SwaSan OS: 'The Sweet Scent of Petrichor'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: a_uma
wow.. that was fabulous.. .. hope to see this on screen... 👏

really missed you viji and your fab writing.. do take care of your health..

Hey Uma 🤗 🤗

I am doing much better now, thanks dear.

So very happy that you loved this OS. Well, I'm not sure if we'll see this on the serial but hope we see a canny, calculative and determined Sanskaar, taking Sahil apart! As well as a Swara who starts feeling that she could have ben mistaken about judging Sanskaar so harshly, and who starts getting flashes of the lovely moments they had shared. 😳

Lots of Love,

--Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Red.orchid
Beautiful os viji ⭐️
Thanks for pm 😊
We missed ur writtings

Thanks so very much dear 🤗 🤗

So very glad to hear that you like this.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Helee
hey...a beautiful os. 😳 you described each and every character so perfectly...swara's confusion ,sahil's obsession and sanskar's... well sanskar is not man with single emotion now is he...? but his each emotion comes across very easily. you have written it so beautifully...! I just loved the moment when sanskar becomes the person he was...and the end was not the end it was glimmer of hope. I just loved it. 😳btw I just love petrichor...😊

lots of love,
Helee.

Hey Helee 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton my dear. I am really so very happy to hear that you loved this piece. And it really made my day, to read your lovely words of appreciation and motivation about my writing.

Very true, Sanskaar is not a man of a single emotion. He has so much depth, so many intricate layers to his nature. Sanskaar is intrinsically a very good hearted man, but as we have seen, he behaves with people exactly how they interact with him. He would go out of his way to support and shield people whom he loves; but at the same time, if someone betrays him, tries to hurt him or the people he loves, he would literally take them apart piece by piece. This ability to fight fire with fire, makes him a very tantalizing and intriguing character.

I am deeply touched to hear that you loved my portrayal of Sanskaar in this OS. I consider that a very lovely compliment, as Sanskaar is such a fascinating and layered character.

And yes, the ending is at the stage when there is definitely a strong sense of hope, hope for a new beginning and a new life together for SwaSan. 😳

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..
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Nitzy my dear 🤗 🤗

Really touched by your lovely comment, I shall revert in detail tomorrow.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Hi Guys 🤗 🤗

I know I've not been able to complete my individual replies to all comments; I shall revert surely by tomorrow.

Really touched by all your amazing feedback.🤗 🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Hi Viji my dearest!!😊
Wonderful OS.👏 Was feeling really sad at Sanskar's condition.😭 But really loved him as Kissan, who is trying to help Swara remember.😉 But his efforts were ruined by Sahil.😭 Sahil has really become obsessive for Swara.😡 How can he think like that about someone else's wife?🤢 And the ending part between SwaSan was so beautiful.😊 Although Swara couldn't remember Sanskar now, but still she feels something for him inside her heart.😃😳 Plzz add another part to this OS, where Swara will remember everything and return back to Sanskar.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,🤗
Aheli.

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Wow that was very good. Sanskar's thought process and his desperation to make Swara recollect the love they shared was penned so well that I can literally feel the sadness, like how it can be felt while watching Varun portraying those emotions in a spectacular way.. Great OS... Keep writing.. 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM, Viji

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

On Mobile.. So will just be brief absolutely loved it Viji.. Such an awesome OS. I am happy to know you are back.. Hope to read much more from you.. Read the other one as well and it was amazing too... My favorite part was the last scene when Swara gave him that small smile.. I really loved it.. Hoping to see such scenes in the show.. Cv's plz listen to us and give us a nice track.

Love

Nita