SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome.. 👏

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Viji dear, eagerly waiting for the next update 😊

It's wonderful 😳

Originally posted by: Helee

hey Viji,

awesome concept...what would have happened if sanskar would have lost his memory instead of swara, interesting very interesting...an alternate universe...😳 on second thought isn't it the alternate universe of what would have happened if swara would have failed to show sanskar the right path...not completely but in a way...or is it just my wishful thinking...?

Hey Helee...🤗🤗🤗

Am so very touched by your analytical, insightful and perceptive replies, my dear. They really make my day. 🤗 Am so happy that you loved this alternate retelling of the ML track. And yes, you could take it as an alternate universe, in a sense, of what Sanskaar could still be like, had Swara not come into his life and restored him to the person he was. Filling his life with so much joy, love, peace, light and contentment. 😳 Like you said--not exactly, but in a sense, since Sanskaar's retrograde amnesia has wiped out his conscious memories. He still has that indelible imprint of Swara in his heart, subconsious and soul though, he can never fully forget her. 😳

oh so sanskar hasn't lost his common sense along with his memory...great 😛 and he is not shouting khooni khooni as well...I love it...u know I always wondered that why swara never thought that why sanskar's face is so bright in her hazy memories...thank god sanskar did that...!

😆 😉 Yes Sanskaar has lost his memories, his personality hasn't changed. He still remains the formidable, clear thinking and logical Sanskaar. 😳 He has already started reflecting on the fact that he does not have any bullet wounds on his body. And on the fact that the unknown lady whose image flashes so clearly in his mind----that image keeps drawing him in, keeps fascinating him.

so he can't focus on kavita because of swara..😈 can I laugh plz...? 😊 and he is jealous from lucky because of swara 😛 and than there is ragini who knew sanskar in few minutes and why not if sanskar is the guru than she is the best cheli.( I m really happy that in your story everyone has basic characteristics unlike serial) I just loved all these small small moments.😳

😳 😆 Yes, please chuckle and giggle to your heart's content. 😉 I was always intending that Kavita would only be as a memory of a past love, in a corner of Sanskaar's mind. No resurrected Kavita allowed!! 😉 And Sanskaar. though he wants to feel all that bitterness and vindictiveness at the fact that he lost Kavita, is not able to really feel all those negative emotions to the same raw degree he used to. Also, when he tries to dwell on memories of Kavita, the image of Swara keeps sliding into his mind. 😳

And Ragini would definitely register the expressions on Sanskaar's face, the signs that he seems to have slipped back into his dark past. Those shades and layers of greyness, as it were, would strike Ragini; because she herself had fallen into those dark emotions earlier. She had let all her negative thoughts overcome the goodness within her; and her instincts are always on watch for similar signs in others. And like you said so correctly, she was the expert cheli/ shishya to the ultimate planning guru---Sanskaar himself! 😉 😊

now the best moment, swasan reunion.. sanskar becoming numb with only one glance at swara...and sanskar's mind losing its first battle against his heart...❤️ perfect just perfect.

Thanks so much Helee yaar. 😳 Felt so very humbled and blessed by your warm words. SwaSan are the ultimate dream couple for me, and to hear you say that I described their emotions at their reunion so well----that is the ultimate compliment. 🤗🤗🤗

I m just loving this story so much...can't wait for the next chapter.😳 and thanks for the pm.😊

lots of love,
Helee.

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Originally posted by: coolgal270

This is absolutely marvelous... I am sooo in love with this story of yours...

Res for detailed comment!!

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Superb story...

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome updates

I like this version more.

looking forward to read more

Originally posted by: sneharay

Thanks for informatioms..Really like this version of story..
Thank you for writing this.. 😊

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update

So eagerly awaiting for the next update

Waiting to see what will be Sanskar 's plan of action

Ragini will surely play a major role

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon