Sahil Ki Khaatirdaari in Maheshwari House: A Fun/Crazy OS ;-)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -Jamina
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Thanks Jami 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
Oh my god ! This really cracked me up! 🤣

I just love Sahils plight. I've got nothing against Anuj but sahil I absolutely abhor.

The cold water good morning and the neem power wali chai 😆 band bajadi uski to.
Serves him right for separating SwaSan!!😡

I loved this os. Sahil ka monologues was so awesome! And his mom going all googly eye at kissan😆

Bada aaya 'rock star' ! He has to go long way before he even has a fifth of our sanku boys swag.

And swara volunteered to make him tea!! I'm all aaaw she remembers him a teeny tiny bit. And hopefully she'll remember everything soon.
*sigh*
my poor sanky baby. At least he's getting special tea for all the pain he's going through. ( I expect that wig to itch 😆)

This is so good. You needn't have worried at all. Yes its different but it's awesome!
Kudos dear. :)

And thank you so much for the pm.
Nandini🤗

Hey Nandini 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks a ton. 😆 😆 I SO badly wanted to write something in the comedy/ slapstick genre, both to cheer myself up, as well as to get some vicarious pleasure of giving some apt khaatirdaari to Sahil "Rockstar" Sengupta. 🤣

True that---I have nothing against Anuj as a model. In fact, when he was part of the Gillette/ Raymond/Nivaea campaigns, I actually used to think he had a screen presence---as a model.

But as an actor, he isn't that good, to be frank...and plus he is coming between SwaSan here, becoming obsessed with Swara and playing dirty tricks on Sanskaar. 🤢😡 So I absolutely want this character to be given the best (worst 😛) kind of khaatirdaari in Maheshwari House!

I thoroughly enjoyed writing how Lakshya wakes him up with an almighty splash of cold water, and how Ragini serves him the namak and neem patti wali chai. 😆 😉 And of course, Sahil almost faints when he realizes his Mom is making eyes at the Bihari chora with the inimitable swag---Kissan the dude!! 😆 😳

Torture for Sahil! Bring it on, I say!! 😆 🤣

Thanks for your lovely words dear. Glad you loved reading it as much I enjoyed writing it. 😊

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: BookWormV
🤣 I don't know whether to be horrified or laugh hysterically. You have got some imagination Viji.
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Hey V!! 🤣

Hope you chose the alternative of hysterical laughter, rather than being horrified at Sahil's plight. 😆 🤣

Thanks---this one certainly was crazily slapstick in the imagination department, no? 😆 But kya kare, Sahil's antics in the serial motivated me! 🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: reeyacute
Omg! Ragini ke cravings ajeeb hai...neem powder wali chai
Swara making chai for kissan n not for sahil wow!

Loved it

Hey Reeya 🤗

Thanks, glad you loved it. 😆

Yup, Ragini decided to do a lot of special khaatirdaari for Sahil, by giving him her "favorite" namak & neem patti wali chai. 😆

Cheers

--Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Buhahahahahaaa *Devilish Grin*
Ohh how much I loved Laksh Ji throwing ice cold water & Ragini Ji serving Namak+Neem chai to puchka!

Awww Kissan & his swag *Dreamy*

Hey Nupur sweetie 🤗

🤣😆 I was also going ROFL when I wrote those bits about Lakshya waking up Sahil with a mugful of cold water; and Ragini giving him her "special" chai. 😛

Kissan's swag and style certainly is dreamy. Mrs Sengupta became completely lattoo. 😳 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: MusicAddict
I just loved this one Viji!! Fabulous!!
Amazing one sissy!!
Please write more and more!!
Love you back in action

Thanks Sakshi 🤗 😆

I understand you loved Puchka's khaatirdaari. 🤣 This is highly gratifying to hear, I SO enjoyed writing the ways and means Kissan/ Lakshya/ Ragini would devise to make him "feel at home". 😈 😈

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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Dear Viji,

That was outrageously funny and more than enough made up for the late lunch (I staunchly believe, "hard work does not kill people, hunger does" 😉) Unfortunately, I did choke quite a bit on my laughter as I was doing

Now to the post - What did I love - everything and surprisingly - Lakshya (God I seem to be growing fond of him - so squarely in Sanskaar's corner -"Bhai looks hot when his face was wet" woh toh hai) and Ragini (full support for her sister and her once good friend Sanskaar) Pregnancy cravings indeed - did not bode well for Sahil.
Finally Adarsh transforms into a lion (I hope he stays one!)

