Sahil Ki Khaatirdaari in Maheshwari House: A Fun/Crazy OS ;-) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BookWormV

HeyaπŸ€—
Been on a 20 day vacation, so no laptop to write my comments. Been surfing IF via my phone and so haven't been able to reply to a lot of your stories and others apart from a 'Res'. Hope to catch up to all soon. 😊 No issues with the reply, just wanted to convey how absolutely horrifyingly awesome your craziness is. πŸ˜›
Hope all is good at your end. Real life always gets in the way, so 'aaraam se' reply on IF. 😊

Love,
V


V!! πŸ€—

20 day vacation, huh? 😊 Sounds fabulous.πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—Hope you had a blast.

If you want to read more fun/borderline crazy OS's πŸ˜†πŸ€£ , I've written a SanLak OS "Float like a Butterfly, Sting like a Bee". πŸ˜‰ Can be assumed as a sequel to this one, if you like. 😊

Do read when time permits, and let me know what you thought of that one. It is a tad less crazy than this one is. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† But I had a thorough blast writing both of them. Oh, the sheer catharsis. πŸ˜‰

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res

Unres and sorry again for this late unres

Hey Sujay πŸ€—

Once again, no sorry needed at all, dude. I understand the pressure of work/ studies and personal commitments. Just glad that you read and commented when time permitted.
😊

Mind blowing os πŸ‘
Truly i missed this os on show but cvs were busy in showing thier bakwaas drama 😑

Really happy that you found this OS to be mind blowing. πŸ˜³πŸ€—

But seriously i was laughing alot when i was reading this os 🀣 raglak totally rocks in this story poor sahil 🀣
And then sahil's mother drooling on sanskar 🀣 oh god kuch kuch hota hai🀣

Yeah, RagLak totally took Sahil's case, no? They gave him such excellent Khaatirdaari. πŸ˜†πŸ€£ And Sahil's Mom was obviously destined to become flat for Sunny boy's Kissan avatar. Who can resist his swag and charm after all. πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

Swara getting flashes which left me hoping to see a similar instance on the show as well... but let it be superb os you make my mood super happy

I would have so loved to see this on the show, Swara slowly getting flashes of memory of the precious, beautiful moments with her soulmate. 😳

Viji do write more this type of os please

I'd written another comic/ light hearted SanLak OS after this one, titled "Float Like a Butetrfly, Sting Like a Bee". You've probably read that one too, I guess. 😊

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My Dear Sujay πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BookWormV

🀣 I don't know whether to be horrified or laugh hysterically. You have got some imagination Viji.

Bwahahahaha Vrinda sweetheart! πŸ˜† 🀣 So glad you loved this horrifying humor! I had a ball, simply a ball, writing it. πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

Res 🀣

Unres:

Hey girl!

Apologies for late review/comment.

No Sorry allowed! Remember Sunny Boy's rules of friendship! πŸ˜‰

First off, ---->🀣
I read the whole thing again just now and I want to ask - do you usually write such crazy stuff to take out your frustration on various nonsensical villains? If so kindly post the ones you might have written on Kavita and Kavya too. πŸ˜›

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🀣 No yaar, haven't written anything in this genre for Kavita or Kavya. I never acknowledged the resurrected/ zombie Kavita at all, na. As far as I was concerned, she had indeed died tragically 5 years plus before, and she remained merely as a fond memory of a past love, in a small corner of Sunny's mind. That's it. Kavya toh I just saw through for most of the time. πŸ˜† She was just so weird!

But I've written a SanLak versus Sahil OS "Float Like a Butetrfly, Sting Like a Bee", which is also in the comedy/ slightly crazy genre. πŸ˜†
🀣. Thought not as crazy as this one! πŸ˜‰ Read it when time permits, and let me know what you felt!

