SwaSan OS: 'The Sweet Scent of Petrichor' - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Viji...my friend

After a long interval Iam reading your story.i was super excited to read it.

As a fan of swasan it was a beautiful gift for us.

I always found a common factor in your stories.The nature will play a major role in it.The rain,wind etc are really interelated to our life.

The concept of story was beautiful.Sanskar's love for swara is eternal.his love for her never change.

In the story the thoughts of Sanskar was beautifully portrayed.sanskar is facing a biggest challenge in his life.because without Swara he is a lifeless body.his soul is far away from him.The pain of Sanskar was seen in all the words.

And for swara she lost her memory .she is in a shock.no one can convince her.the destiny played a cruel game.but Sanskar was not ready to loss his soul.he tried all the possible ways to regain her memory.for that he became kissan for her.

The love of swasan...it is eternal.a love that will never change.

The ray of hope is there.

Thanks for the this beautiful os

With lots of love

Shamina

Originally posted by: piccola1

Oh what a lovely little interlude, Viji..! 😃

Sheer delight to read. 👏

Thanks so very much, Pic. I always look forward to your comments so eagerly, you just made my day with this one. 🤗

The flashbacks of those much loved tent days😳, the blossoming trust and love ❤️...to the present day harsh realities...But then again the determined Sanskaar aka Kissan 😛doing all he can to jog his Swara's memory.⭐️ Rebuilding the evocative moments of togetherness with a finesse of perfect love !😳

Those tent days were among the best ever for SwaSan na? The gradually blossoming love and trust between them. The burgeoning feelings slowly being realized and accepted by Sanskaar; whilst still lying somewhat unacknowledged for Swara. 😳 Sanskaar is always a man of iron will and steely determination---as himself or as his Kissan avatar. 😉 He really does plan superbly, and in this case, his finesse in recreating those magical moments was masterly in its execution. Its Sunny Boy after all...

The near misses of Swara are beautiful..you are fuelling impatience 😕in us as much as Sanskaar's😆.

Haha...yeah I did want to show the process taking its time, some slips between the cup and the lip. Issues like this do take time to resolve...but Sanskaar/ Kissan is up for the challenge.

I loved that your Sanskaar catches out Saahil's malintent.😡.and the view to the sharp and smart Sanskaar of old ! How I wish for his return ...sigh.😃

My Sanskaar nahi--Our Sanskaar. 😉 😃 Oh, he is completely capable pf catching out Sahil's maleficent motives. And then, he would take that sod apart, piece by piece. 😆

But the best part ⭐️ was that moment between our golden couple..😳when he poured out his adoration for her in his look at her..and she returned it with a half smile 😊..oh to see it on screen !! A vivid imagination driven by your masterly script works wonders ...A perfect moment suspended in time !😳😳😳

Thanks yaar, Pic., these words really mean a lot to me. I felt both immensely humbled and simultaneously on top of the world, at these warm words of appreciation and motivation.

Do keep writing in, as much as you can, Viji..its sheer delight ..even if I have to repeat myself !

I hope to keep writing on SwaSan, of course. As much as I can. 😊

Love ya, 🤗 Pic.

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Amaizing..
So lovely.love it.
U writings r so awsm

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Unres page 2 😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow it was a awesome update

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Viji on IF after so so long

Loved the update

Thanks for the pm

Am so sorry am on a holiday so I just checked the pms

The network is too bad so can't give a detailed comment

Any ways it was beautiful as ever

I hope to see you more often

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Viji 🤗 So you are back to writing then. This track has brought back so many to the forum😳

Lanny 🤗 🤗

Yup, I am back 😆 😉 You're right, its uncanny how many of us are enthused to be back, though most of us are decidedly wary of the weird getup they are subjecting VK to. 😆 OMG, that dance...that wig...😕 😲

But kya kare, Sanskaar/ VK (and now Kissan 😆) is so crazily addictive, he's got us all hooked inspite of such ridiculousness. 😉

