Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05) - Page 5

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Hook - "I was thinking about you, and like always you called."

Line - Ragini was nothing without her instincts

Sinker - "Will you be my double agent Ragini?

@Bold; This made me go all😳😳☺️
Sakura,

Hi V,😊

I am totally, completely and utterly hooked to this SS now (and to think this was just the prologue). I had (almost) forgotten how much I love your writing. 😛

Thank you so much dear. I was really nervous as I think you might realize first person writing is completely alien to me. I prefer third person😳

I have been waiting so desperately for one of you fabulous writers to write something short on this memory loss track. Thank you so very much. 😊

I couldn't wait to write this to be honest, ever since I discussed that cake theory in Viji's thread. 😊 You're welcome dear😳

Waiting eagerly for the rest. 😊

Love,

V

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊

Shall un res sometime in between the organized chaos of my cousin's wedding, time permitting. 😊 Else as soon as I'm back.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Packing are you?😉

Please take all the time you need Viji dearest. I can wait. I seriously hope this was up to your expectations...I am very nervous about it😊

Love,

Saku

Originally posted by: Sakura24

HI Sanya,

It's been a long time since we last interacted😊 Good to see you!

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

You got me there. 😆 I'm reading updates on the phone while pretending to pack. 😉 Well, I've packed my daughter's stuff already. 😊 Now to put in my clothes...I've already selected what I'm wearing, so that's something. 😆 Hubby is packing his stuff, so that's a relief. 😊

Don't be nervous...the prologue has come out well. The SanGini Jeth--Devrani bond is nice, a throwback to the dupatte wali dost days, this time without the attendant negative plotting.

A nice, solid track for Ragini, in addition to Sanskaar and Swara's track of finding their way back together, would be just awesome!

Love you loads

Viji

Beautiful starting. ...Please update soon.

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Ya long time I was on hybernation 😆 me too missed our discussions on stories

It is just the beginning but I am already loving it so very much every track will be so different if you write it with your touch I wish you were the writer of the show then it would have been a unique show

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Beautiful starting. ...Please update soon.

hey sakura,

just read the prologue...its very interesting...far better than the show.. 😳

conflict between swara' s heart and mind and sanskar resolve to win swara back... these were the only things i wanted to see in this track...now I can enjoy it here. so thank you😊

I m in love with the each character you introduced in the prologue even with the ragini's...she is so fascinating in your story...!

loved it. 😊 can't wait for the next chapter.

lots of love,
Helee.

Hey sakura,