My God, it was truly horrifyingly hilarious for me.! LOL!! Lakshya helping out Sahil to look good for his 'phans'? I am in splits! Ragini always glows when she is scheming or making some plans?? So true! πŸ˜† The neem and namak powder? Ragini bursting into uncontrollable sobs?? Pregnancy cravings?? 🀣 Oh man! Maar daala yaar Viji! From where do you come up with such ideas? πŸ˜†

πŸ˜† V, I woke up really, really early one morning, with the idea for this crazily slapstick OS running through my brain. πŸ˜† Some benefits of insomnia! πŸ˜‰ I so loved writing that spoof scene of Lucky drenching Sahil's face with water...to impress his phans! πŸ˜† After all, Sunny looked quite---ahem ahem---hot! with his face all wet, no? πŸ˜† But what to do with Sahil...this would not help in the least! But can't fault Lucky for trying (extending the supposed khaatirdaari!) πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Ragini does look completely enchanting and bewitching when she is plotting something, no? πŸ˜†
🀣 Poor Sahil and his Mom didn't know that, of course! And AP and Sujju thought it was the pregnancy glow! πŸ˜†

That was quite some tea Ragini served...with namak and neem powder! Odd cravings, this pregnant lady had! And of course, the minute she broke into loud sobs, Swara gave Sahil a sound lecture! Woh Ragini ke saath aisa kaise kar saktha tha? πŸ˜† He he...these are the ideas of an insomniac mind! (With Bheja deep fried to the limit with Mr Deadwood!)
🀣

Ragini bhadkaing Adarsh Bhaiya with regards to Pari-Sahil flirtation. hahahahah.. Pari is phan of Sahil? 🀣 Annapoorna looking with pride over Adarsh yelling at Pari? ROFL... Can't stop laughing! 🀣 🀣
This was epic...

Thanks, V!! πŸ˜† Oh no, Pari is not a phan of Sahil (at least, I hope not! πŸ˜†), But Ragini made Adarsh Bhaiyya suspect that she could be one! πŸ˜† He was so insecure, what would happen if this rockstar started flirting with his wifey?
🀣

Oh, AP was so thrilled by her little ram lamb turning into a roaring Lion. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Mrs. Sengupta's "Kuch Kuch hota hai'? LMAO!!!! Enrolling her puchka in zumba classes? Viji, kahan se socha yeh sab? 🀣

Mrs Sengupta ka dil went dhak dhak with a fury, at Kissan's swag and style. πŸ˜‰ 😳 And she was so disdainful that her puchka didn't come one tenth near that style...and so, to limber up those tree trunk limbs of his, she is going to enroll him in some hip hop & zumba lessons! My, My...just imagine Sahil participating in those! πŸ˜† Nahiii!!!
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End note with ofcourse the awesome SwaSan scene. They say na - 'Dil khush kar ditta puttar!' πŸ˜†

I couldn't resist that emotional touch at the end. SwaSan soul connect, and the warm, balmy air of hope...the best combination!

Fab work!!! Keep going crazy and writing more crazier work. πŸ˜†

-V😊



My Dearest Vrinda πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Love you Loads!!

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yr... Amazing...luvd ragini and laksh...shi BT h...ragu k face pr glow aa jata h...jb vo kch ESA khurafati idea lgati h... Aaj inne dino bd lux g n apne facewash ka talent use kia...aww mahh sanku is best...puchka ki ma shadi shuda pe dore daal ri h...ganga maiya ki kasam 2no ma beta ek jesa h...bichara swara acha Lhasa ranbeer kapoor mil rha tha pr iski kismt m toh shakti kapoor hi likha tha(pr pencil s...permanent marlerwa s sanskar likha h...bhains ki pooch)
Anyways keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuroka

Yr... Amazing...luvd ragini and laksh...shi BT h...ragu k face pr glow aa jata h...jb vo kch ESA khurafati idea lgati h... Aaj inne dino bd lux g n apne facewash ka talent use kia...aww mahh sanku is best...puchka ki ma shadi shuda pe dore daal ri h...ganga maiya ki kasam 2no ma beta ek jesa h...bichara swara acha Lhasa ranbeer kapoor mil rha tha pr iski kismt m toh shakti kapoor hi likha tha(pr pencil s...permanent marlerwa s sanskar likha h...bhains ki pooch)

Anyways keep writing


Hey there πŸ€—

First of all, welcome to the forum, it's really nice to have your first post on my thread. 😊

So happy to know that you loved Lakshya and Ragini's khaatirdaari of Sahil. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ That dude deserved nothing less than this treatment!! πŸ˜†πŸ€£

And Sahil's mom is completely bowled over by Kissan's swag and style. Who can resist Sanskaar after all...even in Kissan avatar. πŸ˜‰

Very nice to hear from you, let me know your name if that's OK, so I'll know how to address you. And I've written many other fics on SwaSan, you can find my previous completed work on my index. Link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts. Do read when time permits, and let me know what you thought. Would be a pleasure to have your feedback.

Cheers

Viji

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