Sahil Ki Khaatirdaari in Maheshwari House: A Fun/Crazy OS ;-) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sanavi

What was that...
Seriously, I'm unable to express.
Crazy it was nd this RagYa team rocked.
Lakshya pouring water nd Ragini preparing the weirdest tea ever. Bechara Sahil.

Loved the khatirdari...



Hey Sanavi ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

So happy that you loved the crazy humor in this one. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Yes, RagLak certainly rocked, they had planned this with Sanskaar/ Kissan and it was executed to perfection. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ

The "facewash" with ice cold water and the namak and neempatti wali chai certainly made Sahil feel very welcome! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Sakura24

This is super cool! Seems like Sahil had time of his life at MM ]
The face wash...at least Lakshya is using his skills for a good job. And Ragini looking beautiful when she is about to teach someone a lesson!
What took the cake for me was Kuch kuch hota hai puchka tum nahi samjonge!!! I was in pieces laughing!
I'm keeping it short today dearest, I've caught a flu and it's really hard to type. Sorry about that.
Loads of love,
Sakura



Hey Saku my dear ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Yeah, Sahil certainly did have the time of his life, no? ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ

Lakshya did put his face wash plan to extremely good use!! And Ragini does look extremely ravishing when she is upto some wily plan, don't you agree? ๐Ÿ˜†

Mrs Sengupta was totally bowled over by Kissan's Dhina Dhin Dha charm!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ After all, style and swag like his is hard to come by. (Even with the electric blue night suits with patterns of red kangaroos!! ๐Ÿ˜†)

Hope you are much better, and on the mend from the flu

Love

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: svg98

Hey..just read your beautiful reply to my comment on one of your os..My name is Piya..thank u so much for sending me the pm..

Hey Piya...Nice to know your name, and am glad you loved my reply to your comment. I just loved your comment too, it made my day. ๐Ÿค—

Awesome os..
The beginning was so hilarious..Sahil imagining himself in those clothes.. I was literally going to fall on the floor by laughing so hard..my family must have though I have gone mad..but the dream getting broken by Lakshya by throwing ice cold water..gosh must have truly given Sahil the much needed medicine..

Sahil in slim fit shirts and bell bottom trousers, like Dharam PaJi, would be hilarious no? ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† And yeah, Lakshya certainly gave Sahil a nice wake up call with that ice cold "facewash"!! ๐Ÿคฃ

The tea part was awesome..Ragini sobbing and complaining to Swara and Swara looked like she going to pull out Sahil's hair just to make her sister smile..would have loved the scene though..Sahil's mother is an altogether another item of circus..kuch kuch hota hain dialogue my cheeks were hurting so much..she didn't looked like who just had been chai..go lady find someone of your age..

Ragini decided to make some special chai for Sahil...with namak and neempatti...๐Ÿ˜† And of course Swara would yell at Sahil if he yelled at her beloved sister. ๐Ÿคฃ Mrs Sengupta---Oh yes, along with her son, she is a circus item piece! She is completely lattoo over Kissan, of course. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Pari won't even mind Sahil's mother marrying Sanskar to just get Swara out of the house..such an idiot.. Why can't Adarsh be the lion as always..turn into a non existent goat in the show..Annapurna slip of tongue of calling Adarsh sher was so very funny..she wouldnt have mind calling him with the same nick name always..

So glad you liked Adarsh turning from a meek lamb into a roaring lion! ๐Ÿ˜† Annapurna was just so proud of him. And very glad I could make you laugh with that "slip of the tongue" of hers. ๐Ÿ˜† I agree: Annapurna would definitely want to call her son "Sher". ๐Ÿ˜†

At last the mother son duo left and Sanskar made an entry..though his clothes even make me sometimes say what feel weird..but still he is surely going to make Swara dance on his tunes soon..

Oh yes, Kissan is certainly going to guide Swara in the right direction and make her remember Sanskaar...and he certainly has an outrageous dress sense. ๐Ÿ˜† But its all part of his "Dhina Dhin Dha" swag. ๐Ÿ˜‰

The last scene was heart touching Swara stopping him to have that neem wali chain and then reading the same expression in his eyes..these small little gestures will surely make Swara come back to her Sanskar..and his dialogue said with so much intensity passion pain and love..calling her back to him..how does he do it..how can he love her so much and that too with all his being..its as if he will just call her and she will turn around say I love u Sanskar and embrace him yo never let go..will be waiting for that to happen soon..

Sanskaar is truly such a gem of a person. He loves Swara with such a deep, unconditional, selfless and potent adoration. He was silently calling her to come back to him, with so much poignant intensity and love...No wonder she did feel that connect, somwehere. The memories have slowly started flowing back. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Lakshya and Ragini support is very much needed and his grip on Sanskar shoulder indicated that they will always stand by him..
The last lines were amazing..

Thanks so much dear...So glad you loved the ending, and enjoyed both the humor and the emotional content in the OS.

Overall a hilarious as well as heart touching read..



My Dear Piya

Thanks so much once again for your lovely comments, on this OS as well others I've written. Your feedback really means a lot to me. ๐Ÿค—

I've replied in the blue text above.

Loads and Loads of Love,

----Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: simmi.friends03

Wowww..for a moment I feel m reading the upcoming scenes of d show..CV need to understand that type of scene we want.. Not d way they r showing..swara accssing sanky...and now in upcoming scenes she will humilite kissan too...

And sahil is sitting beside swara in Hawan..just wanna kill CV..for this...
Really now just want stong shomi,sujju,uttara who told her all d truth abt rajat...and firing..and bring d policewala too told herd whole truth..than angrily told her that it was sanky,s home..and now he will not stay outside just to please stubborn swara now...its her to decide whether she wanna trust them or not...



Hey Simmi ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Thanks a lot for your comment, I guess this is the first time we are interacting on one of my threads? Nice to "meet" you, if you are interested and time permits, you could go through my completed SwaSan fics on my index. Link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts.

Glad I could cheer you up and make you laugh with this OS. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Cheers

---Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Viji!!๐Ÿ˜Š
Superb OS!!๐Ÿ‘ MM members did a good job at doing khaatirdaari of Sahil and his mom.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ Sahil's dream! LOL!! He imagines himself as Dharmendra?!๐Ÿ˜ฒ And what a description of his body - tree trunk frame!!๐Ÿคฃ Haahaa! What a way of Laksh to wake our "wannable rockstar", oops, already a rockstar, up from his dream!!๐Ÿ˜†๐ŸคฃAnd Ragini gave "namak and neem powder" instead of tea to Sahil and his mom!! Oh My God!!๐Ÿคฃ Loved they way Swara rebuked Sahil for shouting at Ragini.๐Ÿ˜ˆ Poor fella!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ˆ Pari, as usual, the poisonous snake!๐Ÿ˜ก Ragini's reason given to her Aadarsh jeth ji!! Kahi Sahil Pari bhabhi ke saath flirt karna na shuru kar de!! LOL!!๐Ÿ˜† Adarsh reaction.๐Ÿ˜‰ AP's li'l Lamb became her Lion.๐Ÿ˜† And Pari ka plan choupat!!๐Ÿ˜ˆ And loved RP's coldness towards Sahil and his mom!!๐Ÿ˜‰ And waah!! What an entry by our Sanskar/Kissan.๐Ÿ˜‰ Electric blue pajama pant and night shirt with patterns of red kangaroo on it!!๐Ÿคฃ OMG!! I'm just thinking that how our Sanky will look in this attire along with his long hair with blue highlights and his glares.๐Ÿ˜‰ And Sanky/Kissan ke swagger dekhkar toh Sahil ke mummy ko bhi "kuch kuch ho gaya"!!๐Ÿ˜† Awww!! Loved Sanskar/Kissan and Swara's moment at the ending.๐Ÿ˜ณ Swara is caring towards Kissan, unknown to her that Kissan is her Sanskar.๐Ÿ˜ณ Though she can't remember him, but hearing his praise for her adrak and eliachi tea, she felt something familiar in her heart.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved this part.๐Ÿ˜ƒ And Sanskar's last dialogue was emotional and painful.๐Ÿ˜ญ Loved Laksh support for his brother.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Really loved this OS so much dear. And thanks for the pm.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
With love and lots of hugs!!๐Ÿค—
Aheli.