But jokes apart, I'm a bit wary of the upcoming track, as I think we discussed on your thread. If they go too close to the RNBDJ track, with Swara falling for/ developing feelings for Kissan, I would really feel 😭 💔

Petrichor is such a beautiful word...as beautiful as the smell of the rain soaked earth it describes. One of my favourite words of all time. It becomes all the more special as I wait for the rains in this mad heat here😭

Its not started raining in Mumbai yet is it? Its cool and fresh and rainy and refreshing here down south. 😳 😊

Kisan is yet to make an entry & he has already got everyone writing about him 😆😆 The song you selected, especially those lines are so perfect ❤️ And her 'almost remembering' but not quite...ahh very painful Sanskaar recreating all those beautiful memories was a good touch. Such slow & steady reminders are bound to have their effect on her mind more than any force can.

I am a major fan of Old Hindi film songs, as I remember we discussed on my "Music of the Soul" thread. The songs here are both absolute favorites of mine, and as for Manna Dey Saab and Lata Ji --I practically worship them. 😊

Yeah, I wanted to show some slips between the cup and the lip, as far as Swara's recovery of her memory was concerned. The process is bound to be a gradual, incremental one...sudden events triggering memory return for amnesiac patients are known, of course, but from what I've heard, those are unusual, not in the majority of cases. (I am not a Doc, this is based on discussions I've heard between Docs I know, so it could be wrong. 😛) And I agree with you completely, gentle persuasion through slow and steady reminders would work much better---especially when Sanskaar/ Kissan is so very worried about not causing Swara too much stress.

It pleased me no end to see cracks developing between the fabled fraanship of Swara & sahil🤢😈 but of course nothing can be more satisfying that Sanskaar finding a little sukoon towards the end when Swara smiles at him

Sahil is a block of banyan/ sal/ teak wood. Or perhaps we should remove teak from the list, since it happens to be a very valuable wood. 😆 😉 He needs to be chopped down by Sunny boy, pronto! I woiuld like to think Swara would be able to see through Sahil at some stage. She has partial amnesia, doesn't mean she has lost her brains! She would be able to sniff out all the signs of obsessive behavior he's showing (I hope!) 😊

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Di this was amazing lovely...no words to describe...u should continue this di...please

Originally posted by: Kiara.25

Hey viji🤗

Thank you for pm. Love the post. You described sanskar so well specially the part where he can judge people. Hope in serial i can see a same sanskar. Kissan is a so sweet.

Well hope your health is good. It was a treat to read something from you after long.

Take care

Love

Kiara

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hiya viji good to hear your better...

Wow what a piece...loved it...kissan her is amazing and sanskaars inner fears have been described beautifully...

Hey Razia sweetheart 🤗 🤗

So very glad to hear that you loved this piece. I was going all 😳 when I read that you found the portratyal of Sanskaar's emotions, and his actions disguised as Kissan, to be described very well. Thanks so much for that---it really made my day!

Loved the end were sanskaars once again became the dark knight we so loved in the serial the sharp guy that made up his mind that swara will always be his and sahil better watch out...

True, Sanskaar is a very straightforward and gentle towards people who behave in a similar fashion with him. He is intrinsically a very good hearted soul. But he has absolutely no qualms fighting fire with fire, and if someone plays dirty with him, or the people whom he loves, he would be ready to give it back with double the intensity! He truly is a resolute, courageous and determined character.

The dark shade in sahil character was real treat but for me the highlight has to be the restaging of the proposal what a apt way to bring swara back...so much pain and love could be felt there...

Again, I am so overjoyed to hear that you liked the idea of the restaging of his proposal. Kissan had devoutly hoped that Swara would regain her memories of that beautiful day, and it did seem that she was on the cusp of remembering. But then that obsessive Sahil interrupted them! 😡 🤢 But still, some hazy memories did seem to have registered in Swara's subconscious...which was why, she slowly began to realize that she may have misjudged Sanskaar.

Seriously..If you get time please write a sequel to this to how sanskaar defeats his enemy once again...

I'll surely try, Razia. Its on my bucket list...I hope to be able to get down to it soon.

Thanks for pm..

Raz