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Posted: 9 years ago


Hi Lanny 🤗🤗

Replied on that just a little while back.
🤗

Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res viji
I am sorry viji for not doing unres in your stories but little busy in studies so sorry will unres after sometimes



No problem at all Sujay. 🤗🤗 Hope your studies go well. Please don't say Sorry yaar--Un Res when time permits. Am very happy to hear that you loved this FS.

Cheers

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


oh viji 🤗..this was awesome..

Thanks so much, Lucky sweetheart 🤗
🤗

sanskaar sanskaar and sanskaar ..It just went on..and I can read volumes on this guy ..oh god ..the way you have etched his features ..I feel like falling for him all over again ❤️ it was love darlin😳 and how you described his memories staring as kid playing hide and seek and then moving on to each stage ..👏👏👏

Sanskaar is always awesome, na? 😳 😉 So very happy that you loved the description of his features, his character, and the narration of his memories. 😳

and back to his planning and plotting..and I titally love how you described his unsuccessful attempts of sanksaar to remember his memories with kavita how they no longer hold on to him and his mind and heart wound around HER ..😳

Kavita is now definitely only a memory of a past love for Sanskaar...>Even though his amnesiac mind is trying to reach into memories of her, tap into that sense of bitterness and vindictiveness he used to feel at her loss, he is not able to fully subsume himself into those negative emotions. And definitely, each time he tries to recall Kavita, his mind and heart pulls up memories of this woman, whom he doesn't consciously recall or find familiar. But that one memory he has of her, is so compelling, so spellbinding for him. 😊

And hero makes an entry back ..and that hug ...I can imagine swara running down and hugging him full force which I wished sanskaar would do when swara made an entry post ml ..but loving this version ..the hug was again love and sanskaar couldn't help but get flooded in those feelings engulfing him ...😳

Yes, Swara certainly couldn't wait to hug Sanskaar tight...she had undergone the fires of separation and yearning without her soulmate. And Sanskaar, despite himself, could not help but be affected by her obvious adoration for him.

and ragini ..knows her friend very well . she sensed which others couldnt ..

😊 Ragini is a smart cookie after all...and she has honed her wiles and guile under the tutelage of Sanskaar himself, in the past. 😆 She would recognize traits of resurfacing darkness/ grey shades in her erstwhile friend/ current Jeeju/Jeth Ji, even if others could not. 😊

lovely update viji ..looking for next one😊

love
lucky



My Dear Lucky 🤗

Replied above in blue text. I always love to have your insightful and analytical take yaar, it makes me feel so very touched.
🤗

Love ya Loads,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

I'm reduced to a warm mush by reading your description of Sanskar. 😆
So aptly put

And they met too, I really wasn't expecting that.
I love how every fiber in his body remembers her even if his conscious doesn't.
Beautiful chapter

Nandini🤗

(Sorry about the rather evident shortened nature of my comments as I really don't have much them on my hands now. But I love every bit of the story and ill definitely shower my appreciation soon. ❤️ )



Thanks so much Nandini 🤗🤗---and please don't say Sorry about length of comments yaar. It matters to me that you read it and loved it so much. Word count isn't the issue. 😊

So very happy to hear that you loved the portrayal of Sanskaar's emotions, his feelings upon his reunion with Swara, though he doesn't consciously recall her. And am very glad you enjoyed the description of Sanskaar, too. 😳 Oh, you became a warm, mushy puddle huh? 😉 Well, he certainly is amazingly special, no? 😳

Lots of Love,

----Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Hai viji🤗

First of all sorry for my late reply.
The second part heart touching one.A person who lost his memories and he is trying to recollect it...
Sanskar lost all the beautiful memories in his life.And he was slowly trying to recollect them.His childhood the most happiest part in a person's life and teenage...the time he spent with his family...especially his parents and lucky...
And the first love in his life...
This time also a unknown face was flashing in his mind none other was that his soulmate.
His return journey to home...
All people in mm was at the zenith of happiness.They get their son back.sanskar is back..
And the swasan sequence..she was not in his memory.but she was full in soul.
It was a awesome update..
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina



My Dear Shamina, 🤗🤗

Thanks so much for your very analytical comments. I am really touched that you have taken time to give your feedback for nearly all of my recent OS's as well as all the chapters here in this FS. Means a lot.

Very happy to know that you liked the portrayal of Sanskaar and Swara's feelings, as well as those of the others in the Maheshwari and Gadodia families.

Yes, like you correctly mentioned, Sanskaar does not consciously recognize Swara yet, but she has seeped deep into his very soul. He does feel that connect subliminally.

Loads of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Viji

Great work viji, intricately woven story. What a thread you worked out
I posted somewhere that the main diffrenec in swara and sanskars love is that if sanskar was to have a memory loss he would forget everyone else but would remember only swara. Though your story does not potray this idea I somehow feel that this will be certainly establishef by you through your wonderful writing
Veena
The hardwork to create a story inside a story is highly commendable and well
Paid off



My Dear Veena 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so very much yaar. I was really happy and touched, to have your feedback on this chapter as well as the subsequent one on this FS. Very glad that you loved it so much.

Though Sanskaar does not consciously remember Swara, his subconscious, his heart and soul do recall her. She is such an essential part of him after all.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Ahaan!so sanskar go bk 2 d time whn he cm 2tk revenge.
Lv ths twist.&he th8 swara shot him as he break swara laksh marriage!
Intrstng.
M missing ths mastermind sanskar.in serial i wnt him 2 jahil his aukat.bt sigh!
Thnks 4 pm.i lv it.



Hey Sonu 🤗🤗

Thanks yaar. Very glad you loved the portrayal of a determined, mastermind Sanskaar. He is such a resolute, formidable character.

Happy to know you loved the twist. 😉 Yes, Sanskaar does not have any clear memories of Swara---so he is confused about why she could have shot at him. He will realize the full truth, in due course of time. 😉

Lots of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks so much 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
omg he is now old sanskaar bt still he lpves her
yeee...i am happy
hope ragini will help them



Hey Prachi 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so much yaar. Am really happy that you loved this OS. Yes, Sanskaar has sort of gone back to being the grey/ vindictive Sanskaar he used to be, owing his retrograde amnesia. Not fully, but more or less like that. 😊

But, as you correctly noted, he is drawn to Swara. He cannot understand the strength of that emotion, that connection---but he feels that undeniable, inexorable pull, nevertheless.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Heartbeats rising!! Such a wonderful mix of emotions🤗, the soul-deep and the mind-born, the forgotten n the remembered.. Lovely!! Ragini's resolve, Sanskar's confusion, Swara's joy... M so very excited for the next part!😃! Update soon😃



Hey Akku 🤗🤗🤗

Yaar I was so happy when I read this comment, I was literally grinning to myself. I was just so thrilled that you were so excited about this Fic. 😳 😆

I am so glad that you enjoyed the portrayal of the mix of emotions going through various characters---Sanskaar, Swara and Ragini, in particular.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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