One more thing - Sahil's mom need not join him up for zumba classes - Dancing for Zombies would be a better option, he has to learn to walk in the first place.

And the ending - as achingly beautiful - it is true - Please Swara come back - we all miss you and Sanskaar. Please do come back soon.

Great post - wonder why you were nervous

love
Nyna

PS: I know that I have to unres for your OS - but please bear with me, office work is hectic and I have to steal time from lunch, in which case I would not be doing any justice to your wonderful writings.

Nynu my darling!! 🤗

Hard work does not kill people, hunger does---Oh yes, yes! 😉 I agree, but there is also another saying apparently, which goes "Hard work never killed anybody, but why take the risk?" 😉 Sadly, the latter saying isn't accepted in most offices. 😆

I am (sadistically) glad that this made you laugh so much, that you coughed and spluttered. 😈 😈

🤣 Oh yes, Sunny boy certainly looked dashing during those face wash sessions Lucky inflicted on him. 😳 Sahil should have seen through that excuse by Lakshya then and there---imagine someone feeling the same for Mr Wood as for Sunny boy! 😕 😲 Sacrilege!! But then, it is Mr Wood, wannabe rockstar we are talking about! He swallowed Lucky's explanation, hook, line and sinker. 😆

Ragini's "pregnancy cravings"---very dramatic ones, no? 🤣 I think Sahil and Mrs Sengupta would now be solely coffee drinkers. Can't take the risk with being served tea with namak and neem patti!! 😆

Adarsh transforms from lamb to lion (reminds me of that cartoon--Lambert the Sheepish Lion 😆 😉), but anyway he prevents the Pari--Sahil axis from forming. 😉

Sahil's mom is bowled over by Kissan---who isn't? Dhina Dhin Dha! 😳 Good point there, Nynu. Perhaps the zumba & hip hop classes would be a waste of money. Come to think of it, some lip sync classes might also be in order, no? Considering how odd his lip movements are, when he howls those numbers. (I am unable to listen to those songs with a straight face now. Sahil!! 😡 😡🤢)

I felt for Sanskaar/ Kissan a lot in the end. The man is just so deeply in love with Swara. Doing his utmost to gently coax her towards recollecting their pure love for each other.

So very glad you liked this, Nynu. 🤗 Well, while I had written a few light hearted/ fun OS's before (Their Moments Together; Vignettes from the Past); this one was completely in the slapstick comedy genre. Was a tad nervous if it would come out the way I wanted it to---and I feel very touched and blessed from all the warm feedback, that it seems to have entertained. 😊

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: elsanna
Omgg this was really hilarious...
Has has kar pet dard ho gaya...

Hey Elsanna 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton, glad I could make you laugh so heartily! 😆

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#59

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Omg!m rofling.
Thnks 4 mking me laugh.
Oh god!poor sahil.kya khatirdari ki ha..
I so wnt in serial laksh & sujju do lots of khatirdari.
&wht wz tht-kkhh puchka tum nehi samjhoge-tht crakd me up.haha!
Last bit swasan touch love it.
Awsm viji

Thanks Sonu, glad to know I could make you laugh so much. 😆 I was going all 🤣 when I wrote this, so am really happy to know you loved it, too.

I would love to see Sujju, Lakshya and Ragini join Kissan in doing a lot of khaatirdaari for Puchka Sahil. 😉

And Sahil would definitely get high BP, seeing his mom go lattoo over Kissan! 🤣

So happy that you loved the connect between SwaSan at the end.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Kiara.25
Viji🤗
And you scored again. Such a hilarious OS. The way Mr. Sengupta is enacting now a days need treatment like this only.
Mrs. Sengupta and her monologue 🤣. Ragini and laksh👏.
Finally adarsh got a dialogue😆😆. And then swasan❤️.

Hey Kiara 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks yaar. So glad that you found this OS so very hilarious.

Mrs Sengupta is going completely lattoo over Kissan. After all, very few people have his swag. 😳

Ragini and Lakshya have joined Kissan's plan to give the best kind of khaatirdaari to Sahil "Rockstar" / Puchka Sengupta. 😉 😆

Glad you liked Adarsh's dialogue...😆 🤣

and the SwaSan soul connect, too. 😳

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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