Hey Aheli sweetheart ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

So happy that I could make you laugh heartily with this OS. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ

Yeah, Sahil was certainly dreaming of himself as Dharam Paji, with those slim fit shirts and bell bottom trousers. ๐Ÿ˜† But Lakshya had some excellent khatirdari for him, with a "facewash" with ice cold water. ๐Ÿคฃ And then Ragini gave him another zor ka jhatka, with the namak and neem patti wali chai. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† And Swara of course, yells at Sahil for daring to yell at her pyari behna. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I SO wanted Adarsh to have some dialogues, poor lamb. ๐Ÿ˜† So he goes from a lamb to a roaring lion. ๐Ÿ˜‰ And Annapurna becomes so very proud of him! ๐Ÿ˜†

Kissan has got such swag, after all he is Sunny boy in disguise. ๐Ÿ˜† Mrs Sengupta just could not help going lattoo on him completely!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Kissan has quite an outrageous dress sense---I also wonder how he would look in that electric blue nightshirt and pajama pants with a pattern of red kangaroos. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† But after all---he is able to carry off anything! ๐Ÿ˜‰

So happy you loved the emotional touch at the end, and Swara feeling some memories flowing back, Kissan's praise about her tea making her, unknown to herself, recall Sanskaar. You are perfectly right, Swara feels very warm and concerned towards Kissan, not in a romantic sense, but that familiarity and liking is owing to the deep soul connect she has with Sanskaar.

Thanks a lot for your comment, sweetie

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

๐Ÿ˜† awesome Viji

I don't
Know to write long comments but all I can say I this Was brilliant... I really loved it ...

N it was fun to read...

โค๏ธ


Harshita



Thanks so very much, Harshita dear. ๐Ÿค—

Please don't worry about length of comments--it just matters to me that you read it and that you loved it so much.

I am glad I could make you laugh with this one. ๐Ÿ˜†

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

The title of this os was interesting.

After reading the serious stories..this os made my day.
Sahil ki khadir dari ka shuruvat Laksh ne kiya.
Ragini was also done her job very well.
And adarsh dialogues and annapoorna's thoughts about her son.lamb changes to lion.
Kissan's entry and sahil's mother is loss in his hotness.
It was a nice concept...
Really loved it
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina



Hey Shamina dear ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

So happy I could make your day, and make you laugh with this slapstick/ comedy OS. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

RagLak certainly made some very good efforts for Sahil's khatirdari ๐Ÿคฃ, they had framed the plan in consultation with the master strategist, Sanskaar Maheshwari himself. ๐Ÿ˜‰ And they executed it brilliantly. ๐Ÿ˜†

Annapurna was so proud that her lamb of an elder son had finally turned into a roaring lion. ๐Ÿ˜† And Mrs Sengupta is completely lattoo over Kisan's swag. Who wouldn't be. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: raaz19

Viji this is awesome...words cannot describe how.much I enjoyed this. ..

Loved lakhs and ragani and there way of dealing with sahil too good...

Best part was the end when swara went to make tea for kissan that moment was priceless..


New writing style was amazing and creative...thanks for the pm...

Raz



Hey Raz sweetheart ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Thanks so very much yaar, so happy to hear that you liked this comedy/ slapstick genre OS. And very happy I could make you laugh heartily, with this one. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

RagLak's khatirdari for Sahil was really something---excellent plan, they had made it in consultation with the expert planner, Sanskaar Maheshwari, and executed it to perfection. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Swara feels a sense of protectiveness and familiarity with Sahil...she certainly has let her guard down around him. After all, the ever present soul connect with her Sanskaar, is there to guide her, even when she herself is not consciously aware of it. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Viji.

That was hilarious dear. I thoroughly enjoyed how you presented each one of them.
Raginis nautanki and theatrical sobs, swaras 'meri pyaari behana' jap, Pari's poisonous mind,adarsh's mild and sweet cry as an infant, mrs senguptas observation of kissans swag,tree trunks of sahil, what a perfect observation and neat compilation of events into one OS.
Keep entertaining us dear
Love, veena



Hey Veena ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Thanks dear, so happy to hear that you found this OS to be so very hilarious. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Your warm words had me going all ๐Ÿ˜ณ I do hope to write more on SwaSan, thanks.

Lots of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks so very much Prachi ๐Ÿค—

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