SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chapter 3:

Sanskaar has got one thing absolutely right. He is in a viper pit no doubt😎 That family is the worst possible family anyone can have...after the Gadodias😆

😆 😆 Oh yes, the Maheshwaris and the Gadodias compete for the title of nightmare families! 😉 And there certainly are a lot of poisonous serpents slithering about! 😆


Like SwaSan stealing glances at each other...dekho dekho bindaas dekho...tumhe haq hai😆😉 I had thought that when she goes & hugs him on his return we would have a repeat of the sindoor wedding You should definitely add one such scene in the future sometime Viji

😉 😳 Now how can Sanskaar keep his eyes off HIS Swara; or for that matter Swara stop stealing glances at HER Sanskaar. ☺️ The "tumhe haq hai" line made me crack up. 😆 Reminded me of that film---"Vivaah" was it? Good Lord, I was gnashing my teeth in impatience by the end. Somehow the chemistry there (in the movie) seemed so thanda. SwaSan hota, tho they would have set the screen ablaze. Or brought flashes of electricity and bolts of lightning to dance all around them. 😳 😉



Hey Lanny my dear 🤗 🤗

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Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Hi viji🤗

The third chapter is heart touching one.
The chapter was divided into three.but each part was simply beautiful.
The first part was filled with swara's thoughts.her childhood and her ideas about marriage...In childhood she suffered a lot.
But sanskar's entry in her life changed it.his love for her it was selfless.
But the destiny played a cruel game with her.he lost his memory.
And the second part was about sanskar's thoughts.
His heart and brain was in a battle.they all said that his marriage was not arranged.it was a love marriage.then why she shoot him?
He was searching for the answers...
And in the third part Laksh and ragini's thoughts it was also beautifully portrayed.
When will he get his memory back..
Eagerly waiting for your next update



My Dear Shamina 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so very much, yaar. I am so very happy to hear that you loved all the 3 parts in this Chapter. And you made me feel really touched, by your description of this chapter as a beautiful and heart touching one. 😳 😳

Its always a pleasure to get your feedback, to read your insightful and wonderfully articulated views. I am really glad you loved the portrayal of Swara's thoughts and emotions, leading from her childhood to the present; Sanskaar's thoughts; and finally Ragini and Lakhsya's thoughts.

Next chapter should (all going well) be posted Sunday 26/06.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago


Hey Akku 🤗🤗

Thanks a ton, and please, no formalities about time to un res and stuff. Take your time, do so when convenient, no rush whatsoever. Was so touched to receive your message, hope your sis is settling into hostel life well.

🤗

Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago


Hi Saku 🤗 🤗

Thanks dear, love your comments, you know how much they mean to me. I shall revert on your un res'd comment shortly.

Love

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Viji

I am ready to wait till Sunday for a super long chapter
Veena



Thanks Veena my dear pal 🤗

Chapter 4 would be up (all going well) on Sunday. Hope it meets your expectations.

Love

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update Viji

It was just fantastic
Each situation was described so beautifully
I always wonder this is the best piece I have read but as you give a next update it just makes me feel that how can a writer's imagination be so beautiful
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for your update



Hey Mansi 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much yaar 😳 Those were some really wonderful and touching words of appreciation, made me feel so very blessed.

I am so happy to know that you liked this chapter so very much.

Would update (all going well) on Sunday 26/06.

Loads of Love

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks so much, Sneha 🤗 Very happy to know that you loved it.

Cheers

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

So awsm.
The little swasan moments,sanskar's cnfusns,turmoil...
So love it.
Beautifuly written.



Thanks so very much Sonu 🤗

Very glad that you liked the SwaSan moments, and the portrayal of the turmoil in Sanskaar's mind right now. It really is a heart versus mind battle for him. But where Swara is concerned, his heart and soul always have the edge. 😳

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks Aahana 🤗 Very happy that you loved it.

Cheers

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh...wow...m so loving it..thanks for pm and buddying me...i absolutely love sanskar's conflicting emotions



Hey Neha 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton, so happy to hear that you loved this chapter and the previous ones too; and the depiction of Sanskaar's conflicting emotions.

Lots of Love,

---Viji




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