was speaking when he cut..
"Sshhh I deserve this.. I am bad .. I am worst ..y don't u go away like all others did.. " ...
"Because I love you" she replied teary eyed...
He smiled.. n sat on he floor.. again enjoying his wound..


By that time laksh and adarsh broke the door lock n entered.

L- u beast...
Ad- ghinn ati h tu mera Bhai h...
Sanskaar grinned through tears.

They came to him were about to hit him but she stopped them..

SW- nahi pls.. sanskaar ko aur mat maro..

L- he deserves that...

Sw- nahi pls I want to talk to him..

RP - yeh baat karne kayak h hi Na chori..

SW- please papa..

They all left.. he was still enjoying his wound it still pained less than his heart did...

Sa- what you want..
SW- truth..tumhari life ka sach.. kya hua tha sanskaar..pls kuch bolo Na batao Na pls... N u beat me or do anything u want but pls tell me the truth..

He stood up n took another bottle of alcohol sat back on the ground and started narrating hus life...

Sa- my story is painful one..

Fb--

5 years back..

Sanskaar Maheshwari was in love with kavita..he loved her a lot... they were together.. so close..he had proposed her.. she had agreed to his proposal ... but just the day before he informed his family he decided to inform his family he found her in somebody else's arms ... rajat her boyfriend n they were making love...

On noticing sanskaar n knowing that he saw everything they blackmailed him saying he have to marry kavita so that both of them get money or they will kill him...

He denied and ran away.. he somehow escaped but his heart was shattered...

But he tried to move on that horrible night of heart break n betrayal wasn't even out of his mind yet when his family brought the alliance of kavya..

He thought he should give life another chance.. he simply accepted it..
But on the day of their engagement kavya met him and told him everything about her and sahil ..
Sanskaar was not heartbroken but he simply agreed to break the engagement.. he moved down stairs to talk to them when she and sahil had a phone convo..
Sahil asked her to fake her love till the wedding day n manage the situation now anyhow because Maheshwari's will give her loads of jwellery and if they will elope with it then for quite some or more than half of their life could be set...she agreed...

There down stairs sanskaar talked to all regarding the engagement he doesn't want to do.. his dad again slapped him.. just then kavya entered.. n started begging for not breaking the engagement.. she was crying and sanskaar asked that he wanted to talk to her..
She told him a lie that sahil left her. If he will also leave her then she will be shattered n everything.. sanskaar could feel her pain.. he agreed for the marriage... all were happy.. he too tried to accept her...the pehras were going on when suddenly someone hit sanskaar with a bullet close to his heart .. when tried to look it was sahil.. kavya too smiled seeing him he held her hand n they were eloping when she said -"sanskaar we r sorry but what to do rich people like u r meant to be used tumhe kuch garak nahi hoga agar kuch gold k saath we elope Karen.. n who come close to people like u until they need money .. money.n loads of money.."

Saying his she eloped.. n sanskaar fell on ground.. the floor turned red out of his blood...
Fb ends ---------
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Res.

Unres..

Harshita... dear first of all sorry for late unres was stuck with my update... It was heart wrenching chap... I was almost crying.. Why Sanskaar.. I hated kavya and kavita... they can't do this to him... That's why he is not trusting swara love for him... hope he'll trust her love... Express his love for her to...

With love...

Kam..
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
awesome update..
sanskar is broken...
continue soon..
thanks for PM..

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