SwaSan OS: 'The Sweet Scent of Petrichor'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Kaveetha
Awesome os dear.. 👏
Loved it.

Thanks so much, Kaveetha. 🤗 🤗

Happy to hear that you loved this.

I've written another one today on SanLak. Titled "Brothers in Arms". Do read if interested and when time permits. My earlier SwaSan fics are all on my index, link to which is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts.

Cheers

Viji

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Geethu_sweetie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Hi dear,🤗

This is my first comment on your works..I totally loved the OS..Very beautifully written about the inner turmoil of Sanskar..👍🏼Stay blessed and thanks for the PM ..😊

Thanks,

Geetha.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Hi Friends 🤗 🤗

Thanks for all the lovely messages. I'd started with my individual replies yesterday, and hope to complete today.

Feel very touched by your warm words of appreciation.

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: manasie23
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Hey Mannu darling 🤗🤗

Missed you so much yaar. So nice to see you here.

Do let me know what you felt, once you finish reading.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Hi Guys, 🤗🤗🤗

I know I'm lagging behind on some of my individual reverts to your lovely comments...Please do bear with me, I feel very bad about this.

I have some errands to run, and some pending Un Res's on my buddies' threads, which I feel extremely guilty about! Hope you understand.

I will definitely reply to each comment individually, by Saturday. Thanks Guys...you have no idea how much your comments mean to me. 🤗🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..
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Viji... 🤗 Its good to see you back here... 😳😳
A beautiful title and as beautifully written OS. Like always your description are so vivid ; it was like watching it happening in front of my eyes. 😳❤️ It is a bitter sweet feeling to read about Sanskaar standing forlornly and remembering that moment with Swara . There I can feel the sadness and love that Sanskaar felt. But then felt proud to see that he is not ready to give up. 😳😳 I really like the way Kissan is trying here to make Swara remember all those memories. Just like whenever he thought that she is going to make breakthrough I got excited and then something or SOMEONE happened 😡😆 The last part is my favorite ofc 😆😳, First of all, finally he get to know about Sahil's intention and nothing can stop Sanskaar to rip that man into pieces.. and in my world he will do it in an agonizing way😆😈 But what is made me most happy was that small moment that SwaSan shared without any word... It was like their heart talked through their eyes and smiles.
Mwwaaahhh for writing this sweet piece of story Viji...
will be looking forward for more 😈
Love
Nitzy 😳

Hey Nitzy sweetheart 🤗 🤗 🤗

I was so very touched by your comment, my dear. I'm so glad that you found Sanskaar's portrayal to be such that you could feel the intensity and poignancy of his emotions. That's a lovely compliment. 😳 😳

Sanskaar was certainly feeling very wistful and forlorn remembering their past moments, but he would never give up on Swara. His love is just so intense, potent and deep, that he would literally lay down his life in his effort to get the very meaning of his existence, back with him.

Yes, Swara was certainly very close to regaining some of those beautiful memories, but she was interrupted. But some of those images definitely remained in her subconscious, for in the end, she was prepared to examine the very real probability that she had misjudged Sanskaar. The adoration and reverence pouring from his eyes spoke to her soul in a sense...

Yes, that unpleasant Mr Sengupta is surely going to get taken apart, piece by piece, by our hero! 😆 😆 It might be very painful for him, that's true!! 😉

SwaSan are such wonderful soulmates, that their innermost selves can converse without really needing words. Their smiles and eyes do the talking for them, as always with them. 😳

So super happy that you loved this, Nitzy my dear.
🤗🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara
Absolutely beautiful <3...
I loved how Kissan hummed her favourite songs, decorated the stage with tent theme.. You described their feelings beautifully..:) If Sahil didn't enter then, Swara may have remembered the confession.. Glad that he deciphered Sahil's real intentions.. I was imagining that expression of Sanskar..lol
My favourite part was when Swara smiled at him in the end..:)
Keep writing more...

Hey Tiara 🤗🤗🤗

Thanks a ton for your lovely comment dear, am so happy to hear that you loved this piece. Kissan certainly had a plan to help Swara regain her memories...after all, who better to make strategic plans than Sanskaar? So he went about trying to gently prod her mind to remembering all their beautiful moments together----using her favorite songs, setting up a model stage backdrop similar to the tent he'd set up when he proposed...

Yes, Swara was very close to remembering the magical proposal. Sahil did interrupt that moment, but I think some of those images stayed on in her subconscious. She was certainly willing, in the end, to accept the possibility that she may have been mistaken in judging Sanskaar so harshly. She could also see the intense and pure adoration for her, which was evident in Sanskaar's eyes.

Sanskaar's forbidding, menacing expression when his doubts about Sahil were confirmed 😆 😉--- I had a lot of fun imagining and writing that expression, too!

Thanks so much, dear!

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ishanita
viji it was very nice...sorry for very very short comment...yaar busy with to tons of bukz right now ...
...I so wanted to read what happened next so can u elaborate more after that night... as a part 2 ...or jus come up with a brand new story.

Hey Isha my dear 🤗🤗🤗

Please don't say Sorry yaar...It matters to me that you read and commented despite your work load. The length of the comment and word count never matters. I am so happy to hear that you loved this one.

Well, there isn't really a part 2 to this shot. But I've written a SanLak OS "Brothers in Arms", which could be treated as a sequel to this one. Do read that when you have time, and let me know your thoughts.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Lovely Viji, as usual! Thanks for the PM.

It is a balm to the soul to read this after watching an episode like the one yesterday!

Thanks so very much Shobhs 🤗🤗🤗

So happy to be back and interacting with you again. 😊 And very glad to hear that you found this a balm to your senses. That was a lovely compliment. 😳

Love ya!

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Viji is back and how 😆
Brilliant work yaar, pls write regularly, u should be jailed for writing 🤣 there should be a law
Sanskar feelings were so great, this is exactly how I want sanskar to realise sahil's intentions
I really don't want sanskar to be fooled by sahil.
Great work 👏 loved it and enjoyed reading it.

Hey Akanksha 🤗🤗🤗

So glad to be back, and to have these discussions with you, my dear.

BTW, what happened to your SwaSan FF? Is it on hold? I didn't get any PMs for next parts, and it seems to have been discontinued, is it?

Arre Baap re...Jailed for not writing? 😆 Please spare me yaar, I was not well and then had a lot of piled up work. 😆 Am back now, na...😉

I too, do not want Sanskaar to be taken in by Sahil. I want him to realize that Sahil is being duplicitous, and would love to see a strong, determined Sanskaar, literally taking Sahil apart! 😆

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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